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Name: Shinra Azuha
Nickname/Alias: Shin/Azu-chi
Gender: Female
Age and date of birth: (14) 15 - 01 - 462
Age Appearance: 12-15 (Young - Teen Appearance)
16-17+ (Late Teen/Older Appearance)
Sexuality: Heterosexual
Parents:
Samaro Azuha - Father (Deceased)
Shina Azuha - Mother (Alive)
Akira Azuha - Older Brother (Alive)
Length and build
5''5 - Slim Build (Genin Appearance) 5''8 - Slim Build (Chūnin/Jounin Appearance)
Weight
115 LBS (Genin Appearance) 154 LBS (Chūnin/Jounin Appearance)
Favorite weather and season
Sunny - Spring
Village: Amegakure
Birthplace: Amegakure
Organization:
The Head Branch
Clan/Bloodline: Azuha
Rank: Genin
Chakra Nature: Wind
Appearance:
Personality:
Shinra is definetely not a calm person. She is always on the move, and can be quite hyper. She is very cheerful and has a lightened attitude. She can also be a big talker, and sometime she never stops until she realizes that no one is actually paying attention. She is a confident person, and can from time to time, show it to people. She is not afraid from taking any risks. She is quite protective over her friends and those that are close to her. She is a sophisticated person.
History:
Shinra Azuha, born into the Head Branch, as the second child of Shina and Samaro Azuha. She was born into a very unique and prosperous clan in Amegakure, the Azuha's. Once the successor to the clan was born, a great festival was held in her name, especially in the Head Branch. Her older brother, Akira Azuha spoiled her as she grew up. Even with the expectations the clan members had from her, she utterly disappointed them as she grew up. Both Shina and her brother, Akira had an affinity for Wind as their first element. As she grew up, she was quite hyper, and somewhat tomboy-ish in the way she acted. She pulled pranks on her parents, and was overly protected by Akira.
Her mother, Shina, was never angry at her children, nor did Shinra know what was in store for her, or what she had to become once she was older. She adored her father, who always made her sleep with a song, or even if he hummed. Akira was, however more into training and becoming the better man suited for the Azuha Clan. A few years later, once she was at the age of six, her father had died. According to the information, it was poison that had killed her father.
The full extent of the information behind the death was never actually discovered, but her mother, Shina was quite suspicious. However, since Shinra was just a child, she eventually got used to living without a father, as her brother took his place instead. The toll of her fathers absence was hard on Shinra, but when years passed by, she got used to it. A few years before she joined the Academy, she became her usual self. The cheerful, but feisty Shinra. It was a good sign for her mother and her older brother.
However, her tomboy-ish side had disappeared, and she had grown into quite the teen throughout her Academy years. She resembled her mother more and more. She never really cared for the internal tension between the three branches within the Azuha clan, nor did she feel like she wanted to become the next clan leader. She wanted to carve her own path. After she passed the Academy with normal grades, she was finally assigned into a team. She wanted to explore, utilize her own skills, develop new techniques and become a strong Kunoichi through her own way.
Theme Song:
(Either a link or a video, optional though)
Weapons/Items
Skills/Abilities
Weak Kenjutsu
Weak Sensory
Normal Ninjutsu
Average Taijutsu
Average Genjutsu
Weak Medical Ninjutsu
Good Agility/Speed
Average Strength
Normal Chakra Pool
Special Traits
Good Chakra Control/Concentration
Hidden Chakra Techniques
Good Focus/Perception
Has Skyblue Eyes (While focusing, the iris changes to the shape of a Snakes/Fox)
Kekkei Genkai:
Name of Kekkei Genkai: Tendōgan (Heavens Eye)
Clan: Azuha
Description:
In some point of views, the ability to perceive your surroundings, to even the smallest detail, could be seen as an eye technique. Since only the Azuha Clan possesses such eyes, it has been branded as a Kekkei Genkai. The color of the eyes also significantly impacts the body of a Shinobi within the clan and their position. The strongest are the ones with skyblue eyes, since in general, the body of an Azuha Clan member is mostly compatible with it, which also represents the element, Wind. Despite that, the color of the eyes can vary from Blue to even Red.
This technique allows the user to have an overview of their surroundings, and able to catch even the smallest detail. As an Azuha member grows, so does the eyes. They become stronger by the years, and are at its peak when you reach a certain age. Mostly in your mid-twenties. Sheer training is also a plus in bettering the eyes. The eyes are heavily connected to the chakra system and your mind. If a member of the Azuha clan has green eyes, then their chakra system is weaker than to that of one possessing the skyblue eyes.
Only the members who possesses the skyblue version of the Tendōgan can reach its true potential. If a member who doesn't possess the skyblue eyes, but green, or even red instead, and the member tries to reach the true potential of the Tendōgan, their body will take a toll. They will easily be fatigued. Their endurance will drop. Their chakra points will be weakened. However the member will be able to possess the true potential of the eyes for a very small but limited time. Resting your body and your eyes will be the priority to reach your regular strength. The more you use this, the damage to the body will be permanent, and the eyes cant be used as they normally could.
Jutsu
Chakra Nature: Wind
Appearance:
Personality:
Shinra is definetely not a calm person. She is always on the move, and can be quite hyper. She is very cheerful and has a lightened attitude. She can also be a big talker, and sometime she never stops until she realizes that no one is actually paying attention. She is a confident person, and can from time to time, show it to people. She is not afraid from taking any risks. She is quite protective over her friends and those that are close to her. She is a sophisticated person.
History:
Shinra Azuha, born into the Head Branch, as the second child of Shina and Samaro Azuha. She was born into a very unique and prosperous clan in Amegakure, the Azuha's. Once the successor to the clan was born, a great festival was held in her name, especially in the Head Branch. Her older brother, Akira Azuha spoiled her as she grew up. Even with the expectations the clan members had from her, she utterly disappointed them as she grew up. Both Shina and her brother, Akira had an affinity for Wind as their first element. As she grew up, she was quite hyper, and somewhat tomboy-ish in the way she acted. She pulled pranks on her parents, and was overly protected by Akira.
Her mother, Shina, was never angry at her children, nor did Shinra know what was in store for her, or what she had to become once she was older. She adored her father, who always made her sleep with a song, or even if he hummed. Akira was, however more into training and becoming the better man suited for the Azuha Clan. A few years later, once she was at the age of six, her father had died. According to the information, it was poison that had killed her father.
The full extent of the information behind the death was never actually discovered, but her mother, Shina was quite suspicious. However, since Shinra was just a child, she eventually got used to living without a father, as her brother took his place instead. The toll of her fathers absence was hard on Shinra, but when years passed by, she got used to it. A few years before she joined the Academy, she became her usual self. The cheerful, but feisty Shinra. It was a good sign for her mother and her older brother.
However, her tomboy-ish side had disappeared, and she had grown into quite the teen throughout her Academy years. She resembled her mother more and more. She never really cared for the internal tension between the three branches within the Azuha clan, nor did she feel like she wanted to become the next clan leader. She wanted to carve her own path. After she passed the Academy with normal grades, she was finally assigned into a team. She wanted to explore, utilize her own skills, develop new techniques and become a strong Kunoichi through her own way.
Theme Song:
(Either a link or a video, optional though)
Weapons/Items
Name of Weapon or Item:
Kunai - Shuriken - Wires - Flash, Tag, Smoke Bombs.
Description:
Basic Shinobi equipment/tools.
Kunai - Shuriken - Wires - Flash, Tag, Smoke Bombs.
Description:
Basic Shinobi equipment/tools.
Skills/Abilities
Weak Kenjutsu
Weak Sensory
Normal Ninjutsu
Average Taijutsu
Average Genjutsu
Weak Medical Ninjutsu
Good Agility/Speed
Average Strength
Normal Chakra Pool
Special Traits
Good Chakra Control/Concentration
Hidden Chakra Techniques
Good Focus/Perception
Has Skyblue Eyes (While focusing, the iris changes to the shape of a Snakes/Fox)
Kekkei Genkai:
Name of Kekkei Genkai: Tendōgan (Heavens Eye)
Clan: Azuha
Description:
In some point of views, the ability to perceive your surroundings, to even the smallest detail, could be seen as an eye technique. Since only the Azuha Clan possesses such eyes, it has been branded as a Kekkei Genkai. The color of the eyes also significantly impacts the body of a Shinobi within the clan and their position. The strongest are the ones with skyblue eyes, since in general, the body of an Azuha Clan member is mostly compatible with it, which also represents the element, Wind. Despite that, the color of the eyes can vary from Blue to even Red.
This technique allows the user to have an overview of their surroundings, and able to catch even the smallest detail. As an Azuha member grows, so does the eyes. They become stronger by the years, and are at its peak when you reach a certain age. Mostly in your mid-twenties. Sheer training is also a plus in bettering the eyes. The eyes are heavily connected to the chakra system and your mind. If a member of the Azuha clan has green eyes, then their chakra system is weaker than to that of one possessing the skyblue eyes.
Only the members who possesses the skyblue version of the Tendōgan can reach its true potential. If a member who doesn't possess the skyblue eyes, but green, or even red instead, and the member tries to reach the true potential of the Tendōgan, their body will take a toll. They will easily be fatigued. Their endurance will drop. Their chakra points will be weakened. However the member will be able to possess the true potential of the eyes for a very small but limited time. Resting your body and your eyes will be the priority to reach your regular strength. The more you use this, the damage to the body will be permanent, and the eyes cant be used as they normally could.
Jutsu
Custom Jutsu
Name of Technique: Wind Release: Great Windball
Type of Jutsu: Offensive - Hidden
Rank: D
Range: Ranged
Nature Type: Wind - Chakra Energy
Handseals: Tiger → Monkey → Bird → Dragon → Snake → Bird
Description:
It is a technique developed within the Azuha clan and can almost date back to the founding of Amegakure. Since the Azuha excel in chakra control, they are able to utilize their wind element by combining it with their chakra in order to create a Windball. Just like the Uchiha, this is a technique that every member of the Head Branch must know, and is basically like a signature move. It is, however not hard to learn, and is basically the first hidden technique you must master. Though this refers to members that are born with the element, Wind. If the technique makes contact with anything solid, like a wall, or an enemy, it will explode on impact, or more like a blast. The enemy will sustain minor injuries unless its blocked, somehow. However, the shock and the explosion will push the enemy away, like how an explosion does if you're close to it. It is basically like the Great Fireball technique which is utilized by the Uchiha's.
Weakness:
Fire - Earth - Water - Long Range Techniques.
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Name of Technique: Chakra Shield
Type of Jutsu: Supportive - Defensive - Hidden
Rank: D
Range: Self - Others
Nature Type: Chakra Energy
Handseals: Clap → Release
Description:
A simple but hidden technique that allows one member to control and focus their chakra into their hands. Though one has to keep their hands clasped to collect enough energy before release. Once its done, a shield made out of chakra will manifest, but only for a brief moment. It stays for a few seconds before dispersing. It can, however, deflect, block or repel anything thats physical. May it be ranged or not. You can, however, not move with the shield around. It is suggested in the Azuha clan that one has to use it when the moment is right. The less energy you collect, the faster it manifests, but the weaker it is.
Weakness:
Genjutsu - Techniques From Multiple Directions.
Type of Jutsu: Offensive - Hidden
Rank: D
Range: Ranged
Nature Type: Wind - Chakra Energy
Handseals: Tiger → Monkey → Bird → Dragon → Snake → Bird
Description:
It is a technique developed within the Azuha clan and can almost date back to the founding of Amegakure. Since the Azuha excel in chakra control, they are able to utilize their wind element by combining it with their chakra in order to create a Windball. Just like the Uchiha, this is a technique that every member of the Head Branch must know, and is basically like a signature move. It is, however not hard to learn, and is basically the first hidden technique you must master. Though this refers to members that are born with the element, Wind. If the technique makes contact with anything solid, like a wall, or an enemy, it will explode on impact, or more like a blast. The enemy will sustain minor injuries unless its blocked, somehow. However, the shock and the explosion will push the enemy away, like how an explosion does if you're close to it. It is basically like the Great Fireball technique which is utilized by the Uchiha's.
Weakness:
Fire - Earth - Water - Long Range Techniques.
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Name of Technique: Chakra Shield
Type of Jutsu: Supportive - Defensive - Hidden
Rank: D
Range: Self - Others
Nature Type: Chakra Energy
Handseals: Clap → Release
Description:
A simple but hidden technique that allows one member to control and focus their chakra into their hands. Though one has to keep their hands clasped to collect enough energy before release. Once its done, a shield made out of chakra will manifest, but only for a brief moment. It stays for a few seconds before dispersing. It can, however, deflect, block or repel anything thats physical. May it be ranged or not. You can, however, not move with the shield around. It is suggested in the Azuha clan that one has to use it when the moment is right. The less energy you collect, the faster it manifests, but the weaker it is.
Weakness:
Genjutsu - Techniques From Multiple Directions.
Summons
Name: Tompa
Species: Birds - Canary
Age: Unknown
Size: Small
Unique Traits: Flight - Speed - Birds Overview.
Jutsu: Summoning Jutsu
History:
Like most of the members in the Azuha Clan, Shinra also took a liking to birds in general. She has had birds, especially a dark blue/blue canary as its companion. It is basically an important friend to her. But since she grew up with almost no friends of the same age, in the Azuha residence, she spent most of her younger years as a child with the birds. Creating a bond with them, especially the canary.
Species: Birds - Canary
Age: Unknown
Size: Small
Unique Traits: Flight - Speed - Birds Overview.
Jutsu: Summoning Jutsu
History:
Like most of the members in the Azuha Clan, Shinra also took a liking to birds in general. She has had birds, especially a dark blue/blue canary as its companion. It is basically an important friend to her. But since she grew up with almost no friends of the same age, in the Azuha residence, she spent most of her younger years as a child with the birds. Creating a bond with them, especially the canary.
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Looks better now. I do hoped to see that you would use the weapon information/description like it is present in the CS sheet. Other than that I'm a bit iffy about the techniques, due the fact I kind of consider False Acceleration Jutsu, more C ranked than D ranked. But I will give you a try, in return that you will let the level of the strength be played out in the IC as D ranked techniques. (meaning that that they aren't hard to break for those who have some experience IC wise with recognizing genjutsu etc)
Approved.
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I do see no traits. Aren't there any traits that he has or need some help with them?
Let me know on skype.
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Good CS, but I do want to request to remove either the Petal Dance or the double surrounding genjutsu as I consider both C ranked techniques. Meaning you have one too many. See to that and I can accept the CS.
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I must say now in advance that there isn't really a chuunin or jounin appearance. In fact, there are some who are kind of younger than your character and managed to become or are chuunin. So there isn't really an age that would make one look really a chuunin/jounin, other than the respective flak jackets that are given when one reaches the chuunin rank. (even more with the shinobi of the Akinian Empire, who have some straps etc. on their jackets to furthermore show who is what kind of rank.)
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Fully transferred Niji, now here's Kumoga in case guild drops again.
Name: Kumogatarui Dobustu
Nickname/Alias: Eight-legs
Gender: Female
Age and date of birth: 15 ---- 5th July 461
Age Appearance: 15, maybe a bit younger
Sexuality: Undecided
Parents: Sasori Dobutsu (father), Cho Dobutsu (mother)
Length and build Lithe build, approx 4 foot and three inches tall/ 1.3 metres tall
Weight 64 lbs / 29 kg approx
Favorite weather and season A moderately warm autumn morning, when the dew is freshest!
Village: Kirigakure
Birthplace: Roaming clan (explained in history)
Organization: N/A
Clan/Bloodline: Dobutsu Clan
Rank: Genin
Chakra Nature: Water
Appearance:
Personality: Generally timid and tries to keep to herself, Kumogatarui will more likely than not just agree with someone far sooner than objecting to their ideas or opinions despite how strongly she may be against it due to an aversion to aggression. Even considering her lack of will towards aggression, Kumogatarui will dedicate herself to trying to be of use to those she's working with, be it through a support role or merely just the act of being there and being able to assist.
Socially awkward is another way to describe her, as most attempts to conduct conversation will end up either falling flat or turning to how she easily recognises with spiders. The latter option proving to be a thing that will cause for her to be avoided by others naturally anyway, because who would be friends with a creepy spider girl? At least that's how she views it, thinking that people would avoid her for her fascination with the eight-legged creatures that haunt the corners of abandoned houses like a bad smell, were she someone else she wouldn't that's for sure.
So it's safe to say some form of positive attention from others would make things worse for her, inciting paranoia that they had no real intention to be friends and merely wanted to find a way to embarrass her even if it's not the case, which causes her to become distant and quiet once more.
She is also petrified by a particular style of webbing used by an ex-member of her clan. But she adores spiders of all kinds, as well as sweets, she really loves sweet treats.
Theme Song:
Weapons/Items:
Skills/Abilities
All members of the Dobutsu clan boast similar physical traits, such as admirable agility, reflexes and stamina as well as a higher ability to perceive things that normally go unnoticed, unfortunately they also possess a weak pool of chakra, as using but a few chakra-intensive techniques will quickly exhaust them. It is possible to replenish their chakra rapidly with their fangs, but it requires a technique unique to the clan, yet taught only to those who would make the best use of such a technique, thus mostly being chuunin or jounin-rank shinobi whom have knowledge of the technique.
The clan members normally also lack in physical strength as well as resistance to damage, which means that extended battles that are purely of exchanging blows will put them out very fast.
And Kumogatarui possesses all these typical traits, meaning she's agile, but will crumple like a leaf and fail if she's caught in heavy physical conflict or uses chakra-intensive techniques.
Special Traits
Bodily modifications to allow for venom-use and web spinning
Not sure if this counts, but she has a beautiful singing voice.
Kekkei Genkai:
Name of Kekkei Genkai: Hachigan
Clan: Dobutsu
Description: A clan dojutsu that is considered to be a rare occurrence in the more modern times due to the very low number of Dobutsu clan members, it is prized for it's enhanced visionary abilities and comes in three stages (four if you count the inert stage).
Inert: No abilities, eyes like a normal person.
Stage 1: Dual-pupils in each eye. User gains the ability to see the vibrations in the air, along with very minor chakra sight (For example faintly making out sources and signatures of chakra that most other dojutsu clearly see.) and an increase in how far the user can see. User must change between vibration and chakra vision.
Stage 2: Three pupils per eye. Both sets of vision are enhanced, allowing for better definition of vibrations and chakra seen, user gains natural night-vision at this point. (Chakra sight is now more prominent, allowing for a better perception of chakra within people and objects imbued with chakra.)
Stage 3: Four pupils per eye. Flawless transition between chakra and vibration sight with chakra vision only just being comparable to that of a major dojutsu's initial chakra vision, where they can perceive the chakra sources and signatures with ease compared to the dojutsu's initial stages where more effort was required to define chakra and their sources.
Night-vision is highly adaptive, allowing for clear sight despite quick transitions between light and dark.
Jutsu:
Custom Jutsu
Summons
Name: Kumogatarui Dobustu
Nickname/Alias: Eight-legs
Gender: Female
Age and date of birth: 15 ---- 5th July 461
Age Appearance: 15, maybe a bit younger
Sexuality: Undecided
Parents: Sasori Dobutsu (father), Cho Dobutsu (mother)
Length and build Lithe build, approx 4 foot and three inches tall/ 1.3 metres tall
Weight 64 lbs / 29 kg approx
Favorite weather and season A moderately warm autumn morning, when the dew is freshest!
Village: Kirigakure
Birthplace: Roaming clan (explained in history)
Organization: N/A
Clan/Bloodline: Dobutsu Clan
Rank: Genin
Chakra Nature: Water
Appearance:
Personality: Generally timid and tries to keep to herself, Kumogatarui will more likely than not just agree with someone far sooner than objecting to their ideas or opinions despite how strongly she may be against it due to an aversion to aggression. Even considering her lack of will towards aggression, Kumogatarui will dedicate herself to trying to be of use to those she's working with, be it through a support role or merely just the act of being there and being able to assist.
Socially awkward is another way to describe her, as most attempts to conduct conversation will end up either falling flat or turning to how she easily recognises with spiders. The latter option proving to be a thing that will cause for her to be avoided by others naturally anyway, because who would be friends with a creepy spider girl? At least that's how she views it, thinking that people would avoid her for her fascination with the eight-legged creatures that haunt the corners of abandoned houses like a bad smell, were she someone else she wouldn't that's for sure.
So it's safe to say some form of positive attention from others would make things worse for her, inciting paranoia that they had no real intention to be friends and merely wanted to find a way to embarrass her even if it's not the case, which causes her to become distant and quiet once more.
She is also petrified by a particular style of webbing used by an ex-member of her clan. But she adores spiders of all kinds, as well as sweets, she really loves sweet treats.
History: Kumogatarui's clan was originally a roaming clan, travelling from land to land with a mass of caravans and portable homes that they used to trade from and take on any missions that the villages and their kages didn't want associated with their own shinobi. Whilst it wasn't a savoury method to keep them in money, the Dobutsu clan could do it without too much trouble, having no true affiliation meant only interrogation would identify the village they worked for... So long as they were caught.
Normally when a child is born into the clan they are raised within the caravans, taught and trained in arts and tricks that they would need for the life of a gypsy shinobi. But a few are removed from the clan's caravans and their parents decide to settle down within a household in a villager, essentially aligning themselves with said village upon moving in and starting a fresh life for their child. Kumogatarui's parents were just that sort of couple, moving to Kirigakure to occupy a house there and raise their daughter in a safer environment. As well as admitting her to an established shinobi academy to give her "proper" training in the shinobi arts.
Through her younger years, Kumogatarui learnt well and was a fully established genin, ready to be sent on little missions with fellow genin and a jounin sensei. Now, like how most clans have exiles from their own for certain reasons, the Dobutsu clan had their own exiled members whom simply hungered for the clan's little-known dojutsu, which at it's final stage, pretty much gives them the eight-eyed appearance of the clan's favoured species, the arachnid. One of those very exiles took it upon themselves to prey upon younger members of the clan and kidnap them to try and induce the dojutsu so they could take it for themselves, in favour of trying to target the older, stronger clan members.
Unfortunately whilst on a mission with her squad, Kumogatarui was snatched away by a web-trap left by this shinobi, who carried her away and subjected her to some good ol' torture, assuming that great emotional stress would cause it to surge up... To which the theory came to be fact, the girl's continual torture forcing her to awaken her Hachigan. The success of the exile prompted him to begin with the procedure of removing each of her eyes, whilst only needing one he desired both of them, because why not?
Successfully the first one was removed and he stored it away for re-attachment later. As he began on working to take her other eye the rest of her team managed to track down where she'd been taken and stopped him before he could finish. The end result was that he got away with the eye he'd already taken and whilst Kumogatarui got to live past it, she was traumatised by the experience and (understandably) withdrew from her team and being a kunoichi altogether.
It took years from when she left to build up the courage to try again, coddled by her parents since she came back and watched out for tirelessly, but despite that she decided to try again. Perhaps a few successes would boost her confidence, but she was a genin once more, now just awaiting a team to be part of... Silently. In the corner. Maybe where no one would pay attention to her until it was time for them to go. With knowledge of a few of the clan's spider-based techniques, she would no doubt be able to find a use for herself somewhere.
Normally when a child is born into the clan they are raised within the caravans, taught and trained in arts and tricks that they would need for the life of a gypsy shinobi. But a few are removed from the clan's caravans and their parents decide to settle down within a household in a villager, essentially aligning themselves with said village upon moving in and starting a fresh life for their child. Kumogatarui's parents were just that sort of couple, moving to Kirigakure to occupy a house there and raise their daughter in a safer environment. As well as admitting her to an established shinobi academy to give her "proper" training in the shinobi arts.
Through her younger years, Kumogatarui learnt well and was a fully established genin, ready to be sent on little missions with fellow genin and a jounin sensei. Now, like how most clans have exiles from their own for certain reasons, the Dobutsu clan had their own exiled members whom simply hungered for the clan's little-known dojutsu, which at it's final stage, pretty much gives them the eight-eyed appearance of the clan's favoured species, the arachnid. One of those very exiles took it upon themselves to prey upon younger members of the clan and kidnap them to try and induce the dojutsu so they could take it for themselves, in favour of trying to target the older, stronger clan members.
Unfortunately whilst on a mission with her squad, Kumogatarui was snatched away by a web-trap left by this shinobi, who carried her away and subjected her to some good ol' torture, assuming that great emotional stress would cause it to surge up... To which the theory came to be fact, the girl's continual torture forcing her to awaken her Hachigan. The success of the exile prompted him to begin with the procedure of removing each of her eyes, whilst only needing one he desired both of them, because why not?
Successfully the first one was removed and he stored it away for re-attachment later. As he began on working to take her other eye the rest of her team managed to track down where she'd been taken and stopped him before he could finish. The end result was that he got away with the eye he'd already taken and whilst Kumogatarui got to live past it, she was traumatised by the experience and (understandably) withdrew from her team and being a kunoichi altogether.
It took years from when she left to build up the courage to try again, coddled by her parents since she came back and watched out for tirelessly, but despite that she decided to try again. Perhaps a few successes would boost her confidence, but she was a genin once more, now just awaiting a team to be part of... Silently. In the corner. Maybe where no one would pay attention to her until it was time for them to go. With knowledge of a few of the clan's spider-based techniques, she would no doubt be able to find a use for herself somewhere.
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Weapons/Items:
Name of Weapon or Item: Kunai x 4
Description: Normal ninja kunai
Appearance: Same as normal kunai.
Name of Weapon or Item: Smoke tags x15
Description: Tags that release smoke upon activation
Appearance: n/a
Name of Weapon or Item: Fangs (Lemme know if this is okay or not)
Description: Due to dental modification and the addition of venom glands, Kumogatarui can poison enemies with a bite, these fangs serve a dual purpose in jutsu-usage.
The venom in the glands causes drowsiness and nausea, but unless manipulated with chakra at a cost, will only have up to three uses per hour.
Appearance: Slightly extended canines, similar to a vampire's.
Name of Weapon or Item: Web Spinnerets x 11
Description: These are another bodily modification to members of the Dobutsu clan, allowing for accelerated use of their webbing at the cost of an increased chakra expenditure. There is one for each finger to allow for complex weaving of webbing and one at the base of her spine. These spinnerets can be slowly massaged with chakra for a more careful use of the webbing, costing only a meagre amount of chakra to use.
Appearance: Small, only just noticeable holes on the tips of her fingers and one on the base of her spine.
Description: Normal ninja kunai
Appearance: Same as normal kunai.
Name of Weapon or Item: Smoke tags x15
Description: Tags that release smoke upon activation
Appearance: n/a
Name of Weapon or Item: Fangs (Lemme know if this is okay or not)
Description: Due to dental modification and the addition of venom glands, Kumogatarui can poison enemies with a bite, these fangs serve a dual purpose in jutsu-usage.
The venom in the glands causes drowsiness and nausea, but unless manipulated with chakra at a cost, will only have up to three uses per hour.
Appearance: Slightly extended canines, similar to a vampire's.
Name of Weapon or Item: Web Spinnerets x 11
Description: These are another bodily modification to members of the Dobutsu clan, allowing for accelerated use of their webbing at the cost of an increased chakra expenditure. There is one for each finger to allow for complex weaving of webbing and one at the base of her spine. These spinnerets can be slowly massaged with chakra for a more careful use of the webbing, costing only a meagre amount of chakra to use.
Appearance: Small, only just noticeable holes on the tips of her fingers and one on the base of her spine.
Skills/Abilities
All members of the Dobutsu clan boast similar physical traits, such as admirable agility, reflexes and stamina as well as a higher ability to perceive things that normally go unnoticed, unfortunately they also possess a weak pool of chakra, as using but a few chakra-intensive techniques will quickly exhaust them. It is possible to replenish their chakra rapidly with their fangs, but it requires a technique unique to the clan, yet taught only to those who would make the best use of such a technique, thus mostly being chuunin or jounin-rank shinobi whom have knowledge of the technique.
The clan members normally also lack in physical strength as well as resistance to damage, which means that extended battles that are purely of exchanging blows will put them out very fast.
And Kumogatarui possesses all these typical traits, meaning she's agile, but will crumple like a leaf and fail if she's caught in heavy physical conflict or uses chakra-intensive techniques.
Special Traits
Bodily modifications to allow for venom-use and web spinning
Not sure if this counts, but she has a beautiful singing voice.
Kekkei Genkai:
Name of Kekkei Genkai: Hachigan
Clan: Dobutsu
Description: A clan dojutsu that is considered to be a rare occurrence in the more modern times due to the very low number of Dobutsu clan members, it is prized for it's enhanced visionary abilities and comes in three stages (four if you count the inert stage).
Inert: No abilities, eyes like a normal person.
Stage 1: Dual-pupils in each eye. User gains the ability to see the vibrations in the air, along with very minor chakra sight (For example faintly making out sources and signatures of chakra that most other dojutsu clearly see.) and an increase in how far the user can see. User must change between vibration and chakra vision.
Stage 2: Three pupils per eye. Both sets of vision are enhanced, allowing for better definition of vibrations and chakra seen, user gains natural night-vision at this point. (Chakra sight is now more prominent, allowing for a better perception of chakra within people and objects imbued with chakra.)
Stage 3: Four pupils per eye. Flawless transition between chakra and vibration sight with chakra vision only just being comparable to that of a major dojutsu's initial chakra vision, where they can perceive the chakra sources and signatures with ease compared to the dojutsu's initial stages where more effort was required to define chakra and their sources.
Night-vision is highly adaptive, allowing for clear sight despite quick transitions between light and dark.
Jutsu:
(Unsure what the spider web jutsus are classed as rank-wise here, but Water Clone is a C rank)
Spider Web Area
Spider Cocoon
Spider Web Flower
Water Clone Technique
Spider Web Area
Spider Cocoon
Spider Web Flower
Water Clone Technique
Custom Jutsu
Name of Technique: Arachind Grip
Type of Jutsu: Ninjutsu
Rank: E
Range: Self
Nature Type: N/A
Handseals:
Description: Makes one's own body hairs to act like a spider's, greatly improving the user's ability to grip things as well as climbing with greater ease.
Weakness: Fire techniques will burn away the hairs and wet or slippery surfaces are still difficult to maintain a grip on.
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Type of Jutsu: Ninjutsu
Rank: E
Range: Self
Nature Type: N/A
Handseals:
Description: Makes one's own body hairs to act like a spider's, greatly improving the user's ability to grip things as well as climbing with greater ease.
Weakness: Fire techniques will burn away the hairs and wet or slippery surfaces are still difficult to maintain a grip on.
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Summons
Name: Wolf Spiders
Species: Spider
Age: n/a
Size: Small
Unique Traits: Fast and easy to miss, also possess a venom that causes swelling, pain and itching.
Jutsu: none
History: Kumogatarui has a lot of these spiders at home, having taken to them as her own personal favourite, has these spiders summon-able at her beck and call for distraction purposes. She prefers to summon only a few at a time, if not just one.
Species: Spider
Age: n/a
Size: Small
Unique Traits: Fast and easy to miss, also possess a venom that causes swelling, pain and itching.
Jutsu: none
History: Kumogatarui has a lot of these spiders at home, having taken to them as her own personal favourite, has these spiders summon-able at her beck and call for distraction purposes. She prefers to summon only a few at a time, if not just one.
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Alright, strap in yourselves and hold on for dear life. Reviews are here.
@Expllo
I see that you removed the technique Gero mentioned, but you still gave me a lot of thinking about it. But that is okay, I like to think before making decisions. I approve with my stamp.
@Ganryu
Alright, this was a bit difficult too. Despite all the thinking, the character is acceptable by me, and so I am doing it. Accepted.
Since this is your second acceptance, post him into the bin. And if you could, please, take a look at the coding :)
In case I missed a sheet, please post again with the link to it - you will make the review process a lot smoother and faster! ;)
@Expllo
I see that you removed the technique Gero mentioned, but you still gave me a lot of thinking about it. But that is okay, I like to think before making decisions. I approve with my stamp.
@Ganryu
Alright, this was a bit difficult too. Despite all the thinking, the character is acceptable by me, and so I am doing it. Accepted.
Since this is your second acceptance, post him into the bin. And if you could, please, take a look at the coding :)
In case I missed a sheet, please post again with the link to it - you will make the review process a lot smoother and faster! ;)
J
Jhuton
Guest
Just need a second approval for my C.S before I can start
Name: Akihiko Ken
Gender: Male
Age and date of birth: 12, 12/10/464
Age Appearance: 13
Sexuality: Asexual
Parents: Akio Ken|Father|Deceased. Anaki Ken|Mother|Dead.
Length and build: 5'4, skinny.
Weight: 100 lbs
Favorite weather and season: Overcast. Winter
Village: Amegakure
Birthplace: Amegakure
Organization: N/A
Clan/Bloodline: Ito Clan
Rank: D - Genin
Chakra Nature: Earth
History: For the most part, Akihiko's family members were more swordsmen than shinobi. They valued the path of the sword and so he learned swordsmanship from early on. His clan was one of the most privileged in his village but they were also one of the most mysterious and so knowledge of their existence was limited to close by clans. This was as the family wanted to keep their swordsmanship skills exclusive and not share with them with other clans. Naturally, Akihiko grew up with an affinity to swordsmanship and mysterious behaviour, but he was constantly depressed and longed for a chance to gain more power and have more of an adventurous life. He hoped that he could escape the shell that was his family and make a name for himself, not as a swordsman, but as a shinobi.
At the tender age of 9 years old, the majority of his family was murdered, including his mother and father. The perpetrator of these murders were never discovered but their was strong suspicion that it was another jealous clan who did it in an attempt to get rid of a more powerful clan. Following this, Akihiko entered into self imposed asylum, refusing to see anyone. He didn't spend his time mourning, but instead preparing himself to enter the academy. This lasted a year before he broke asylum and entered the academy. He graduated after his first attempt and has since then become a rank D genin, continuing his relentless journey to the highest title, to revive his family name and to stamp out his enemies.
Personality: Akihiko is a certifiable recluse. He doesn't enjoy socializing very much with other people and he spends a large amount of his time reading, and when he is not doing that he is practicing his swordplay, to increase his swordsmanship skills. He is classified as a prodigy with a sword and average when it pertains to jutsus. He is slow to wrath and his personality might come off as dark and gloomy, but on rare occasions he is fleetingly happy. These are the times when he remembers the few happy tines with his family. His main motivation for being a shinobi is so he can re-assert his family's skill, with people have slowly began forgetting since their deaths. His people skills are not well developed as he hasn't spent much time socializing with people. Because of this, he frequently misjudges persons' feelings and emotions. This further alienates him from other people and makes him seem strange. He spends most of his nights pondering about his family and what it might be like to have a happy family. Akihiko is peculiar in other ways as well, because he is very compulsive. This means he views the world in a different way than most other people. He bathes with his sandals on, can't stand to see things out of place and strives to get everything right on the first try.
Name of Weapon or Item: Standard Shinobi Apparatus
Description: Kunai, Shuriken, Flash Bomb
Appearance(s):
Name of Weapon or Item: Ito Clan Heirloom
Description: Simple Metal Sword
Appearance(s):
Skills/Abilities
Average reflexes
Average speed/agility
Good Genjutsu
Average Ninjutsu
Bad Strength/endurance
Bad Taijutsu
Good swordsmanship
Special Traits
Good Analysis skills
Avid researcher
Very Objective- Fluid body movements
Kekkei Genkai:
Name of Kekkei Genkai: Wāmurirīsu (worm release)
Clan: Ito Clan
Description: This kekkei Genkai is a form of ninjutsu which has an affinity to the earth. It allows the user to liken his body to a worm, becoming more flexible and better able to survive serious injury. The final stage of this kekkei genkai's development is a full body transformations which gives different affinities to different clan members, these affinities can include the development of tails, wings, or other bodily enhancements, though the user doesn't develop more than one of these attributes. The weaknesses of this K.G are that fire or wind style jutsu can easily damage one's body in it's worm like state by drying it out, and it also detracts from the user's physical strength. Another drawback is that the immense chackra required for this K.G causes breakdown in the body of the user. Akihiko's K.G is in it's initial stage of development and so he is barely able to use it.
Cannon Jutsu
Mist Servant Jutsu
Demonic Illusion: Hell Viewing Jutsu
Cloud Style Crescent Moon Beheading
Custom Jutsu
Type of Jutsu: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Range: 5 ft
Nature Type: Earth
Handseals: Snake, Tiger, Rat
Description: This jutsu creates two agile clones from worms which the user regurgitates. The clones are skilled swordsmen, but they are easily destroyed if attacked by fire and wind attacks as this dries them out. They are hard to maintain and require good chackra control to keep solid for more than a few minutes.
Weakness: Fire, Wind, durability, and chakra control.
Name of Technique: Nisekasoku jutsu (False Acceleration Jutsu)
Type of Jutsu: Genjutsu
Rank: D
Range: Short
Nature Type: N/A
Handseals: Rat
Description: This jutsu changes the flow of chakra in the brain and causes the victim to believe that the user is moving faster than he actually is. This can cause the victim to attack the area they think the user is in before the user actually gets there. This kind of genjutsu can only be cast on one person and a time, and strong willed persons can break through it.
Weakness: Taijutsu, Ninjutsu, strong willed persons.- =====================
Type of Jutsu: Ninjutsu
Rank: D
Range: Short
Nature Type: Earth
Handseals: Snake, Rat, Pig
Description: This jutsu creates a shell of ants around the user. It is effective in protecting against ninjutsu and taijutsu. However, it cannot withstand constant battery or very powerful attacks, and it also takes a bit of time to manifest
Weakness: Repeated attacks, chakra control, speed
Summons: N/A
J
Jhuton
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- Invitation Status
- Preferred Character Gender
- Male
- Genres
- Sci-Fi, Anime, Magical, Action, Etc
I am basically done with everything except the hidden techniques. But please look over my clan and let me know if anything needs changing. Remember, its still a WIP, but is almost done.
Name:
The Azuha Clan
Location:
Northeast of Amegakure - The Azuha Village/The Azuha Residence.
Appearance:
Surrounded by industrial parts. Small houses with its own cemetery for the members of the Azuha. A big training field for the members. Two big houses with an estate behind them. Houses representing the Greater and the Lesser Branch, while the Estate is for the Head Branch.
Description:
The history of the Azuha Clan dates back to 50 years before the founding of Amegakure. It all started with three siblings, though they were all female. Saya Azuha, Tobari Azuha and Kaguya Azuha. The latter was the oldest of the siblings. They resided in a small village to the east of where Amegakure now exists. Back in their days, they were quite cherished by the villagers. They provided the habitants with food, corps and made sure the village was quite prosperous. They were the three leaders, however, the oldest, Kaguya was the one the villagers turned to. One thing that was to be noted, despite being siblings, was the color their eyes held. The color of their eyes represented the element they had an affinity towards.
Skyblue represented the Wind element.
Blue represented the Water element.
Light Green/Green represented the Earth element.
Orange/Red represented the Fire element.
Purple represented the Lightning element.
However, before the Azuha became known throughout the Amegakure history, the siblings had none but three elements. Kaguya had the Wind, where Tobari had the Earth, and Saya with Fire. The leadership eventually fell with the oldest one. She was known for her elegancy and her beautiful traits. It was quite notable that even her own siblings turned to her in dire situations.
As time went by the village was eventually named as the Azuha village, and it was not chosen by the siblings, rather the people residing in it.
Kaguya was almost worshipped by the villagers. She was like a messiah. With an extensive chakra pool unlike her younger siblings, she was extremely well-versed in ninjutsu, and was even able to use medical ninjutsu, through her first element, the Wind. She eventually became an expert when her second element, Water was unlocked. Her senses, especially her eyes, were quite perceptive, and the chakra flow/control through the bodies of the siblings was quite adapt and concentrated. In later discoveries, as the siblings protected the village from many outsiders, it was eventually, but slowly known throughout the many rumors, that their chakra control/concentration, was on a different level. And if they concentrated well enough, they could feel the locations of their own chakra points, and could use this knowledge in an offensive or a defensive way.
Since all human body shapes are the same, with the knowledge of the location for their own chakra points, they can use taijutsu to possibly render the chakra points of the enemy by closing them with force, just like an Hyūga, or protect themselves if someone tries to do the same with their own chakra points. The enemies, eventually gave them the nickname "The Three Pearls", because of their beauty, and how elegant their fighting style was.
The strongest traits resided in the oldest. Her eyes were the most perceptive ones. Even her own body could be more resilient and stronger through the control of her chakra, than her younger siblings. Their own past was unknown to even them. Since they mostly survived without parents, and were picked up by a wanderer, who settled in a village, which was now known as the Azuha. His name was Hideto Nishia. He was like a father to them, who eventually died by old age.
As time progressed, the founders of the clan, the siblings, married into different families. The clan progressed and expanded, as they all kept the name "Azuha". Eventually, the clan, and even the village had a symbol, which represented the Azuha's, and the elements that resided inside the oldest sibling, Kaguya. Sky Blue represented the Wind, and Blue represented the Water element.
The shape of the symbol, the crest was of a small circle in the center to the color representing the Wind element, and the outer unfinished circle, representing the element Water. However, the outer circle had a pointy shape at the top, but at the bottom, there was a small gap, like a small gate, allowing for more possibilities. The reason for why the outer circle was unfinished in the symbol, was because of the rumored third element, Kaguya had, which was Lightning. It was also said that the color of her eyes, changed from skyblue to that of purple.
The symbol, the Azuha clan, represents protection, freedom, courage and tranquility.
It was later discovered, throughout the decades that the members of the clan, who were born with a different eye color to that of skyblue, or even blue, had lesser perception to that of the former. The chakra control, was however, equal throughout the members from the Azuha Clan. But, the ability to concentrate with the chakra, was different, depending on the eyes. They were tied into the nerve system and the mind, which had an impact on their own concentration. Though, only a direct descendant of Kaguya, or those of the Azuha who were born with either Water or Wind element, had the highest concentration, than any of the others in the clan.
Though, even if they were not stronger than the Azuha with Wind or the Water element, they could still utilize the skills in the same way, though it would take more toll on their bodies, unless they keep it limited, based on their own chakra concentration or, even their eyes and the color representing the element they have an affinity with.
Since the siblings time was no more, and as time went by, the clan eventually split into three branches.
The Head Branch - Consists of members with the element of Wind or Water, with eyes to the color of skyblue or blue.
The Greater Branch - Consists of members with the element of Earth, with eyes to the color of Light Green or Green.
The Lesser Branch - Consists of members with the element of Fire, with eyes to the color of Orange or Red.
The clan only consists of these three branches, and throughout the traditions, only a member of the Head Branch can become the heir/ess, or in other words, the leader of the clan. There is, however, another way for one to become the leader.
The Elder Council, if in agreement, can point a member from the Greater Branch as the leader, but they cannot go lower than that, unless a member is a genius/prodigy. As for the element Lightning, since it is very rare, and not a single member from any of the branches has had such an affinity, it is not spoken of, unless its about Kaguya and her legend.
Since very little is known about an Azuha with the Lightning element, or what power it would actually possess with the combination of the Azuha eyes, and if a member eventually has an affinity for Lightning as their first element, they will be placed with the Lesser Branch, until further research.
If a member eventually is born with Earth, Fire or even Water as their first element, their second element will be Wind. Every member of the clan, either as first, or secondary element, has an affinity to Wind. If you are however, born with Wind as your first element, then your second element can be either Water, Fire or Earth. None has had Lightning as their first/second element so far.
Amegakure was founded in The Rain Country, and the Azuha village was also a part of the said country, though on the northeast. As Amegakure grew and expanded over time, they eventually made the Azuha village a part of it.
Since they became a part of Amegakure years later after its foundation, they kept to themselves for some time, and slowly grew within and through generations. They ended up becoming a very prosperous clan. The Azuha clan became very organized. The impact from the events regarding the Sūta clan and the Metsuke invasion did not affect them significantly. Fortunately for them, the numbers of the members in their clan did not decrease by alot. They were basically a clan that were able to survive before and after the occupation was over. They were also very supportive to the decisions of Ryoku Samidare.
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The decisions of the Head Branch is something all the branches have to abide by, and follow them through. The relationship between the Head Branch and the Greater Branch is still preserved on a great and positive level, wheras the Lesser Branch is not thrilled by the decisions made by the Head Branch, and how they support the treaty. They feel like they're left out, and dislikes the Greater Branch.
Every branch has its own leader, and can somewhat move independently, though they must follow the orders of the Head Branch in the end.
The Head Branch has absolute rule over all sayings.The Elder Council are basically advisors who hold great knowledge within the clan and outside. They can, with good reason behind their action, appoint, as mentioned before, a leader for the clan from the Greater Branch, if they so wanted to. All the branches must still agree with them.
The Greater Branch keeps the clan rules and traditions intact. They are the Police Force that keeps things, the rules intact and on track. The clan has their own little law. With a good reason or cause, or with evidence, they can even accuse someone from the Head or the Lesser Branch for anything criminal done within the clan, against it, or anything similar. However, not all members in this branch are a member of the Police Force.
The Lesser Branch are to protect the clan leader, along with the Head Branch and the Greater Branch. They are the Main Force, and deals with any threats made against the branches, or the clan as a whole.
The Hidden Ghost Branch is more like a special organization within the clan itself, lead by the leader of the Lesser Branch. Their goal is simple. What benefits Amegakure benefits the Azuha Clan. If someone has to disappear or die, they will do it. They are basically the dark side of the Azuha Clan, who share a common goal, to be independent.
This branch is kept secret and only the leader of the Lesser Branch knows of it. They specialize in ninjutsu, taijutsu, genjutsu, sensory and especially assassination. It is a branch with members spread throughout the three main branches, and they dont have a specific location known to the public in Amegakure. Their base is usually underground to that of the Azuha village.
The Azuha Clan is now growing in reputation, as they are trying to strengthen their relationship in public, and especially in Amegakure.
It is also noted that many members in the Azuha Clan, despite any branch, usually learn the ways of Genjutsu in combination with their traits. Though thats more like a secondary goal for most of the members, as the primary one is to learn the hidden techniques within the clan along with ninjutsu. Taijutsu is always a must in combination with any style. Every member has to learn taijutsu, especially the ones with the Wind element.
Also, most of the Azuha members makes a contract with any species as long as its a bird, representing the message freedom and peace. This is in their point of view since they become one with the wind. They are cherished by most of the Azuha members, though it is not mandatory. It is only optional. Most of the members usually pick the birds because they remind them about Kaguya and her connection to the element, Wind.
The Azuha Clan
Location:
Northeast of Amegakure - The Azuha Village/The Azuha Residence.
Appearance:
Surrounded by industrial parts. Small houses with its own cemetery for the members of the Azuha. A big training field for the members. Two big houses with an estate behind them. Houses representing the Greater and the Lesser Branch, while the Estate is for the Head Branch.
Description:
The history of the Azuha Clan dates back to 50 years before the founding of Amegakure. It all started with three siblings, though they were all female. Saya Azuha, Tobari Azuha and Kaguya Azuha. The latter was the oldest of the siblings. They resided in a small village to the east of where Amegakure now exists. Back in their days, they were quite cherished by the villagers. They provided the habitants with food, corps and made sure the village was quite prosperous. They were the three leaders, however, the oldest, Kaguya was the one the villagers turned to. One thing that was to be noted, despite being siblings, was the color their eyes held. The color of their eyes represented the element they had an affinity towards.
Skyblue represented the Wind element.
Blue represented the Water element.
Light Green/Green represented the Earth element.
Orange/Red represented the Fire element.
Purple represented the Lightning element.
However, before the Azuha became known throughout the Amegakure history, the siblings had none but three elements. Kaguya had the Wind, where Tobari had the Earth, and Saya with Fire. The leadership eventually fell with the oldest one. She was known for her elegancy and her beautiful traits. It was quite notable that even her own siblings turned to her in dire situations.
As time went by the village was eventually named as the Azuha village, and it was not chosen by the siblings, rather the people residing in it.
Kaguya was almost worshipped by the villagers. She was like a messiah. With an extensive chakra pool unlike her younger siblings, she was extremely well-versed in ninjutsu, and was even able to use medical ninjutsu, through her first element, the Wind. She eventually became an expert when her second element, Water was unlocked. Her senses, especially her eyes, were quite perceptive, and the chakra flow/control through the bodies of the siblings was quite adapt and concentrated. In later discoveries, as the siblings protected the village from many outsiders, it was eventually, but slowly known throughout the many rumors, that their chakra control/concentration, was on a different level. And if they concentrated well enough, they could feel the locations of their own chakra points, and could use this knowledge in an offensive or a defensive way.
Since all human body shapes are the same, with the knowledge of the location for their own chakra points, they can use taijutsu to possibly render the chakra points of the enemy by closing them with force, just like an Hyūga, or protect themselves if someone tries to do the same with their own chakra points. The enemies, eventually gave them the nickname "The Three Pearls", because of their beauty, and how elegant their fighting style was.
The strongest traits resided in the oldest. Her eyes were the most perceptive ones. Even her own body could be more resilient and stronger through the control of her chakra, than her younger siblings. Their own past was unknown to even them. Since they mostly survived without parents, and were picked up by a wanderer, who settled in a village, which was now known as the Azuha. His name was Hideto Nishia. He was like a father to them, who eventually died by old age.
As time progressed, the founders of the clan, the siblings, married into different families. The clan progressed and expanded, as they all kept the name "Azuha". Eventually, the clan, and even the village had a symbol, which represented the Azuha's, and the elements that resided inside the oldest sibling, Kaguya. Sky Blue represented the Wind, and Blue represented the Water element.
The shape of the symbol, the crest was of a small circle in the center to the color representing the Wind element, and the outer unfinished circle, representing the element Water. However, the outer circle had a pointy shape at the top, but at the bottom, there was a small gap, like a small gate, allowing for more possibilities. The reason for why the outer circle was unfinished in the symbol, was because of the rumored third element, Kaguya had, which was Lightning. It was also said that the color of her eyes, changed from skyblue to that of purple.
The symbol, the Azuha clan, represents protection, freedom, courage and tranquility.
It was later discovered, throughout the decades that the members of the clan, who were born with a different eye color to that of skyblue, or even blue, had lesser perception to that of the former. The chakra control, was however, equal throughout the members from the Azuha Clan. But, the ability to concentrate with the chakra, was different, depending on the eyes. They were tied into the nerve system and the mind, which had an impact on their own concentration. Though, only a direct descendant of Kaguya, or those of the Azuha who were born with either Water or Wind element, had the highest concentration, than any of the others in the clan.
Though, even if they were not stronger than the Azuha with Wind or the Water element, they could still utilize the skills in the same way, though it would take more toll on their bodies, unless they keep it limited, based on their own chakra concentration or, even their eyes and the color representing the element they have an affinity with.
Since the siblings time was no more, and as time went by, the clan eventually split into three branches.
The Head Branch - Consists of members with the element of Wind or Water, with eyes to the color of skyblue or blue.
The Greater Branch - Consists of members with the element of Earth, with eyes to the color of Light Green or Green.
The Lesser Branch - Consists of members with the element of Fire, with eyes to the color of Orange or Red.
The clan only consists of these three branches, and throughout the traditions, only a member of the Head Branch can become the heir/ess, or in other words, the leader of the clan. There is, however, another way for one to become the leader.
The Elder Council, if in agreement, can point a member from the Greater Branch as the leader, but they cannot go lower than that, unless a member is a genius/prodigy. As for the element Lightning, since it is very rare, and not a single member from any of the branches has had such an affinity, it is not spoken of, unless its about Kaguya and her legend.
Since very little is known about an Azuha with the Lightning element, or what power it would actually possess with the combination of the Azuha eyes, and if a member eventually has an affinity for Lightning as their first element, they will be placed with the Lesser Branch, until further research.
If a member eventually is born with Earth, Fire or even Water as their first element, their second element will be Wind. Every member of the clan, either as first, or secondary element, has an affinity to Wind. If you are however, born with Wind as your first element, then your second element can be either Water, Fire or Earth. None has had Lightning as their first/second element so far.
Amegakure was founded in The Rain Country, and the Azuha village was also a part of the said country, though on the northeast. As Amegakure grew and expanded over time, they eventually made the Azuha village a part of it.
Since they became a part of Amegakure years later after its foundation, they kept to themselves for some time, and slowly grew within and through generations. They ended up becoming a very prosperous clan. The Azuha clan became very organized. The impact from the events regarding the Sūta clan and the Metsuke invasion did not affect them significantly. Fortunately for them, the numbers of the members in their clan did not decrease by alot. They were basically a clan that were able to survive before and after the occupation was over. They were also very supportive to the decisions of Ryoku Samidare.
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The decisions of the Head Branch is something all the branches have to abide by, and follow them through. The relationship between the Head Branch and the Greater Branch is still preserved on a great and positive level, wheras the Lesser Branch is not thrilled by the decisions made by the Head Branch, and how they support the treaty. They feel like they're left out, and dislikes the Greater Branch.
Every branch has its own leader, and can somewhat move independently, though they must follow the orders of the Head Branch in the end.
The Head Branch has absolute rule over all sayings.The Elder Council are basically advisors who hold great knowledge within the clan and outside. They can, with good reason behind their action, appoint, as mentioned before, a leader for the clan from the Greater Branch, if they so wanted to. All the branches must still agree with them.
The Greater Branch keeps the clan rules and traditions intact. They are the Police Force that keeps things, the rules intact and on track. The clan has their own little law. With a good reason or cause, or with evidence, they can even accuse someone from the Head or the Lesser Branch for anything criminal done within the clan, against it, or anything similar. However, not all members in this branch are a member of the Police Force.
The Lesser Branch are to protect the clan leader, along with the Head Branch and the Greater Branch. They are the Main Force, and deals with any threats made against the branches, or the clan as a whole.
The Hidden Ghost Branch is more like a special organization within the clan itself, lead by the leader of the Lesser Branch. Their goal is simple. What benefits Amegakure benefits the Azuha Clan. If someone has to disappear or die, they will do it. They are basically the dark side of the Azuha Clan, who share a common goal, to be independent.
This branch is kept secret and only the leader of the Lesser Branch knows of it. They specialize in ninjutsu, taijutsu, genjutsu, sensory and especially assassination. It is a branch with members spread throughout the three main branches, and they dont have a specific location known to the public in Amegakure. Their base is usually underground to that of the Azuha village.
The Azuha Clan is now growing in reputation, as they are trying to strengthen their relationship in public, and especially in Amegakure.
It is also noted that many members in the Azuha Clan, despite any branch, usually learn the ways of Genjutsu in combination with their traits. Though thats more like a secondary goal for most of the members, as the primary one is to learn the hidden techniques within the clan along with ninjutsu. Taijutsu is always a must in combination with any style. Every member has to learn taijutsu, especially the ones with the Wind element.
Also, most of the Azuha members makes a contract with any species as long as its a bird, representing the message freedom and peace. This is in their point of view since they become one with the wind. They are cherished by most of the Azuha members, though it is not mandatory. It is only optional. Most of the members usually pick the birds because they remind them about Kaguya and her connection to the element, Wind.
Traditions:
Marriage - The members of the Azuha clan usually marry within the clan. Keeping the secrets of the clan unknown to the outsiders. Despite the free decision since the time of the three siblings, things drastically changed throughout the generations. However, one is allowed to marry a member from any branch. Once a marriage ceremony occurs, a festival within the branch is held for an entire day, though every branch is invited. If a marriage between two people from two different branches occurs, the festival is held for two days and one night. To respect and honor each branch, the festival is held in both branches for an entire day, making it two days.
Head Branch Leader/Azuha Clan Leader - Throughout the generations, a very simple tradition has been kept. The leader of the Azuha Clan must be a female, since the time of Kaguya, who was the leader of the Azuha. Though as for the leader for the Greater and the Lesser Branch, it can be either a male or a female. If the clan leader has a son, he will not be appointed as the next clan leader, but rather, given the option to challenge the Greater or even Lesser Branch leader for their position.
Rite of Challenge - 50 years after the era of the three siblings, a member of the Azuha, Kamiko Azuha, challenged the clan leader. It eventually led to the challengers victory, which made her the next leader. It became a tradition throughout the decades/generations and has been kept since. Once the challenger attains victory, she will be appointed as the leader. If a Lesser Branch member attains victory over the clan leader, he/she will be appointed as the leader of the Greater Branch, since a Lesser Branch member cannot become the clan leader. The Greater Branch leader does have the right to ask the victor for a duel to keep his position intact. This tradition rarely happens, since a significant power gap can be seen between the leaders of each branch. In a challenge, you can also submit defeat by giving up.
Coming of Age - Once a member is 15 years old, he is considered an adult, and is treated as such, despite any branch. However each member from any branch must respect one another. To uphold the honor, the loyalty amongst eachother. However, a small test is required. A test to see how the body has been kept, and how much the member can utilize the traits of the clan, or if he needs more training. A special program to eventually train a member with the lack to utilize such skills will be made. It would also involve the hidden techniques.
Outfits - Since the three branches were established, there has been certain clothing to distinguish them apart.
- The Head Branch wears clothing with a combination of the colors black, white, blue and skyblue. The forehead protector representing the village can be placed anywhere, as long as its visible to the public.
- The Greater Branch wears clothing with a combination of the colors black, green and lighter green. The forehead protector representing the village can be placed anywhere, as long as its visible to the public.
- The Lesser Branch wears clothing with a combination of the colors black, red and orange. The forehead protector representing the village can be placed anywhere, as long as its visible to the public.
- The Police Force wears clothing with a combination of colors black, white and green. The forehead protector representing the village can be placed anywhere, as long as its visible to the public. They wear a customized jacket from the Azuha clan. The crest is embedded on the front of the jacket, right side of the chest. There is an extra circle in their crest that basically tells the members of the Azuha that they are the Police. The color of this circle is green, representing the Greater Branch.
- The Hidden Ghost Branch wears masks and light clothing with a combination of the colors grey, black and sometimes white. Some wear Oni Masks, while some don't. The forehead protectors representing the village is not shown in public, or to their target, unless its absolutely neccessary. The symbol of the clan is not shown on their clothing.
- The Clan Symbol is usually at the back, in between the shoulder blades, just like an Uchiha's. Though its on the clothing. It can also be on both the shoulder sides, and not on the back. You can also wear customized clothing representing your branch, with the symbol placed in a different location than the usual.
Traits:
Hidden Chakra Techniques.
High Chakra Control/Concentration
Great Focus/Perception (Depending on your eyes/element)
The iris in their eyes are almost to that of a snake or a fox.
Color of their eyes (Skyblue/Blue, Light Green/Green, Orange/Red or Purple)
The hair color can vary, though it is usually black or brown.
Most of the clan members has the affinity to the element Wind or Water (50%)
Second most of the clan members has the affinity to the element of Earth (30%)
Third most of the clan members has the affinity to the element of Fire (19%)
Only one clan member thus far has the affinity to the element of Lightning (1%)
The Council:
Current Elder - Male - Vihen Azuha (In Position)
Current Elder - Male - Daichi Azuha (In Position)
Current Elder - Female - Asako Azuha (In Position)
Current Elder - Female - Yakuri Azuha (In Position)
Current Elder - Female - Sayori Masamori Azuha (In Position)
Head Branch/Azuha Clan Leader:
Current Leader - Female - Shina Azuha (In Position)
Greater Branch Leader:
Current Leader - Female - Nozomi Azuha (In Position)
Lesser Branch Leader:
Current Leader - Male - Adachi Azuha (In Position)
Greater Branch Police Force Leader:
Current Leader - Male - Hiroki Azuha (In Position)
The Hidden Ghost Branch Commander:
Current Commander - Male - Tenkin Azuha (In Position)
Marriage - The members of the Azuha clan usually marry within the clan. Keeping the secrets of the clan unknown to the outsiders. Despite the free decision since the time of the three siblings, things drastically changed throughout the generations. However, one is allowed to marry a member from any branch. Once a marriage ceremony occurs, a festival within the branch is held for an entire day, though every branch is invited. If a marriage between two people from two different branches occurs, the festival is held for two days and one night. To respect and honor each branch, the festival is held in both branches for an entire day, making it two days.
Head Branch Leader/Azuha Clan Leader - Throughout the generations, a very simple tradition has been kept. The leader of the Azuha Clan must be a female, since the time of Kaguya, who was the leader of the Azuha. Though as for the leader for the Greater and the Lesser Branch, it can be either a male or a female. If the clan leader has a son, he will not be appointed as the next clan leader, but rather, given the option to challenge the Greater or even Lesser Branch leader for their position.
Rite of Challenge - 50 years after the era of the three siblings, a member of the Azuha, Kamiko Azuha, challenged the clan leader. It eventually led to the challengers victory, which made her the next leader. It became a tradition throughout the decades/generations and has been kept since. Once the challenger attains victory, she will be appointed as the leader. If a Lesser Branch member attains victory over the clan leader, he/she will be appointed as the leader of the Greater Branch, since a Lesser Branch member cannot become the clan leader. The Greater Branch leader does have the right to ask the victor for a duel to keep his position intact. This tradition rarely happens, since a significant power gap can be seen between the leaders of each branch. In a challenge, you can also submit defeat by giving up.
Coming of Age - Once a member is 15 years old, he is considered an adult, and is treated as such, despite any branch. However each member from any branch must respect one another. To uphold the honor, the loyalty amongst eachother. However, a small test is required. A test to see how the body has been kept, and how much the member can utilize the traits of the clan, or if he needs more training. A special program to eventually train a member with the lack to utilize such skills will be made. It would also involve the hidden techniques.
Outfits - Since the three branches were established, there has been certain clothing to distinguish them apart.
- The Head Branch wears clothing with a combination of the colors black, white, blue and skyblue. The forehead protector representing the village can be placed anywhere, as long as its visible to the public.
- The Greater Branch wears clothing with a combination of the colors black, green and lighter green. The forehead protector representing the village can be placed anywhere, as long as its visible to the public.
- The Lesser Branch wears clothing with a combination of the colors black, red and orange. The forehead protector representing the village can be placed anywhere, as long as its visible to the public.
- The Police Force wears clothing with a combination of colors black, white and green. The forehead protector representing the village can be placed anywhere, as long as its visible to the public. They wear a customized jacket from the Azuha clan. The crest is embedded on the front of the jacket, right side of the chest. There is an extra circle in their crest that basically tells the members of the Azuha that they are the Police. The color of this circle is green, representing the Greater Branch.
- The Hidden Ghost Branch wears masks and light clothing with a combination of the colors grey, black and sometimes white. Some wear Oni Masks, while some don't. The forehead protectors representing the village is not shown in public, or to their target, unless its absolutely neccessary. The symbol of the clan is not shown on their clothing.
- The Clan Symbol is usually at the back, in between the shoulder blades, just like an Uchiha's. Though its on the clothing. It can also be on both the shoulder sides, and not on the back. You can also wear customized clothing representing your branch, with the symbol placed in a different location than the usual.
Traits:
Hidden Chakra Techniques.
High Chakra Control/Concentration
Great Focus/Perception (Depending on your eyes/element)
The iris in their eyes are almost to that of a snake or a fox.
Color of their eyes (Skyblue/Blue, Light Green/Green, Orange/Red or Purple)
The hair color can vary, though it is usually black or brown.
Most of the clan members has the affinity to the element Wind or Water (50%)
Second most of the clan members has the affinity to the element of Earth (30%)
Third most of the clan members has the affinity to the element of Fire (19%)
Only one clan member thus far has the affinity to the element of Lightning (1%)
The Council:
Current Elder - Male - Vihen Azuha (In Position)
Current Elder - Male - Daichi Azuha (In Position)
Current Elder - Female - Asako Azuha (In Position)
Current Elder - Female - Yakuri Azuha (In Position)
Current Elder - Female - Sayori Masamori Azuha (In Position)
Head Branch/Azuha Clan Leader:
Current Leader - Female - Shina Azuha (In Position)
Greater Branch Leader:
Current Leader - Female - Nozomi Azuha (In Position)
Lesser Branch Leader:
Current Leader - Male - Adachi Azuha (In Position)
Greater Branch Police Force Leader:
Current Leader - Male - Hiroki Azuha (In Position)
The Hidden Ghost Branch Commander:
Current Commander - Male - Tenkin Azuha (In Position)
Tendōgan:
The Azuha are known for having some special eyes. Even if their known for the diversity in color when it comes to such eyes. They have the ability to affect an area in such a way that they can comprehend any detail in their surroundings, depending on what they would focus in. It can also be enhanced, depending on the object/person. The bigger an area, the more focus it would need. The smaller the area or an object, the faster the details will be collected. It is similar to that of the Byakugan and even Sharingan. However, it cannot follow fast movement, but it has the ability to perhaps predict it if enough detail about said object or the surroundings has been gathered.
The Azuha Clan excel in such eye technique, since it can be used in many different ways. It can be used to identify something, and even genjutsu or in combination with sensory. It is a versatile Dojutsu and one can know when a member is actually using it. The iris will shift in form. But it is quite similar to the eyes of a fox or a snake. Though an average young member would not be able to keep the eyes focused for very long, or even catch most of the details in their vicinity. In the end, the Dojutsu is connected to ones chakra and their mind. And the color of the eyes greatly signifies how strong one can become by utilizing such Kekkei Genkai. However, the Tendōgan is not deemed or ranked as a powerful Dojutsu such as the Byakugan or the Sharingan.
The Kekkei Genkai is still growing, and it is known that the ones who are born into the Head Branch has the possibility to reach the peak of such Dojutsu.
The Azuha are known for having some special eyes. Even if their known for the diversity in color when it comes to such eyes. They have the ability to affect an area in such a way that they can comprehend any detail in their surroundings, depending on what they would focus in. It can also be enhanced, depending on the object/person. The bigger an area, the more focus it would need. The smaller the area or an object, the faster the details will be collected. It is similar to that of the Byakugan and even Sharingan. However, it cannot follow fast movement, but it has the ability to perhaps predict it if enough detail about said object or the surroundings has been gathered.
The Azuha Clan excel in such eye technique, since it can be used in many different ways. It can be used to identify something, and even genjutsu or in combination with sensory. It is a versatile Dojutsu and one can know when a member is actually using it. The iris will shift in form. But it is quite similar to the eyes of a fox or a snake. Though an average young member would not be able to keep the eyes focused for very long, or even catch most of the details in their vicinity. In the end, the Dojutsu is connected to ones chakra and their mind. And the color of the eyes greatly signifies how strong one can become by utilizing such Kekkei Genkai. However, the Tendōgan is not deemed or ranked as a powerful Dojutsu such as the Byakugan or the Sharingan.
The Kekkei Genkai is still growing, and it is known that the ones who are born into the Head Branch has the possibility to reach the peak of such Dojutsu.
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Spiders.....*Twitch twitch* Wolf Spiders *Arms Naname with Rid-a-bug-jutsu*Fully transferred Niji, now here's Kumoga in case guild drops again.
Name: Kumogatarui Dobustu
Nickname/Alias: Eight-legs
Gender: Female
Age and date of birth: 15 ---- 5th July 461
Age Appearance: 15, maybe a bit younger
Sexuality: Undecided
Parents: Sasori Dobutsu (father), Cho Dobutsu (mother)
Length and build Lithe build, approx 4 foot and three inches tall/ 1.3 metres tall
Weight 64 lbs / 29 kg approx
Favorite weather and season A moderately warm autumn morning, when the dew is freshest!
Village: Kirigakure
Birthplace: Roaming clan (explained in history)
Organization: N/A
Clan/Bloodline: Dobutsu Clan
Rank: Genin
Chakra Nature: Water
Appearance:
Personality: Generally timid and tries to keep to herself, Kumogatarui will more likely than not just agree with someone far sooner than objecting to their ideas or opinions despite how strongly she may be against it due to an aversion to aggression. Even considering her lack of will towards aggression, Kumogatarui will dedicate herself to trying to be of use to those she's working with, be it through a support role or merely just the act of being there and being able to assist.
Socially awkward is another way to describe her, as most attempts to conduct conversation will end up either falling flat or turning to how she easily recognises with spiders. The latter option proving to be a thing that will cause for her to be avoided by others naturally anyway, because who would be friends with a creepy spider girl? At least that's how she views it, thinking that people would avoid her for her fascination with the eight-legged creatures that haunt the corners of abandoned houses like a bad smell, were she someone else she wouldn't that's for sure.
So it's safe to say some form of positive attention from others would make things worse for her, inciting paranoia that they had no real intention to be friends and merely wanted to find a way to embarrass her even if it's not the case, which causes her to become distant and quiet once more.
She is also petrified by a particular style of webbing used by an ex-member of her clan. But she adores spiders of all kinds, as well as sweets, she really loves sweet treats.
History: Kumogatarui's clan was originally a roaming clan, travelling from land to land with a mass of caravans and portable homes that they used to trade from and take on any missions that the villages and their kages didn't want associated with their own shinobi. Whilst it wasn't a savoury method to keep them in money, the Dobutsu clan could do it without too much trouble, having no true affiliation meant only interrogation would identify the village they worked for... So long as they were caught.
Normally when a child is born into the clan they are raised within the caravans, taught and trained in arts and tricks that they would need for the life of a gypsy shinobi. But a few are removed from the clan's caravans and their parents decide to settle down within a household in a villager, essentially aligning themselves with said village upon moving in and starting a fresh life for their child. Kumogatarui's parents were just that sort of couple, moving to Kirigakure to occupy a house there and raise their daughter in a safer environment. As well as admitting her to an established shinobi academy to give her "proper" training in the shinobi arts.
Through her younger years, Kumogatarui learnt well and was a fully established genin, ready to be sent on little missions with fellow genin and a jounin sensei. Now, like how most clans have exiles from their own for certain reasons, the Dobutsu clan had their own exiled members whom simply hungered for the clan's little-known dojutsu, which at it's final stage, pretty much gives them the eight-eyed appearance of the clan's favoured species, the arachnid. One of those very exiles took it upon themselves to prey upon younger members of the clan and kidnap them to try and induce the dojutsu so they could take it for themselves, in favour of trying to target the older, stronger clan members.
Unfortunately whilst on a mission with her squad, Kumogatarui was snatched away by a web-trap left by this shinobi, who carried her away and subjected her to some good ol' torture, assuming that great emotional stress would cause it to surge up... To which the theory came to be fact, the girl's continual torture forcing her to awaken her Hachigan. The success of the exile prompted him to begin with the procedure of removing each of her eyes, whilst only needing one he desired both of them, because why not?
Successfully the first one was removed and he stored it away for re-attachment later. As he began on working to take her other eye the rest of her team managed to track down where she'd been taken and stopped him before he could finish. The end result was that he got away with the eye he'd already taken and whilst Kumogatarui got to live past it, she was traumatised by the experience and (understandably) withdrew from her team and being a kunoichi altogether.
It took years from when she left to build up the courage to try again, coddled by her parents since she came back and watched out for tirelessly, but despite that she decided to try again. Perhaps a few successes would boost her confidence, but she was a genin once more, now just awaiting a team to be part of... Silently. In the corner. Maybe where no one would pay attention to her until it was time for them to go. With knowledge of a few of the clan's spider-based techniques, she would no doubt be able to find a use for herself somewhere.
Theme Song:
Weapons/Items:
Name of Weapon or Item: Kunai x 4
Description: Normal ninja kunai
Appearance: Same as normal kunai.
Name of Weapon or Item: Smoke tags x15
Description: Tags that release smoke upon activation
Appearance: n/a
Name of Weapon or Item: Fangs (Lemme know if this is okay or not)
Description: Due to dental modification and the addition of venom glands, Kumogatarui can poison enemies with a bite, these fangs serve a dual purpose in jutsu-usage.
The venom in the glands causes drowsiness and nausea, but unless manipulated with chakra at a cost, will only have up to three uses per hour.
Appearance: Slightly extended canines, similar to a vampire's.
Name of Weapon or Item: Web Spinnerets x 11
Description: These are another bodily modification to members of the Dobutsu clan, allowing for accelerated use of their webbing at the cost of an increased chakra expenditure. There is one for each finger to allow for complex weaving of webbing and one at the base of her spine. These spinnerets can be slowly massaged with chakra for a more careful use of the webbing, costing only a meagre amount of chakra to use.
Appearance: Small, only just noticeable holes on the tips of her fingers and one on the base of her spine.
Skills/Abilities
All members of the Dobutsu clan boast similar physical traits, such as admirable agility, reflexes and stamina as well as a higher ability to perceive things that normally go unnoticed, unfortunately they also possess a weak pool of chakra, as using but a few chakra-intensive techniques will quickly exhaust them. It is possible to replenish their chakra rapidly with their fangs, but it requires a technique unique to the clan, yet taught only to those who would make the best use of such a technique, thus mostly being chuunin or jounin-rank shinobi whom have knowledge of the technique.
The clan members normally also lack in physical strength as well as resistance to damage, which means that extended battles that are purely of exchanging blows will put them out very fast.
And Kumogatarui possesses all these typical traits, meaning she's agile, but will crumple like a leaf and fail if she's caught in heavy physical conflict or uses chakra-intensive techniques.
Special Traits
Bodily modifications to allow for venom-use and web spinning
Not sure if this counts, but she has a beautiful singing voice.
Kekkei Genkai:
Name of Kekkei Genkai: Hachigan
Clan: Dobutsu
Description: A clan dojutsu that is considered to be a rare occurrence in the more modern times due to the very low number of Dobutsu clan members, it is prized for it's enhanced visionary abilities and comes in three stages (four if you count the inert stage).
Inert: No abilities, eyes like a normal person.
Stage 1: Dual-pupils in each eye. User gains the ability to see the vibrations in the air, along with very minor chakra sight (For example faintly making out sources and signatures of chakra that most other dojutsu clearly see.) and an increase in how far the user can see. User must change between vibration and chakra vision.
Stage 2: Three pupils per eye. Both sets of vision are enhanced, allowing for better definition of vibrations and chakra seen, user gains natural night-vision at this point. (Chakra sight is now more prominent, allowing for a better perception of chakra within people and objects imbued with chakra.)
Stage 3: Four pupils per eye. Flawless transition between chakra and vibration sight with chakra vision only just being comparable to that of a major dojutsu's initial chakra vision, where they can perceive the chakra sources and signatures with ease compared to the dojutsu's initial stages where more effort was required to define chakra and their sources.
Night-vision is highly adaptive, allowing for clear sight despite quick transitions between light and dark.
Jutsu:
(Unsure what the spider web jutsus are classed as rank-wise here, but Water Clone is a C rank)
Spider Web Area
Spider Cocoon
Spider Web Flower
Water Clone Technique
Custom Jutsu
Name of Technique: Arachind Grip
Type of Jutsu: Ninjutsu
Rank: E
Range: Self
Nature Type: N/A
Handseals:
Description: Makes one's own body hairs to act like a spider's, greatly improving the user's ability to grip things as well as climbing with greater ease.
Weakness: Fire techniques will burn away the hairs and wet or slippery surfaces are still difficult to maintain a grip on.
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Summons
Name: Wolf Spiders
Species: Spider
Age: n/a
Size: Small
Unique Traits: Fast and easy to miss, also possess a venom that causes swelling, pain and itching.
Jutsu: none
History: Kumogatarui has a lot of these spiders at home, having taken to them as her own personal favourite, has these spiders summon-able at her beck and call for distraction purposes. She prefers to summon only a few at a time, if not just one.
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That would be my task. ;)
I place the genins in the team that needs them the most and is currently available to receive new members. (Thus not doing a meeting/mission or such) You've now been placed in the team and I would like to suggest to see the CS's of your team members. Hope you're content with the team you've been placed in.
I will later do the reviews.
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Guest
Name: Nervani Chisu
Nickname/Alias: Vani
Gender: Female
Age and date of birth: 13, December 28
Age Appearance: 12
Sexuality: Heterosexual
Parents:
Naori Chisu (Mother, Deceased)
Min Chisu (Father, Deceased)
Length and build She has a medium build, not a lot of muscle and very frail
Weight 100 lbs
Favorite weather and season Sunny and Summer
Village: Kumogakure
Birthplace: Kumo Hospital
Organization: Military
Clan/Bloodline: Chisu
Rank: Genin
Chakra Nature: Fire
Appearance:
Personality: Nervani is a nice girl with a passion for floral arrangements and gemstones although she can only afford to look at gemstones. She is smart and good with words but because she is often so quiet, no one notices. If she were to describe herself, she would say "worthless, not good enough and useless." She has no confidence in her abilities, she doesn't often speak and when she does she looks away from the person she is talking to. Because of the abuse she suffered from her father she cannot stand to be touched and will flinch if anyone moves too fast. She stutters when nervous and is paranoid.
When she is scared, she shakes uncontrollably and eventually breaks down sobbing. Nervani is afraid of having to watch someone she likes die due to her failure and often tries hard to improve though she thinks nothing she does is good enough. She thinks poorly of herself, everyone is so much better than she is and she'll never measure up to meet standards.
History: The Chisu Clan is a relatively small clan, it is still growing and still developing. However, the people in the clan are said to be bright and good tacticians. They are wise and rowdy while having a bit of control in the mix. They aren't well known, no recognition outside of Kumogakure and most people don't even associate them as a clan. Though it's well on its way on becoming a well known clan as the current leader of the Chisu clan was blessed with a son and a good friend of his had a daughter.
When the two were old enough, they were betrothed and then married with the permission of their parents. No one besides the parents and the two knew it was arranged but it was. It was the same for the marriage, everyone thought the two were horribly in love but it was not true. Naori despised Min, she would not share a bed with him and wouldn't look at him. When Mins father demanded to know they had no child on the way and even though Min knew his father was cruel, he still gave Naori away. It was then that she was forced to choose, give Min a child or die, she chose to give him a child.
She was determined to hate this child but when Nervani was born, she could not hate the girl and held her close to her. It was around this time that Min began to act like his father and became abusive towards Naori. Nervani was always the threat, Min would threaten to hurt her and to give her to his father but Naori would not have it. She fought for her precious daughters life and one day when it seemed Nervani just might have a place in the world, her father decided she would be a Shinobi. But Nervani never wanted that life, she was a pretty girl who couldn't hurt anyone and was even shy.
Min wouldn't stand for it, he would hit her if she refused and like that her descend into the world of ninjas began to her horror. Nervani struggled with the concepts, she had no desire to kill someone but was never given a choice. When she failed to meet standards, she was beat and hit, belittled and demeaned. Her mother would hold her at night and hum until she fell asleep crying from the abuse. One night, the two were roughly awakened by Min and forced to follow him if they didn't want to get hurt.
He was cruel, evil and cold even more so that night when he demanded Nervani to fight him. She wasn't going to risk getting hurt, so she fought him and tried her best but her best wasn't enough. Min said she was worthless, she was nothing and even though she could hear her mother yelling at her father that it was him that was worthless she still felt like he was right. It was that night that Min killed her mother, it broke her spirit and she became withdrawn. Going through the motions and not saying anything, taking the beatings as they came.
Someone had heard her screaming one night, they had broken into the house and caught Min abusing his child. A Jounin was called to deal with him and the two fought for a short while before the Jounin won. Min was killed and Nervani went to live with the jounins family because he didn't want to leave her within the family that allowed this. It was her way of thanking him, she did not stop training and eventually graduated from the Academy.
Theme Song:
Skills/Abilities
-Low Ninjutsu
-Low Taijutsu
-Low Stamina
-Average Speed
-Low Genjutsu
-Decent Chakra Control
Special Traits
Nothing special
Kekkei Genkai:
Name of Kekkei Genkai: Chakra Yaori
Clan:Chisu
Description:
Stage One: this stage is commonly used by Genin who possess this KG due to it being the lowest level of the Kg. The thinnest layered chakra shields are able to be utilized in this stage and any jutsu that has a strong chakra based attack can penetrate it. Weapons that are thrown at a high velocity can and will penetrate the shield as well. This stage does not require additional effort, activated easily. Although the jutsu is not a dojutsu, you can tell when the Kg is being used due to the thin blue glowing outline around the pupil.
Stage Two: This stage is a step up from the first, the shields are thicker and more dense than the first stage shields. Fewer jutsu and weapons can penetrate this shield but the shields can be damaged and force the use to relayer the shield. This stage is activated with more effort on the users part and takes considerable more focus. Around this stage the user can project the shield outwards from chakra points in their hands but the shield will not hold for long. You can tell when activated by the slightly thicker blue glowing outline around the pupil as well as the area under their finger nails also glow blue.
Stage three: This stage is the last and strongest of the three stages, for one the shields can only be penetrated by a superior chakra based jutsu and a chakra consumption weapon or jutsu. The user in this stage, can easily access both previous stages and can project their shields outwards from any of their chakra points and the shield usually last longer than it can in stage two. The drawbacks are needing to keep focused on the shield, huge chakra consumption and a lot of physical strain as well as exhaustion. You can tell when activated by the blue glow of the users eyes and the the glowing of their veins from the chakra.
Jutsu:
Custom Jutsu
Summons
Nickname/Alias: Vani
Gender: Female
Age and date of birth: 13, December 28
Age Appearance: 12
Sexuality: Heterosexual
Parents:
Naori Chisu (Mother, Deceased)
Min Chisu (Father, Deceased)
Length and build She has a medium build, not a lot of muscle and very frail
Weight 100 lbs
Favorite weather and season Sunny and Summer
Village: Kumogakure
Birthplace: Kumo Hospital
Organization: Military
Clan/Bloodline: Chisu
Rank: Genin
Chakra Nature: Fire
Appearance:
Personality: Nervani is a nice girl with a passion for floral arrangements and gemstones although she can only afford to look at gemstones. She is smart and good with words but because she is often so quiet, no one notices. If she were to describe herself, she would say "worthless, not good enough and useless." She has no confidence in her abilities, she doesn't often speak and when she does she looks away from the person she is talking to. Because of the abuse she suffered from her father she cannot stand to be touched and will flinch if anyone moves too fast. She stutters when nervous and is paranoid.
When she is scared, she shakes uncontrollably and eventually breaks down sobbing. Nervani is afraid of having to watch someone she likes die due to her failure and often tries hard to improve though she thinks nothing she does is good enough. She thinks poorly of herself, everyone is so much better than she is and she'll never measure up to meet standards.
History: The Chisu Clan is a relatively small clan, it is still growing and still developing. However, the people in the clan are said to be bright and good tacticians. They are wise and rowdy while having a bit of control in the mix. They aren't well known, no recognition outside of Kumogakure and most people don't even associate them as a clan. Though it's well on its way on becoming a well known clan as the current leader of the Chisu clan was blessed with a son and a good friend of his had a daughter.
When the two were old enough, they were betrothed and then married with the permission of their parents. No one besides the parents and the two knew it was arranged but it was. It was the same for the marriage, everyone thought the two were horribly in love but it was not true. Naori despised Min, she would not share a bed with him and wouldn't look at him. When Mins father demanded to know they had no child on the way and even though Min knew his father was cruel, he still gave Naori away. It was then that she was forced to choose, give Min a child or die, she chose to give him a child.
She was determined to hate this child but when Nervani was born, she could not hate the girl and held her close to her. It was around this time that Min began to act like his father and became abusive towards Naori. Nervani was always the threat, Min would threaten to hurt her and to give her to his father but Naori would not have it. She fought for her precious daughters life and one day when it seemed Nervani just might have a place in the world, her father decided she would be a Shinobi. But Nervani never wanted that life, she was a pretty girl who couldn't hurt anyone and was even shy.
Min wouldn't stand for it, he would hit her if she refused and like that her descend into the world of ninjas began to her horror. Nervani struggled with the concepts, she had no desire to kill someone but was never given a choice. When she failed to meet standards, she was beat and hit, belittled and demeaned. Her mother would hold her at night and hum until she fell asleep crying from the abuse. One night, the two were roughly awakened by Min and forced to follow him if they didn't want to get hurt.
He was cruel, evil and cold even more so that night when he demanded Nervani to fight him. She wasn't going to risk getting hurt, so she fought him and tried her best but her best wasn't enough. Min said she was worthless, she was nothing and even though she could hear her mother yelling at her father that it was him that was worthless she still felt like he was right. It was that night that Min killed her mother, it broke her spirit and she became withdrawn. Going through the motions and not saying anything, taking the beatings as they came.
Someone had heard her screaming one night, they had broken into the house and caught Min abusing his child. A Jounin was called to deal with him and the two fought for a short while before the Jounin won. Min was killed and Nervani went to live with the jounins family because he didn't want to leave her within the family that allowed this. It was her way of thanking him, she did not stop training and eventually graduated from the Academy.
Theme Song:
Name of Weapon or Item: Burn Cream
Description: A jar filled with white cream that fits into the palm of her hand, because she ends up burning the tips of her fingers and sometimes arms she has gotten in the habit of carrying it with her.
Appearance: N/A
Name of Weapon or Item:
Description:
Description: A jar filled with white cream that fits into the palm of her hand, because she ends up burning the tips of her fingers and sometimes arms she has gotten in the habit of carrying it with her.
Appearance: N/A
Name of Weapon or Item:
Description:
Skills/Abilities
-Low Ninjutsu
-Low Taijutsu
-Low Stamina
-Average Speed
-Low Genjutsu
-Decent Chakra Control
Special Traits
Nothing special
Kekkei Genkai:
Name of Kekkei Genkai: Chakra Yaori
Clan:Chisu
Description:
Stage One: this stage is commonly used by Genin who possess this KG due to it being the lowest level of the Kg. The thinnest layered chakra shields are able to be utilized in this stage and any jutsu that has a strong chakra based attack can penetrate it. Weapons that are thrown at a high velocity can and will penetrate the shield as well. This stage does not require additional effort, activated easily. Although the jutsu is not a dojutsu, you can tell when the Kg is being used due to the thin blue glowing outline around the pupil.
Stage Two: This stage is a step up from the first, the shields are thicker and more dense than the first stage shields. Fewer jutsu and weapons can penetrate this shield but the shields can be damaged and force the use to relayer the shield. This stage is activated with more effort on the users part and takes considerable more focus. Around this stage the user can project the shield outwards from chakra points in their hands but the shield will not hold for long. You can tell when activated by the slightly thicker blue glowing outline around the pupil as well as the area under their finger nails also glow blue.
Stage three: This stage is the last and strongest of the three stages, for one the shields can only be penetrated by a superior chakra based jutsu and a chakra consumption weapon or jutsu. The user in this stage, can easily access both previous stages and can project their shields outwards from any of their chakra points and the shield usually last longer than it can in stage two. The drawbacks are needing to keep focused on the shield, huge chakra consumption and a lot of physical strain as well as exhaustion. You can tell when activated by the blue glow of the users eyes and the the glowing of their veins from the chakra.
Jutsu:
Custom Jutsu
Name of Technique: Fire Release: Scorching Rose
Type of Jutsu: Offensive Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Range: Mid
Nature Type: Fire
Handseals: Tiger --> Ox --> Boar --> Serpent
Description: After the user performs the hand seals she blows fire out of her mouth in the shape of a rose and uses her chakra to send it out towards the enemy. It only last about three minutes before dispersing. The temperature of the rose depends on how much chakra was used.
Weakness: Not that lasting, uses more chakra than she would like and can't be interrupted while performing.
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Name of Technique: Fire Release: Tigress Claws
Type of Jutsu: Offensive NinTai
Rank: D
Range: Short
Nature Type: Fire
Handseals: Tiger --> Serpent --> Ox
Description: After performing hand seals chakra melded with the element can be visibly seen around her finger tips in the shape of tiger claws. The user can use them to swipe and burn enemies up close.
Weakness: Puts the user within hitting range of the enemy, sometimes injures user and chakra consumption.
Type of Jutsu: Offensive Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Range: Mid
Nature Type: Fire
Handseals: Tiger --> Ox --> Boar --> Serpent
Description: After the user performs the hand seals she blows fire out of her mouth in the shape of a rose and uses her chakra to send it out towards the enemy. It only last about three minutes before dispersing. The temperature of the rose depends on how much chakra was used.
Weakness: Not that lasting, uses more chakra than she would like and can't be interrupted while performing.
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Name of Technique: Fire Release: Tigress Claws
Type of Jutsu: Offensive NinTai
Rank: D
Range: Short
Nature Type: Fire
Handseals: Tiger --> Serpent --> Ox
Description: After performing hand seals chakra melded with the element can be visibly seen around her finger tips in the shape of tiger claws. The user can use them to swipe and burn enemies up close.
Weakness: Puts the user within hitting range of the enemy, sometimes injures user and chakra consumption.
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Unique Traits: (Just like the one for you character. This can mean flight for birds, or swimming for fish.)
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History: (Optional)
Species:
Age: (If applicable)
Size: (Small, medium, large, colossal. The size and strength dictate the chakra cost.)
Unique Traits: (Just like the one for you character. This can mean flight for birds, or swimming for fish.)
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@Lilly
Alright, you people are seriously making me think.
The Fire Rose would chase an opponent for three minutes? Because if yes, I have to deny that and ask for a balance on that one. That, or fully explain how the technique works so I can think it over.
I kind of like how you balanced out your KG, but I would like to ask for what it can do/withstand at a Genin level.
@Akashi
Clan reviews will take a bit longer, as I am still solving some algebra problems.
And I could not find your sheet and I am not in the mood to dig through the OOC in the moment, so it will have to wait for a short while.
Alright, you people are seriously making me think.
The Fire Rose would chase an opponent for three minutes? Because if yes, I have to deny that and ask for a balance on that one. That, or fully explain how the technique works so I can think it over.
I kind of like how you balanced out your KG, but I would like to ask for what it can do/withstand at a Genin level.
@Akashi
Clan reviews will take a bit longer, as I am still solving some algebra problems.
And I could not find your sheet and I am not in the mood to dig through the OOC in the moment, so it will have to wait for a short while.
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IvoryHaze
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@RedFox
It doesn't chase, it's more the fire last three minutes including the time it takes to get about 5-10 feet away. As for the KG, with Nervani pretty much anything can penetrate the shield. At a Genin level, any stronger jutsu can break it and it can dampen some damage or potential damage.
It doesn't chase, it's more the fire last three minutes including the time it takes to get about 5-10 feet away. As for the KG, with Nervani pretty much anything can penetrate the shield. At a Genin level, any stronger jutsu can break it and it can dampen some damage or potential damage.
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Alrighty, lads and lasses,
Before I start with my reviewing, please do note that it is highly appreciated to ;
1. Put a certain sort of title above your post. Put the name of the character and their current location (village or such) above your reaction/post. This makes it easier to know about which character you've written. Kind of makes it easier for those who don't have much time and want to quickly check if their team members have posted, can search it up easier. Would be appreciated. :)
2. If you collab, I must request the same. A title, naming the location and also a summary. A summary doesn't have to be long. Just say which characters are part of it and simple in short what happens or they are going to do. Don't also forget to spoiler or spoili them. That is after all easier for those who again don't always have time to read everything or are quickly searching for something. ;)
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@Akashi
I can't yet say if the clan can take right away an important place in Amegakure. I'm not part of the village and rather thus let somebody of Amegakure decide that. I however can say that :
High Chakra Control/Concentration
Hidden Chakra Techniques.
High Chakra Pool (Only Wind element users)
Stronger Chakra Points (Depending on your eyes/element)
Great Focus/Perception (Depending on your eyes/element)
I can already review this. High chakra control/concentration + Pool? that is a no go.
Together with stronger chakra points? Humaniod chakra doesn't have any difference. Somebody can either put more chakra or control it better, but the chakra of person A isn't stronger than that of person B.
Hope that will help to make your clan sheet more acceptable. :)
@Lilly
Fox/Broski beat me to a review. I must say that he actually covered the things I had written up... so I will just. well, eat a pancake, I guess.
Before I start with my reviewing, please do note that it is highly appreciated to ;
1. Put a certain sort of title above your post. Put the name of the character and their current location (village or such) above your reaction/post. This makes it easier to know about which character you've written. Kind of makes it easier for those who don't have much time and want to quickly check if their team members have posted, can search it up easier. Would be appreciated. :)
2. If you collab, I must request the same. A title, naming the location and also a summary. A summary doesn't have to be long. Just say which characters are part of it and simple in short what happens or they are going to do. Don't also forget to spoiler or spoili them. That is after all easier for those who again don't always have time to read everything or are quickly searching for something. ;)
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@Akashi
I can't yet say if the clan can take right away an important place in Amegakure. I'm not part of the village and rather thus let somebody of Amegakure decide that. I however can say that :
High Chakra Control/Concentration
Hidden Chakra Techniques.
High Chakra Pool (Only Wind element users)
Stronger Chakra Points (Depending on your eyes/element)
Great Focus/Perception (Depending on your eyes/element)
I can already review this. High chakra control/concentration + Pool? that is a no go.
Together with stronger chakra points? Humaniod chakra doesn't have any difference. Somebody can either put more chakra or control it better, but the chakra of person A isn't stronger than that of person B.
Hope that will help to make your clan sheet more acceptable. :)
@Lilly
Fox/Broski beat me to a review. I must say that he actually covered the things I had written up... so I will just. well, eat a pancake, I guess.