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Uh... @Winter. Few problems with your latest IC. First of all it's barely been a little over 5 hours since your last post, you shouldn't be posting another IC so soon after your last; we strive to have it been once per day so as to prevent speed posting and making it become overly difficult for people to read and keep up to date with. You didn't need to post again so soon.
Secondly, you shouldn't (and this goes for everyone as well) be detailing your character's backstory via lengthy flashbacks or otherwise yet in the IC. The second part of the rp's only just begun and it's much, much, much too soon for any of the characters to be doing so, especially when the focus of the current chapter's storyline isn't dependant on it. I can tell you're excited for the rp but patience is a virtue so please exercise it!
Thirdly, even within a flashback I'd prefer for characters to not be exercising any lethality towards anybody else. This clashes with what I'm building with the tonal atmosphere of the rp where characters do not pursue a killing of an opponent. Even if it was within a war, I don't want to see it. I could have been open to it depending on whether or not I was asked prior but even then stuff like this is still much too soon to be detailing.
Lastly... you didn't call the posting of this either. o.o I don't know what's been going on today but it's been weird? You called a post early this morning and then didn't post until ten hours later - when calling a post people should be posting their IC within the next hour, so as to allow everyone else to not post during that time as well as not keep everybody waiting. And when you did eventually make your post for the day you didn't call it.
I would honestly like for you to remove the contents of that flashback from your post and to bear in mind the general rules and stipulations regarding to IC posting and OOC calling, please.
Secondly, you shouldn't (and this goes for everyone as well) be detailing your character's backstory via lengthy flashbacks or otherwise yet in the IC. The second part of the rp's only just begun and it's much, much, much too soon for any of the characters to be doing so, especially when the focus of the current chapter's storyline isn't dependant on it. I can tell you're excited for the rp but patience is a virtue so please exercise it!
Thirdly, even within a flashback I'd prefer for characters to not be exercising any lethality towards anybody else. This clashes with what I'm building with the tonal atmosphere of the rp where characters do not pursue a killing of an opponent. Even if it was within a war, I don't want to see it. I could have been open to it depending on whether or not I was asked prior but even then stuff like this is still much too soon to be detailing.
Lastly... you didn't call the posting of this either. o.o I don't know what's been going on today but it's been weird? You called a post early this morning and then didn't post until ten hours later - when calling a post people should be posting their IC within the next hour, so as to allow everyone else to not post during that time as well as not keep everybody waiting. And when you did eventually make your post for the day you didn't call it.
I would honestly like for you to remove the contents of that flashback from your post and to bear in mind the general rules and stipulations regarding to IC posting and OOC calling, please.