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[fieldbox=Battle of Homdar. - Part 1, burlywood]
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The march wasn't so bad. Though it wasn't something that Meilin could honestly state that it was something she enjoyed doing, she was used to long marches. She had her share at the Cho Guards for the past two years. Or were it three? She wasn't honestly too certain about it but at the moment she didn't curse the disciplining and gruesome training of the guard she was a member of. That and she liked to believe that with the experience and events of past days and weeks, next to being so close to getting revenge and, hopefully, her family back, that it gave her strength to carry on.
Arriving at the village of Homdar, it was abandoned by its residents. Creating thus a very eerie situation where it seemed as if the village was inhabited by mere ghosts. Save it from one greybeard who had insisted that he would rather go down fighting for his home than to leave the home he had built with his brother for his family. But other than that greybeard, there was nobody else that remained behind. Making camp in the village, Knvell didn't waste any time with sitting around and waiting for the enemy to get nearby. Scouting parties would be sent to watch and secure the perimeter as some groups were formed to practice and perform drills together.
Much reprieve or free time for Meilin wasn't present. She was assigned to the care of Amund, who made it certain that he didn't joke around. For hours he instructed and trained Meilin in the basics of the shield. At the end of the day, with the sky start to become darker as the night was approaching, Meilin swore that her arms would fall off if she had to train another day with Amund. He was stern and strict but did compliment her if she was getting the move or stance right. It was in a way also fun, to learn a new way to fight. Even though Meilin wasn't sure if fighting with a shield was something she would do later. It felt more natural and better to have her left hand free to either support her movement or perform other actions. But she was allowed to take it easy now that the evening was there.
Enjoying supper, Meilin did briefly interact and join various conversations with the Blackroots. It was quite easy, once more to her surprise. The image of the Blackroots being isolated and anything but fond of outsiders wasn't something that seemed to apply now. Perhaps it was just against those who trespassed in what they considered their own home and land? Or not being able to respect or understand their ways?
The next day most scouts had already relayed information back. The enemy moved in various groups, only to start moving closer and form almost two detachments. The largest was the vanguard, making sure that the rear detachment would be able to move safely. Some scouts had spotted that the rear detachment was the group which had a lot of prisoners with them. Judging from what could have been observed without betraying themselves to the enemy sentries and troops, the scouts had noticed that the prisoners seemed to be unharmed. While the enemy was to be expected in the afternoon, something made them advance slower. Concern and worries started to arise within the host of Lord Blackroot as it wasn't clear why the enemy was moving at a slower pace. Some wondered if the zealots and 'Uchiha' hadn't been able to figure out, somehow, that they would be facing quite some resistance before they would even reach the perimeter of Dalir. Others voiced their concern and worries if they weren't expecting and waiting for more reinforcements from the Uchiha clan lands if they were truly Uchiha. Then reinforcements from Oakrath arrived on horseback. It wasn't a lot of troops but they had been sent in advance of the mustered host that was also on its way.
News also arrived that Hons from the House of Rachon were on the move and would arrive within a day, making as much haste as they were able. It wasn't yet clear on how many the Hons would come but the news did some good for the morale. At the evening, Meilin wasn't able to enjoy some free time. Amund decided it was a perfect time to pick up from the basic training and once more spend hours to teach and instruct Meilin on how to use a shield in battle.
After the training and able to enjoy some dinner, a Blackroot scout party would return with some news. Apparently, the enemy was splitting up in two, starting to move once more. The large vanguard was advancing towards their direction as the smaller detachment was starting to dig and entrench their position.
It was really happening. It was really going to happen. Sitting still Meilin held her eyes closed as the green dye was applied on her face. There weren't a lot of colours to pick from and it wasn't really something she had picked. Amund had picked out of some colours that green would be best for Meilin. Now one of the Blackroots was applying the green substance to her skin, forming simple lines that would portray a certain image of a raven. Once it was done Meilin was allowed to use a small mirror. It had something enchanting to it and yet she barely could recognise herself. A small smile spread on her lips as she would thank the Blackroot who had applied the dye. Gearing up for the coming clash, Meilin wouldn't waste any time to hurry to where the detachment of Amund would group.
Already a large amount of Blackroots, Pinedale Sarutobi and some Hons - probably from Gunnvor's force - were at the spot. They looked rather ready and eager. Though most were talking, there was a certain tension present in the air. Finding Amund, talking with Gunnvor, Meilin would wait at a respectful distance.
After a few moments and exchanges of words, Gunnvor would grab Amund by the wrist before departing with a wide grin plastered on his lips. Meilin shot a look at the large man before she would approach Amund.
"I am ready, sir," Meilin said as she would place a clenched right fist in her chest.
"Good. We will now head out. You will need to stay with me. Let us hope that the Ancestors will grant us the honour of witnessing our future victory," the man said. Even though his manner of phrasing, he sounded rather calm and neutral. Starting to lead the detachment at a good pace, they would head toward what would soon be the field of battle. The enemy would come from the north, likely avoiding the treeline and few hills that would obstruct their vision on the terrain while moving from high ground to lower. Amund's detachment would take up a concealed position at the lower ground, taking cover behind a small hill and the treeline nearby.
Once in position, a silence reigned supreme among the present troops. Nobody said a single word. The tension of before was even more present as everybody seemed to be focused on one thing only: waiting for the signal. The signal that the enemy was approaching and that they could come out to lure them into the trap. While Meilin had perhaps formulated the concept, Knvell Blackroot had made some adjustment. Hopefully, the enemy would be confident enough to take the bait.
While waiting for some of the present warriors and soldiers would check their gear. Seeing if they could unsheathe their weapon without a problem or if they had enough arrows. Not that it decreased the anxious tension that was present.
Then, appearing out of nowhere, was the signal. An imitation of a bird would resonate through the air and cause Amund to whistle softly. Almost as one, the entire group would ready up. Moving forward, the detachment would leave their cover and move into the open.
She felt her heart skipping beats as the signal of Amund sounded. Getting up she felt more alive than ever and yet more terrified than ever. In the presence of skilled warriors and soldiers, shouldn't she be able to throw off the fear? Meilin's face moved into a scowl as she gripped her shield tighter, moving next to Amund as they would form their formation, in open sight.
Looking ahead she could see the opposition. The Zealots and Uchiha formed and readied for battle, clearly surprised by the sudden appearance of Amund's detachment.
Meilin did hope that they were afraid. That they would fear the prospect of dying in a grim and painful way. That they would regret of ever coming here. Of ever commiting the evil that they had done before. And if they didn't, then she would.
A loud thud would move through the air, followed by others. Slamming the back of his axe against his shield, others followed. No shouts, curses or insults rang. Only the solemn sound of weapons bashing against shields, chests or the bottom of spears against the ground.
The Zealot and Uchiha force then seemed to move forward. The rhythm on which Amund's forces were bashing their weapons against shields, chests and the ground increased. Suddenly a few of them shouted curses and insults in Chonobi, towards the address of their foes. It was unlikely that they would hear, let alone understand, it from the current distance. From the looks of it, the enemy formation did increase their pacing once they caught the sight that Amund's force wasn't even half their numbers. A few banners displaying the crest of the Uchiha would become visible as a small group would start to run towards them, the sound of battle cries moving through the air, heralding their charge.
"Cho," Amund said in a stern tone, "Don't be dismayed. We will meet this threat head on," raising the volume of his voice, Amund stopped bashing the back of his axe against his shield. Others would stop as well, becoming silent. "Whether we die today or in another battle, our ancestors smile upon us! Fight well and if you fall, surely Lord Akumu will take you into his hall! Lord Akumu!"
The name would be repeated, shouted by all those under Amund's command as they would ready up. While the charging enemy was closing in fast, not all of them would even come close. Arrows would be unleashed from their bows, flying as angry wasps through the air before finding their mark.
Soon enough more followed but this time arrows would come from a different direction. Zealots and Uchiha fell to the ground as arrows shot from the treelines, from their right direction, but not revealing who was unleashing the projectiles. Soon enough this would be repeated from yet another direction as it became clear to the enemy that they were surrounded. Battle cries in Chonobi rang through the air as more enemies would fall on the ground and the formation of the Zealots and Uchiha started to fall apart. Confused and in disarray the enemy tried to figure out on what they should focus while under heavy fire. "With me!" Amund shouted as he would storm forwards, followed by the others.
Meilin held her eyes locked on the enemy in front of them. The sight of arows causing men to fall down to the ground wasn't soothing her anger or thirst for revenge and their blood. Biting her lower lip she tried to focus on her breathing for a moment, gripping the handle of her shield and axe tighter. Waiting for the command to storm the enemy formation.
Amund then signalled the charge and as if she was an arrow released from a bow, Meilin ran forwards. She didn't run too fast to disturb the line but her blood was boiling. Her anger and desire, to hurt those zealots and Uchiha, were like a starving boggart, spotting prey just in front of it.
Moving her shield in front of her, Meilin unleashed a battle cry just before her world would tremble. Colliding right into the confused line of enemies that tried to brace themselves against the charge, Meilin twisted her body to press her weight against her shield. The man that had the unfortunate fate to be the target of her charge was stumbling backwards into one of his allies. Pressing on Meilin gritted her teeth. So far she could notice she was right in the middle of the fight as she and the others were using their shields to form a wall of wood and steel, slowly starting to push the enemy backwards.
"Lord Akumu!" Meilin would shout before slightly shifting her weight and stance. Using her axe, she would do as Amund had trained her to do. Lowering her shield by a slight margin the Cho would slip the weapon over it and deliver a quick hack at the man in front of her. Blood splattered against the steel blade of the axe and shield but Meilin would quickly raise the shield and start to push again.
To her left, however, a sound caught her attention. The man at her left would curse out loud as he would stumble and fall on one knee before the tip of a spear from the ranks of the enemy found its way to ending his life. While his place was quickly taken, it enraged Meilin more. Narrowing her eyes she tried to push even harder, not caring as the man at the other side attempted to stab over her shield.
Lowering herself, Meilin would slide her axe past her shield and shove the blade into the man's side. Hearing a painful grunt from the other side didn't satisfy her just yet. Slipping the axe back, Meilin would wait for another chance while staying on guard that the man at the other side of her shield wouldn't land a hit on her.
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The Battle of Homdar!
A collab between Alice and Oetje.
Summary:
Moving from Dalir, Meilin marches and joins the forces under command of Knvell Sarutobi, otherwise known as the Lord of the Blackroots, and what appears to be one of his subjects, Gunnvor Hon. At Homdar, Meilin prepares with Amund Sarutobi, Knvell's son, for the battle. Then the news spreads about the enemy advancing. The battle of Homdar begins thus as the skies will blot out the sun and ravens take flight.
*Note:
I, Oetje, will try to write most of the battle. Not because Meilin is a PC but I have little experience on how to portray a battle or clash between two armed groups. I will try to do my best and hope it will provide some entertainment, as I am also looking forward to some hints and tips on how to portray it better in the future!*
A collab between Alice and Oetje.
Summary:
Moving from Dalir, Meilin marches and joins the forces under command of Knvell Sarutobi, otherwise known as the Lord of the Blackroots, and what appears to be one of his subjects, Gunnvor Hon. At Homdar, Meilin prepares with Amund Sarutobi, Knvell's son, for the battle. Then the news spreads about the enemy advancing. The battle of Homdar begins thus as the skies will blot out the sun and ravens take flight.
*Note:
I, Oetje, will try to write most of the battle. Not because Meilin is a PC but I have little experience on how to portray a battle or clash between two armed groups. I will try to do my best and hope it will provide some entertainment, as I am also looking forward to some hints and tips on how to portray it better in the future!*
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The march wasn't so bad. Though it wasn't something that Meilin could honestly state that it was something she enjoyed doing, she was used to long marches. She had her share at the Cho Guards for the past two years. Or were it three? She wasn't honestly too certain about it but at the moment she didn't curse the disciplining and gruesome training of the guard she was a member of. That and she liked to believe that with the experience and events of past days and weeks, next to being so close to getting revenge and, hopefully, her family back, that it gave her strength to carry on.
Arriving at the village of Homdar, it was abandoned by its residents. Creating thus a very eerie situation where it seemed as if the village was inhabited by mere ghosts. Save it from one greybeard who had insisted that he would rather go down fighting for his home than to leave the home he had built with his brother for his family. But other than that greybeard, there was nobody else that remained behind. Making camp in the village, Knvell didn't waste any time with sitting around and waiting for the enemy to get nearby. Scouting parties would be sent to watch and secure the perimeter as some groups were formed to practice and perform drills together.
Much reprieve or free time for Meilin wasn't present. She was assigned to the care of Amund, who made it certain that he didn't joke around. For hours he instructed and trained Meilin in the basics of the shield. At the end of the day, with the sky start to become darker as the night was approaching, Meilin swore that her arms would fall off if she had to train another day with Amund. He was stern and strict but did compliment her if she was getting the move or stance right. It was in a way also fun, to learn a new way to fight. Even though Meilin wasn't sure if fighting with a shield was something she would do later. It felt more natural and better to have her left hand free to either support her movement or perform other actions. But she was allowed to take it easy now that the evening was there.
Enjoying supper, Meilin did briefly interact and join various conversations with the Blackroots. It was quite easy, once more to her surprise. The image of the Blackroots being isolated and anything but fond of outsiders wasn't something that seemed to apply now. Perhaps it was just against those who trespassed in what they considered their own home and land? Or not being able to respect or understand their ways?
The next day most scouts had already relayed information back. The enemy moved in various groups, only to start moving closer and form almost two detachments. The largest was the vanguard, making sure that the rear detachment would be able to move safely. Some scouts had spotted that the rear detachment was the group which had a lot of prisoners with them. Judging from what could have been observed without betraying themselves to the enemy sentries and troops, the scouts had noticed that the prisoners seemed to be unharmed. While the enemy was to be expected in the afternoon, something made them advance slower. Concern and worries started to arise within the host of Lord Blackroot as it wasn't clear why the enemy was moving at a slower pace. Some wondered if the zealots and 'Uchiha' hadn't been able to figure out, somehow, that they would be facing quite some resistance before they would even reach the perimeter of Dalir. Others voiced their concern and worries if they weren't expecting and waiting for more reinforcements from the Uchiha clan lands if they were truly Uchiha. Then reinforcements from Oakrath arrived on horseback. It wasn't a lot of troops but they had been sent in advance of the mustered host that was also on its way.
News also arrived that Hons from the House of Rachon were on the move and would arrive within a day, making as much haste as they were able. It wasn't yet clear on how many the Hons would come but the news did some good for the morale. At the evening, Meilin wasn't able to enjoy some free time. Amund decided it was a perfect time to pick up from the basic training and once more spend hours to teach and instruct Meilin on how to use a shield in battle.
After the training and able to enjoy some dinner, a Blackroot scout party would return with some news. Apparently, the enemy was splitting up in two, starting to move once more. The large vanguard was advancing towards their direction as the smaller detachment was starting to dig and entrench their position.
The Battle of Homdar.
It was really happening. It was really going to happen. Sitting still Meilin held her eyes closed as the green dye was applied on her face. There weren't a lot of colours to pick from and it wasn't really something she had picked. Amund had picked out of some colours that green would be best for Meilin. Now one of the Blackroots was applying the green substance to her skin, forming simple lines that would portray a certain image of a raven. Once it was done Meilin was allowed to use a small mirror. It had something enchanting to it and yet she barely could recognise herself. A small smile spread on her lips as she would thank the Blackroot who had applied the dye. Gearing up for the coming clash, Meilin wouldn't waste any time to hurry to where the detachment of Amund would group.
Already a large amount of Blackroots, Pinedale Sarutobi and some Hons - probably from Gunnvor's force - were at the spot. They looked rather ready and eager. Though most were talking, there was a certain tension present in the air. Finding Amund, talking with Gunnvor, Meilin would wait at a respectful distance.
After a few moments and exchanges of words, Gunnvor would grab Amund by the wrist before departing with a wide grin plastered on his lips. Meilin shot a look at the large man before she would approach Amund.
"I am ready, sir," Meilin said as she would place a clenched right fist in her chest.
"Good. We will now head out. You will need to stay with me. Let us hope that the Ancestors will grant us the honour of witnessing our future victory," the man said. Even though his manner of phrasing, he sounded rather calm and neutral. Starting to lead the detachment at a good pace, they would head toward what would soon be the field of battle. The enemy would come from the north, likely avoiding the treeline and few hills that would obstruct their vision on the terrain while moving from high ground to lower. Amund's detachment would take up a concealed position at the lower ground, taking cover behind a small hill and the treeline nearby.
Once in position, a silence reigned supreme among the present troops. Nobody said a single word. The tension of before was even more present as everybody seemed to be focused on one thing only: waiting for the signal. The signal that the enemy was approaching and that they could come out to lure them into the trap. While Meilin had perhaps formulated the concept, Knvell Blackroot had made some adjustment. Hopefully, the enemy would be confident enough to take the bait.
While waiting for some of the present warriors and soldiers would check their gear. Seeing if they could unsheathe their weapon without a problem or if they had enough arrows. Not that it decreased the anxious tension that was present.
Then, appearing out of nowhere, was the signal. An imitation of a bird would resonate through the air and cause Amund to whistle softly. Almost as one, the entire group would ready up. Moving forward, the detachment would leave their cover and move into the open.
She felt her heart skipping beats as the signal of Amund sounded. Getting up she felt more alive than ever and yet more terrified than ever. In the presence of skilled warriors and soldiers, shouldn't she be able to throw off the fear? Meilin's face moved into a scowl as she gripped her shield tighter, moving next to Amund as they would form their formation, in open sight.
Looking ahead she could see the opposition. The Zealots and Uchiha formed and readied for battle, clearly surprised by the sudden appearance of Amund's detachment.
Meilin did hope that they were afraid. That they would fear the prospect of dying in a grim and painful way. That they would regret of ever coming here. Of ever commiting the evil that they had done before. And if they didn't, then she would.
A loud thud would move through the air, followed by others. Slamming the back of his axe against his shield, others followed. No shouts, curses or insults rang. Only the solemn sound of weapons bashing against shields, chests or the bottom of spears against the ground.
The Zealot and Uchiha force then seemed to move forward. The rhythm on which Amund's forces were bashing their weapons against shields, chests and the ground increased. Suddenly a few of them shouted curses and insults in Chonobi, towards the address of their foes. It was unlikely that they would hear, let alone understand, it from the current distance. From the looks of it, the enemy formation did increase their pacing once they caught the sight that Amund's force wasn't even half their numbers. A few banners displaying the crest of the Uchiha would become visible as a small group would start to run towards them, the sound of battle cries moving through the air, heralding their charge.
"Cho," Amund said in a stern tone, "Don't be dismayed. We will meet this threat head on," raising the volume of his voice, Amund stopped bashing the back of his axe against his shield. Others would stop as well, becoming silent. "Whether we die today or in another battle, our ancestors smile upon us! Fight well and if you fall, surely Lord Akumu will take you into his hall! Lord Akumu!"
The name would be repeated, shouted by all those under Amund's command as they would ready up. While the charging enemy was closing in fast, not all of them would even come close. Arrows would be unleashed from their bows, flying as angry wasps through the air before finding their mark.
Soon enough more followed but this time arrows would come from a different direction. Zealots and Uchiha fell to the ground as arrows shot from the treelines, from their right direction, but not revealing who was unleashing the projectiles. Soon enough this would be repeated from yet another direction as it became clear to the enemy that they were surrounded. Battle cries in Chonobi rang through the air as more enemies would fall on the ground and the formation of the Zealots and Uchiha started to fall apart. Confused and in disarray the enemy tried to figure out on what they should focus while under heavy fire. "With me!" Amund shouted as he would storm forwards, followed by the others.
Meilin held her eyes locked on the enemy in front of them. The sight of arows causing men to fall down to the ground wasn't soothing her anger or thirst for revenge and their blood. Biting her lower lip she tried to focus on her breathing for a moment, gripping the handle of her shield and axe tighter. Waiting for the command to storm the enemy formation.
Amund then signalled the charge and as if she was an arrow released from a bow, Meilin ran forwards. She didn't run too fast to disturb the line but her blood was boiling. Her anger and desire, to hurt those zealots and Uchiha, were like a starving boggart, spotting prey just in front of it.
Moving her shield in front of her, Meilin unleashed a battle cry just before her world would tremble. Colliding right into the confused line of enemies that tried to brace themselves against the charge, Meilin twisted her body to press her weight against her shield. The man that had the unfortunate fate to be the target of her charge was stumbling backwards into one of his allies. Pressing on Meilin gritted her teeth. So far she could notice she was right in the middle of the fight as she and the others were using their shields to form a wall of wood and steel, slowly starting to push the enemy backwards.
"Lord Akumu!" Meilin would shout before slightly shifting her weight and stance. Using her axe, she would do as Amund had trained her to do. Lowering her shield by a slight margin the Cho would slip the weapon over it and deliver a quick hack at the man in front of her. Blood splattered against the steel blade of the axe and shield but Meilin would quickly raise the shield and start to push again.
To her left, however, a sound caught her attention. The man at her left would curse out loud as he would stumble and fall on one knee before the tip of a spear from the ranks of the enemy found its way to ending his life. While his place was quickly taken, it enraged Meilin more. Narrowing her eyes she tried to push even harder, not caring as the man at the other side attempted to stab over her shield.
Lowering herself, Meilin would slide her axe past her shield and shove the blade into the man's side. Hearing a painful grunt from the other side didn't satisfy her just yet. Slipping the axe back, Meilin would wait for another chance while staying on guard that the man at the other side of her shield wouldn't land a hit on her.
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