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Thank you for letting me know your thoughts on my CS. If you'd still have me I can rework the points you mentioned and re-submit it.
One thing I'd like to discuss would be his family tree. I dis want the mother to be a witch and the father to be somewhat a successful person.(in any way really, it doesn't have to be in business.) Do you have any suggestions on how this could work with the background lore? My Idea to rework it involved the mother being caught by a member of A.R.M.A. And the only reason she was subdued what because they were using a regalia. Do you think this would fit better?
And I was thinking that the father could be some higher up member who is known to be strong. The reason that I want the dad to be somewhat known and reasonably powerful is that it would tie into Acheron's regalia, "The sons of Zeus". The rape would also tie into his archetype of bad vs evil, which is something he struggles with and is a big thing with his character.
Lastly, about the "good witch", would it work better if she didn't necessarily help human, but instead tried to live peacefully. But A.R.M.A tracked her down because they knew her sister as someone who attacked humans. And the sister just got caught up in it by association.