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CookieMonster
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Part of the problem is that I wrote that bio a long time ago, and about fifty percent of it was rewritten, and another part of the problem is that I got the idea for her to be trained AFTER I posted her CS and literally five minutes before I started writing.I was a little surprised to see all the stuff about Kate that...well, wasn't mentioned anywhere in her bio. It's hinted at, and clearly picks up enough to let one know very well what was going on and what her life was like, but it's a bit of a stretch to go from "she met a guy who offered to take her in and train her" to...everything else. Lot of ground that wasn't covered, all right. It's covered pretty clearly now, but part of me did think it could have been covered a bit in her bio. Not that my opinion matters in the end, and it's a pretty good read so far.
This was more-or-less me. *Write a line* Hm.. No. *Erase a line* ...What do I do next? *Write something really bad* Gah.. *Erase the really bad writing* Seriously, brain, c'mon. I need you to help me out now. OOH! *Write a page and a half about an evil compound that suppressed her abilities to make her under their control* Should I re-write the bio now? Cause I put way too much that wasn't in there. *Realizes it's about 2 am in the morning.* Er.. Eh. I'mma go with it.
Honestly, I don't know where the ideas even come from. The problem is, If I don't go with the idea I'll spend the next half-hour trying to write something decent but I'll come down with a heavy case of writer's block because nothing makes sense than the idea that may or may not be super crazy.
Also.. there is an arch I'm messing with in my head that will later make sense about the training and the compound and everything.
What I was more or less going for was kind of a Division slash Daredevil kind of twist. (Y'know, Stick.)
Although, I may do some extra stuff later that all ties it together. I just needed to set roots down before I grew a tree.
(Thumbs up for that awesome metaphor, eh?.)
Oh, crap! I didn't even know his was silver. It was probably mentioned in his post, I'm sorry, I didn't remember. 60% of my writing is looking up google images of sci-fi stuff to get a mental image before I even start the post, because most of my writing comes from mental images/ideas and I experiment with them. And after writing the post I totally forgot to even put the image in.Ah. Well. I guess that makes sense as to why I didn't see the supersuit until your first IC post. That being said, you laid the roots for it in her "can build anything" skill, and I apparently didn't use all my brains to figure out that there could also be a supersuit. That's my bad. I took that more as a hand-wavey thing than a stone-cold-fact. That's what I get for reading a lot of speculative writing recently.
Hm. I need to alter the color of his suit to be different from yours. Since his was also silver.
Now to play, pin-the-tail-on-the-hex-code. And avoid silver, grey or blue. ^^