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malina
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@Rook
1. Yeah, I'll change the town's location np. As long as it's still a port.
2. lol gd. I'll change the crow size part too. That means like a lot of her history is going to get revamped so it might take some time P:
I'll try to make it quick though if you're looking to start this rp soon lool.
3. I can change her title from Angel to Crusader. Or maybe that would be too heretical? Idk.
Can you give me some more information on the crusaders? Would they be similar to knights?
4. I thought the clipped wings would be useful for whenever she did outcalls. I'm sure some rich ppl wouldn't want to come all the way down to some brothel. I was thinking of house parties and such. Also I really liked the imagery of a clipped wing angel lool
About Mite's suggestion: Idk if they were ever gonna cut her wings off lol - they're her main thing, like the whole appeal of her. They clipped them so she wouldn't fly away on outcalls and such (cos she's not gonna stay inside forever :P). I can go with the dye thing but idk if they would dye them enough for the poison to be regular. Are black wings not attractive? maybe too much handling = feather rot = ruined wings? idk
The main reason why I wanted her wings to be gone was b/c i wanted her to be wishy washy over her Inguz heritage. I wanted some part of her to regret the fact that her wings were gone -irreversibly- which is why i also made her indecisive on magic (like if there was a spell to glamour/turn her into human vs restore her wings, which one she'd take is up in the air). It's not so much that she hates being an Inguz, it's people's reactions to it (though she probably doesn't view it that way atm and is more in a self-hating phase rn).
so yeah i was originally gonna have it so that she'd cut off her own wings in some extreme self hatred kinda thing but idk. i feel like that kinda thing's been overplayed but if i cant think of anything better im just going to go that route - unless anyone has sum good ideas :D
*she was gon escape but have her wings break in the process and be like omg these things SUUUUCKK like they cant even save me and then like cut them off but i was thinking like... how would she survive that bloodloss and stuff ? :oo maybe with the new laws someone sympathetic to the Inguz can help her out?*
*or mayb with that whole feather rot idea i mentioned earlier she could be kicked out the brothel b/c her wings suck now and stuff happens? lol*
also ik I use the word "medicine" a lot but i felt like "drug" was too modern... and herbs sounded weird lmao.
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mayb ill call it "ice" for the numbing effect.
1. Yeah, I'll change the town's location np. As long as it's still a port.
2. lol gd. I'll change the crow size part too. That means like a lot of her history is going to get revamped so it might take some time P:
I'll try to make it quick though if you're looking to start this rp soon lool.
3. I can change her title from Angel to Crusader. Or maybe that would be too heretical? Idk.
Can you give me some more information on the crusaders? Would they be similar to knights?
4. I thought the clipped wings would be useful for whenever she did outcalls. I'm sure some rich ppl wouldn't want to come all the way down to some brothel. I was thinking of house parties and such. Also I really liked the imagery of a clipped wing angel lool
About Mite's suggestion: Idk if they were ever gonna cut her wings off lol - they're her main thing, like the whole appeal of her. They clipped them so she wouldn't fly away on outcalls and such (cos she's not gonna stay inside forever :P). I can go with the dye thing but idk if they would dye them enough for the poison to be regular. Are black wings not attractive? maybe too much handling = feather rot = ruined wings? idk
The main reason why I wanted her wings to be gone was b/c i wanted her to be wishy washy over her Inguz heritage. I wanted some part of her to regret the fact that her wings were gone -irreversibly- which is why i also made her indecisive on magic (like if there was a spell to glamour/turn her into human vs restore her wings, which one she'd take is up in the air). It's not so much that she hates being an Inguz, it's people's reactions to it (though she probably doesn't view it that way atm and is more in a self-hating phase rn).
so yeah i was originally gonna have it so that she'd cut off her own wings in some extreme self hatred kinda thing but idk. i feel like that kinda thing's been overplayed but if i cant think of anything better im just going to go that route - unless anyone has sum good ideas :D
*she was gon escape but have her wings break in the process and be like omg these things SUUUUCKK like they cant even save me and then like cut them off but i was thinking like... how would she survive that bloodloss and stuff ? :oo maybe with the new laws someone sympathetic to the Inguz can help her out?*
*or mayb with that whole feather rot idea i mentioned earlier she could be kicked out the brothel b/c her wings suck now and stuff happens? lol*
also ik I use the word "medicine" a lot but i felt like "drug" was too modern... and herbs sounded weird lmao.
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mayb ill call it "ice" for the numbing effect.