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I've never known you to be anything but. I was just being playful.Good, @HellHoundWoof I know you and you know me, I will not be biased and I will be fair
I've never known you to be anything but. I was just being playful.Good, @HellHoundWoof I know you and you know me, I will not be biased and I will be fair
I'll be honest though, your character does make me uncomfortable, especially the note of interest and the fact that he has a hate for aliens, covenant or not. How is a character like that to maintain a stable development when he realistically wouldn't pass a mental eval?I've never known you to be anything but. I was just being playful.
I mean, were he actually able to be a spartan III, the hate toward aliens would be sensible seeing as how spartan IIIs were largely vengeful orphans taken from colonies who had been attacked by covenant, but seeing as how he CAN'T be a spartan III....I'll be honest though, your character does make me uncomfortable, especially the note of interest and the fact that he has a hate for aliens, covenant or not. How is a character like that to maintain a stable development when he realistically wouldn't pass a mental eval?
exactly point, also...your history suggests your spartan is a spartan among spartans like the MC himself which is something I will not allow.I mean, were he actually able to be a spartan III, the hate toward aliens would be sensible seeing as how spartan IIIs were largely vengeful orphans taken from colonies who had been attacked by covenant, but seeing as how he CAN'T be a spartan III....
I had no intention of writing him into an OP way. If you can tell me the points where he seems like he's OP in his history I will more than happily correct. The Redacted bits are just because I'm somewhat lazy when it comes to writing histories.exactly point, also...your history suggests your spartan is a spartan among spartans like the MC himself which is something I will not allow.
Name: Nikolai Arkaden No last name
Nick-/Codename: Grim
Designation: S420 Fix this
Age: 26 Dial that age up
Gender: Male
Height: 230 cm (240 cm in armor)
Weight: 150kg (480 kgs in armor)
Species: Augmented Human/Spartan-V
Eye Color: Green
Hair Color: Black
Branch: UNSC Navy
Rate: Petty Officer 1st Class (E-6)
Assignment: UNSC Maelstrom, SPARTAN Platoon Sigil
Position: SPARTAN Commando
AI: None
Combat Role: Infantry
Armor Color/Distinguishing Marks:
Black with two red horns painted on top of his helmet. The armor has suffered severe cosmetic damage, however still functions properly.
Weapons Loadout:
- MA5D Assault Rifle
-BR85 Heavy Battle Rifle
-Magnum
-Combat Knife
-Energy Weapon
-2 Fragmentation Grenades
-2 Plasma Grenades
-Armor Lock
Appearance:
His body is mostly without scars, unlike his face.
Personality: Grim unlike his name, is actually quite friendly. It's been reported that he might enjoy his job too much but many are thankful for his enthusiasm on the field. He's open to jokes about his face from friends but will quickly silence anyone else who brings up his extensive scarring. He has a dangerous dislike for the covenant and distrusts many of them. Expect a character with this attitude to be put down quickly by others, and I do not mean killed.
Hobbies: Many would assume the large hands of a man his size would not be capable of small detailed tasks. However the large man loves to whittle and tinker with small objects.
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Notes of Interest: He is a viscous combatant and his record precedes him(We'd know that if it wasn't all in red block like he was special black ops case). Most notably he once surprised a Sangheili by crippling it's knees with his rifle, then grabbing it by the upper jaw and wrenching it's neck back and upwards. Ripping it's head off with some difficulty.(Not only does that sound outlandish but it suggests despite what the words say, that he had no real problem if he was able to surprise an elite and not only break it's neck, but pull the head off completely in one go. So for him to be able to do that with minimal effort, why is he even with Team Sigil?) However to meet the man outside of combat you could hardly tell he had the capacity for the acts he's committed.
(Happy to change anything I need to change, it's been some time since I versed myself in my HALO lore.)
I notice you simply copy and pasted a loadout rather than being creative. That shows laziness and I dislike laziness, please fix it.Name: Nikolai-655
Nick-/Codename: Grim
Designation: S655
Age: 30
Gender: Male
Height: 230 cm (240 cm in armor)
Weight: 150kg (480 kgs in armor)
Species: Augmented Human/Spartan-V
Eye Color: Green
Hair Color: Black
Branch: UNSC Navy
Rate: SPARTAN (E-3)
Assignment: UNSC Maelstrom, SPARTAN Platoon Sigil
Position: SPARTAN Commando
AI: None
Combat Role: Infantry
Armor Color/Distinguishing Marks:
Black with two red horns painted on top of his helmet. The armor has suffered severe cosmetic damage, however still functions properly.
Weapons Loadout:
- MA5D Assault Rifle
-BR85 Heavy Battle Rifle
-Magnum
-Combat Knife
-Energy Weapon
-2 Fragmentation Grenades
-2 Plasma Grenades
-Armor Lock
Well my Kig'Yar is somewhat below average in height and weight for species, I don't see why a human couldn't be slightly over average. It is JUST height and weight. If anything, that just makes him a bigger target. Averages are just a guideline, after all. It's not like he's making himself an andre the giant.I notice you simply copy and pasted a loadout rather than being creative. That shows laziness and I dislike laziness, please fix it.
Your character's height's a bit worrying, my character is barely cresting 6'8 out of armor and you expect me to believe this man is 7'5 ft out of armor and only a bit taller in armor? You realize that during the SPARTAN IV program the vast majority if the spartans were only about 6'6 or so thanks to their augmentations. That height along with the weight is going to have to come down.
Perhaps, it is certainly the absolute most over the average high for height i would allowThe fact that a sort of height like this extremely rare is why
Okay, the copy and pasting a loadout bit. He's an infantry guy, and it lists the infantry loadout. I was given the freedom to pick a secondary weapon so I chose something simple and practical.I notice you simply copy and pasted a loadout rather than being creative. That shows laziness and I dislike laziness, please fix it.
Your character's height's a bit worrying, my character is barely cresting 6'8 out of armor and you expect me to believe this man is 7'5 ft out of armor and only a bit taller in armor? You realize that during the SPARTAN IV program the vast majority if the spartans were only about 6'6 or so thanks to their augmentations. That height along with the weight is going to have to come down.
Pardon?@ Stryder given the age disparity, if you're aiming for the characters to be closer to thirty we'll have to adjust a fair amount of the SPARTANs' ages.
Basically when it came to you having him elevate the age afer I asked him to reduce it to keep our V's clo.ser the same ages as their colleagues (25-28).Pardon?
Or he could just go with all the ages that are currently there....Basically when it came to you having him elevate the age afer I asked him to reduce it to keep our V's clo.ser the same ages as their colleagues (25-28).