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Holy cow the edits.XD I wasn't complaining! I'm honestly having fun thinking of the possibilities of where to go from here...
Edit: Besides, the "sand dollar" thing makes sense to me now. And if it is sand dollar-shaped then that's pretty much exactly what I was thinking of before when I said "ball-ish", so... yeah, we're all good in that regard.
Edit2: Plus, now Roxanne and Calder have noticed us! This just gets even more interesting... I'd be rather disappointed if you changed it now, honestly. XD
Edit3: Unless you were only referring to clearing up the whole thing about the size of the water-helmet when you said you would re-write it. But I think that could easily be handled with a simple edit instead of needing to re-write the post completely, so... o3o
Okay, I'll rewrite the size/shape part of the water to be more "sand dollar". Also @PoetLore your post seems to jump backwards in time to before Raymond encounters Roxanne and Calder, d'you think I ought to remove the stuff that happens when Raymond encounters them in my post? I do think that'd be best; Raymond would be walking off with the man just behind him, and then catch sight of the newcomers now.