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Will head off and fix that all now! ^^ As for plant control it in a way relates to her water being able to revitalize and help them grow.Sorry that it's taken me this long to get back to you, hun ;o
I was writing up a rather intense backstory for Cardboard Castles.
Anyways, I adore your character, Zeraphina is exactly how I envisioned the Summer Queen, and I always love knowing people think like me, haha.
I only have a couple notes, nothing to bad ♥
1) I'm assuming your 'general appearance' section is still a work-in-progress :)?
2) I was curious as to what you meant by "minor in plant control"?
3) I didn't see an official strengths or weaknesses section, however, I assume that's all the stuff underneath Zeraphina's general personality, so I was hoping that you could preface/mark-off which ones are strengths, and which are weaknesses. Colour-code, or something like that.
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4) Seeing as Fire and Water are so so so opposite, I'm going to have to ask you to remove either Pyrokenisis, or Hydrokenisis, mostly because both of those are EXTREMELY powerful magics, and seeing as Zera is so gifted with water, she can go to great lengths with that. I've found it to be somewhat OP in previous RP's to have the ability of opposite elemental control.
ASIDE FROM THAT, EVERYTHING IS FANTASTIC, I LOVE HER AND CANNOT WAIT TO READ THE REST OF THE HISTORY AS WELL AS SEE HER IN ACTION.
P.S Poor baby-zera, you make me cry real tears, Shayla.
P.S ~ Awwww... Well you best be ready for it does become worse and cry worthy than happy once more.