@alaska
Sorry, my constant roleplaying in the fantasy genre affects the logicalness of my character sometimes. I tend to roleplay that a lot and when roleplaying fantasy, some logics are put aside. At least, in my experience. I'll gladly change that. As you said, it all seemed to be thrown in now that I've seen it clearly. I'll try my hardest to make her right.
As for the understanding part, I didn't mean to sound as if she purposely hid it. I wanted to say that people don't see that part of her because they only see her as childish but I guess I worded it wrong. Or maybe that still needs to be changed?
Should I only change her personality or do you recommend me changing everything. I really hope the third time's the charm. I also hope there isn't like a strike mark. Like, if I get three tries wrong, I'm out or something. I mean, I'd understand if there is but I hope there isn't. Anyway, I'm really sorry for troubling you so much.