- Posting Speed
- 1-3 posts per day
- Writing Levels
- Elementary
- Intermediate
- Adept
- Preferred Character Gender
- Male
- Female
- Transgender
- Genres
- Fantasy, Scifi, Modern, Magical, Horror, PG-13 Romance, Modern Fantasy, High Fantasy
There isn't lightning. I just missed editing it out on the first page. That's my bad not yours. Thank you for pointing it out.
Diyanna is seen to have long wavy white hair that goes past her hips but its usually worn in an updo or a long braid with a purple flower ornament. Standing at 5''8 she has a slender yet curvy body that is usually covered with fitted purple fabric; usually short skirts with black fabric pants that stop mid-thigh. As a child she adored her lavender painted eyes and since then has been obsessed with the color. Her sense for jewelry goes for unique things, which include her favorite long beaded blue colored earring. Which she pierced and created herself. Diya has sleeves that aren't attached to her outfits usually, made with the fur of creatures she's possibly hunted in the past. She keeps her sword attached to her hip as well as a small little bag of money and the jewels she considers her pretty little treasures.
Username: Karma200
Name: Diyanna
Age: 25 years old
Gender: Female
Race: Elf
Class: Mage
Specialization: Arcane Magic
Weapons: Wind tome, ice tome, lightning and ice tomes (I'm a bit confused, is there or is there not lightning? In the "types of magic" is doesn't have lightning but in the "Available Classes" there is lightning mentioned. Also... can I just put Arcane tomes-professional?)
Alliance: Neutral
Mount:
While Diyanna is most definitely a flirt, there's a part of her that no one knows. When interacting with others she talks with confidence, an energy that would stun many and an elegance that would be shocking if she wasn't an elf. Diyanna considers herself a "lady among ladies" even though she most definitely doesn't mind getting her hands dirty if its necessary. With a large pride Diyanna refuses to ever bow down to someone, even if it means putting her life on the line. No way would she allow herself to be killed to have people whisper that she'd bent down and given someone who pointed death right in her face the chance to take her life away. Even though Diyanna has an open way of treating everyone she doesn't trust them but once you earn it, her loyalty goes deep and she feels more obliged to help protect them. Which isn't something she's to use to doing. At all. Diya tends to lie a lot to those she doesn't know, spinning a story of a life she believes would've been interesting to live or just making up what seems convenient. So its best not to believe every word she says... if you can even tell when she's lying. Despite her positive yet sarcastic way towards others Diyanna has her dark side. A side she herself dislikes but has accepted because if she didn't accept it, where would it go? When in battle Diyanna is merciless and doesn't mind cutting down an enemy that is begging for his/her life and later on she won't hesitate to allow the regret and anger rage within her. Once it bypasses she'll go back to how she usually is and tries not to think about it.
Ah, this is a story Diyanna remembers well. A story that Diyanna prefers to keep closed and kept in the bookshelf of her mind. Since before her birth Diyanna's father truly hated human beings and while he put up with their own distaste towards his elfish kind, he worked hard and supported his small family that would soon be 3. At the age of 5 years old he got fed up and decided to leave the village (within Balefall)... as well as the family. Diyanna's mother had a strong dream to live in peace with the humans and for their kind to become one and so she never left the village. Growing up Diyanna didn't understand why humans disliked their kind as she was bullied and looked down upon by the human children, being called "dirty". It didn't take long before Diya started to fight back whenever the humans started a fight. Her "bad" behavior caused the people at her mother's job to gossip and criticize, talking horribly about the family of elves but it didn't take long until Diyanna learned. The negative lifestyle they lived took a toll on Diya's mother with each passing month and a week after Diyanna turned 8 years old she found her mother dead on the floor of her living room.
This forced Diyanna to learn how to take care of herself, not that she didn't know how but it only took half a month before the village found out her mother was dead and put their small house up for sale... after destroying it and rebuilding it. Diyanna didn't have time to weep for her mother as she had to learn how to get food on her own in the forest 30 minutes away from the village. Being alone Diya turned into a swift and silent thief known among the villagers as someone who seemed to slip into the shadows a second after she appeared. Because she didn't know much Diyanna traveled into the nearest Kingdom and hid within the shadows as she watched noble women walking around. She copied their manners, the way they spoke, dressed, presented themselves as well as how they manipulated one another. It was funny yet disturbing how humans could dislike other species while they themselves seemed to never truly get along.
Unfortunately a group of citizens came into the city and chased after Diyanna, she ran for her life and along the way Diya realized that she had the power of wind. Her interest in the element grew and it didn't take long until she thought of it as a friend, after getting the hang of it Diana spent her time trying to learn more. It took her 3 years to gain the other three elements. 5 years to control ice and lightening while fire took another 2 years to complete. By the time she was 17 years old she was a master of the elements and was enjoying the power so much that she never really thought of what to do with it. With those thoughts she decided not to fight for neither humans, mages or elves but for herself before traveling along the lands of Ellira. Along the way she obtained a Chimera mount at the age of 21 years old.
- "We've been here forever
And here's the frozen proof
I could scream forever
We are the poisoned youth"
Okay:
- You don't need to have so many tomes, you only need the one.
- It didn't seem that she had a tome when she took on the Anti-mages, and so she would probably have died because without a tome you have to A. Use the elements around you to manipulate, which would have been only wind and B. mages without tome are significantly weaker than the average mage with a tome. The Beyond gives you power and energy to cast spells, and augments stamina. Without it you could probably knock a person who is standing poorly over. Maybe.
- Add a bit about the chimera mount. That isn't common and just saying 'yeah she just found it like magic' is kind of making me wonder how she got one.
[/BCOLOR]
can't wait to see what happens. Thank you, RainDash, for rebooting and setting everything up for us. I'm glad to get started.
