as far as actual faults with teh sheet, gavin covered them all pretty well.
my current thought, however, is that Iapetus should have observed most of those himself without being told. The fact that looking over his own CS, he did not see these as issues, informs me that he is likely not a very experienced player. Now I don;t hold this against you Iap, everyone has to start somewhere and you've been a lot more gracious than other beginners I've had the misfortune to deal with before. But teh fact remains that i think your current experience level is a bit too low for this roleplay. Judging by the stubbornness of our dea GM mr gavin, i doubt he will ever let this thing die lol, so you can rest assured that we aren't going anywhere. It's my personal opinion that if you came back in, say, a month or two, enough time to get one or two more Iwaku rps under your belt, you'd find it much easier to integrate yourself into this roleplay and, subsequently, enjoy it that much more.
of course that's simply my opinion, you're free to give it as much or little weight as you wish.
