I think it might be the picture, partially. Maybe the title colour?
Also, I will say that, for me anyway, the "Available Classes" and "Magic" section is a little difficult to follow? Tabs, maybe? (They were that way in the original, too.)
Maybe put things like the bestiary in a tab set or spoiler, too?
Okay, I'm struggling... I tried to stay as close to your lines and locations as possible @RainDash but I need some serious help with geography. ._.
Also, where should non-capitol cities go?
Huge image is huge... Just so you know. If anyone wants the .psd file, they are welcome to it. I can't handle land formations or trees, apparently. Or rivers. Or lakes.
Only line art. Forever. I'm trash.
I'm going to keep trying - but if anyone wants to take a shot, feel free. I will not be offended.
@PetticoatLane no one is born with skills you have to learn them. I can see that you still have room to improve but what I can see from this you did a good job! If you and @RainDash want I can use what you drawn and add the needed elements that the map could use - mountains, hills, cities, rivers, larger forest masses, deserts and so on. BTW I usually start from drawing with hand, scanning it and then using GIMP to edit it into a digital image of great quality. Recently I also started at attempts to draw maps directly in GIMP with mixed results (one map I given up and one that needs a major edit to look good, trough its usable as it is.)
Here are a few examples of my work:
(This was actually a request for a map for one RP on another RPing forum that I made)
@PetticoatLane no one is born with skills you have to learn them. I can see that you still have room to improve but what I can see from this you did a good job! If you and @RainDash want I can use what you drawn and add the needed elements that the map could use - mountains, hills, cities, rivers, larger forest masses, deserts and so on. BTW I usually start from drawing with hand, scanning it and then using GIMP to edit it into a digital image of great quality. Recently I also started at attempts to draw maps directly in GIMP with mixed results (one map I given up and one that needs a major edit to look good, trough its usable as it is.)
Here are a few examples of my work:
(This was actually a request for a map for one RP on another RPing forum that I made)
Also a tip to all of you (which some maybe knew about) - you can select a part of text and quote just it no need to quote a whole post, especially if it has images - the smaller the amount of text and images on pages easier it is to open a page - especially for me who is usually on a weak laptop and if there is to much stuff on a page has troubles loading it, especially if I open Skype to RP there to.
Thee is no need to edit - you can just select a part of a post and quote it it.
This is how you do it:
1. Highlight/select the part of the post you want to quote.
2. The word Reply should appear somewhere near your selection.
3. Click the word Reply to quote just the selection - no need to edit or quote the whole thing!