War for Gods and Races

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Trust me, you would rather have the deleted posts than the actually ones, some weird stuff happened in there ;-; and lets just say, some things were better left unsaid!

I'm making my CS's now, so shhhhh!
Edited posts I can deal with, you can have an entire conversation through two posts edited over and over.
Thanks to that unremovable little cat-thingy I dont rant, but dont pull these kinds of things, ever -_-

Now, @Raven
Occupation is more what he governs over apart from his race, what he does because he is made for it.
He is very young then, as there have been gods succeeding their predecessor gods longer than that. (I am sorry for the vague description of the worlds age, tens of thousands of years have passed since the first god-war, and an exact age of the god isnt needed, I just need to know when he appeared ;) ).
A bit of description for your pictures would be much appreciated.
A bit of elaboration on the reproduction part.
Otherwise I am interested in this god of the sea and his people, cant wait to know more ^^
 
Okay I'll edit that when iIbegin to think of more. Thanks. (It's Late were I'm at and so for now my brain is basically fried for the day.)
 
I know how it is @Raven , its 04:03 here at the moment xD
Work on it when you feel you are capable of doing yourself justice ^^
 
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Now this is an rp I could get into, I love making every little detail of lore for a character I create, so *Cracks fingers* Let's do this.
God
Name: Aravia

Occupation: Aravia is a Goddess of Art, Love, and Deception

Age: She was born to fill the lands with more races, and has done so in her own.... unique fashion.

Appearance/appearances: Aravia prefers to take the form of a large spider, usually the Black Widow, though she has been depicted as a beautiful woman. In her spider form, she is seen as being 15-20 ft. tall, usually with long spindly legs and her abdomen covered in a silk wrap. In her humanoid form, she is seen as being thin, with striking emerald green eyes with raven black hair. Her pale white skin and black lips only seen in the light of the moon.

Real body: When speaking to her people she appears as the humanoid form, though she only ever speaks to them when night has come. Any other time, she is in her spider form, usually in her den, deep in the earth, watching over the world with a thousand spiderlings that give her vision.

State of existence:
Aravia lives in the mortal plane, though it is rare for her to directly address her subjects, she instead sends a medium, a single chosen female subject that speaks for the "Spider Queen".

Personality: She is willing to do anything to get what she wants, in this case, more land for her children to live and grow in. She will use deception, seduction, and any other means to achieve her goal.
Responsibility:She loves her children and wants them to grow to be the strongest race in the world. If someone so much as touches one of her children with ill-intent and she sees it, she hunts down that person and makes them pay.

Backstory: Aravia has, since the time of her birth as a god, wanted more than what she had. She ,in her ambition, developed a strong connection to the creatures of the land she was given, in this case, spiders. She found they're way of acting fascinating and one that could be used, so she designs all she can off them.

Connections: To Be Continued

Relics: In the main Nest-City of her people there stands a tall, spiral tower, as tall as 2 castle turrets. This tower is entirely hollow on the inside. Inside there are countless holes in the wall that are dripping with a green ooze. This green ooze is the only substance her people know of that can guarantee that an egg placed inside will be born a female that is significantly larger and stronger than other females.

Powers: Aravia's wrath is something to be feared. Many times, she send a seemingly countless number of spider, appearing from seemingly nowhere, to engulf and devour any living creature, stripping it to the bone in seconds. While earning her favor can give one command over a magic that induces horomones in such a way as to infatuate an enemy to the point of being unwilling to attack the user.

Children: None

Realm: When an opposing god steps on to lands owned by Aravia, one of three things can happen. 1. Absolutely Nothing. 2. They are attacked immediatley by any force of hers in the area. [This only happens to her enemies] and 3. She comes to greet them personally [If they are friends of hers]

Race
Name: From Highest to Lowest
The Drider [General Term]
Brood Mothers [Government Leaders]
Mediums [Chosen of Aravia]
Warriors/Witches [Army]
Workers [Medium Class Citizens]
Drones [Low Class Citizens] {There tends to be a lot of these guys on the battlefield}
Slaves [Other Captured Races]

Appearances: The Drider are centauroid spider people with varying features, primarily between the two sexes.
Females tend to have longer hair and look more humanoiddrider_1.jpg

While Males can vary between looking elvish or being extremely Beastial
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This occurs between classes, as Drones are exclusively Beastial Males and anything above them look Elvish.

Physiology: Physiology Between Drider can vary greatly. There are many different strains, from large stronger Tarantula Drider, to small, fast, and large-brained Trapdoor Drider. Traits that are shared between all Drider however are these. The more Spider-like parts of they're body are quite susceptible to blunt force, legs breaking much easier then most. The natural advantage to this however is that Drider are much lighter than most races and can climb onto walls and ceiling with ease, giving them much greater mobility than other races. Also, all drider have a pair of spinnerets on they're abdomens and can spin webs to create various things such as parachutes, grappling hooks, and nets [given that they have the knowledge to make them]. They also tend to have very good night vision, however this is down sided as they are easily blinded by bright light. [Especially Beastial Males] Drider Females have significantly longer lives than males, while a female can live to be as old as 110, a male will usually last no longer than age 45.

Reproduction: Driders reproduce in much the same way spiders do, the female carry egg cases full of young and lay them in a secluded spot. She may then extract specific eggs and put them in different conditions in hope of a different kind of offspring. Examples of this can be traced, that Warmer environments will cause larger strains of Drider, while cold ones will result in smaller, faster strains. There is also one very rare strain that only appears in Females chosen to be Mediums, The Black Widow Strain.

Culture: Driders live in large, clustered Nests. These nest can have anywhere from a few hundred Drider up to 3 Thousand in the largest ones.

Dresscode: Females tend to cover they're breasts and will wear hair garments, while Males don't wear much of anything besides battle armor when they prepare to fight.

Religion: The Drider Worship Aravia Zealously. They believe she is mother of all living, breathing things. They become very offended and angry when other races say that they're god created all when they know Aravia at least created them. In random areas all around the Nest, there are flags, etched stones, and banners with Aravia's sigil in them. That Sigil being a Generalistic spider with a Crescent moon on it's Abdomen

Infrastructure: The inside of Nests is a labyrinth of tunnels and climbing walls to get different areas in the Nest, work areas and residences are relatively close, all within the same walls. There are mines, hatcheries, food preparation areas, dining halls [though they're more like dining caverns], and all sorts of other vital "rooms" in the Nest. Transportation is entirely based on climbing and walking inside the nest. But outside the nest, Drider are known to ride hulking Death Worms, which spew acid and slither across the land at a relatively high speed. There is only one known occasion where a Death Worm has been used inside a Nest. This is in the Capital Nest-City, where there is a sort of Bus System, where a driver will pick up Drider at a stop and take them on the back of the Death Worm to a different part of the city. Slave quarters are always at the bottom level of Nests, so that the slaves need not climb and eventually fall to their deaths. These quarters, as far as slave quarters go, are well kept. There are beds with silk blankets, each cell has a bathroom, and slaves are provided meals. However, work for slaves is very hard, as they are tasked with taming new Death Worms [which often ends in slaves being eaten or melted with acid] and/or digging in the mines for gems and ores.
The Government is run by a group of 6 Broodmothers and 1 Medium. Each Broodmother controls a specific area of Government, one for each section: Military, Trade, Resources, Religion, Infrastructure, Transportation. While the Medium conveys the will of Aravia directly, which is then interpreted and acted upon by the 6.

Ways of transportation: As previously stated Driders will usually walk or climb, but they also ride Death Worms. However, they also have one other way of getting places. Some will perform "Parachuting" Where a Drider makes a parachute of silk and attaches it to their spinnerets and abdomen, then jump from a high point and let the wind carry them, this is dangerous though, for if the wind is not strong enough, they will fall presumably to their death

Magic: Magic is a commodity among Drider, but only among the females, it is rare for a male to wield magic at all. When a female is born, she has one of two choices, learn to wield magic, or grow up to lead the people. [I'm leaving Mediums out because this is more chosen FOR them] There are large magic schools in Nests and all students and teachers are generally female. Most spells are usually based around Ice based attacks and healing serious wounds. [This is due to the frail nature of Drider that healing magic is imperative]

Army: Of the Drider army, there are a few different units. There are huge battalions of Drone Males, sometimes called The Swarm due to the sheer number of Drones and they're brutal tactics. There are Mages, who stay behind the front lines and either bombard enemies with Ice spells or heal the wounded back into fighting condition. Then comes a plethora of War-Beasts. The Death Worm is the most common, ridden by a single Drider they charge into the fray spewing acid and devouring enemies. The acid tends to melt armor, making it easier for other units to break through. Dead Death Worms are known to leak acid from the maw. There are also Ambush Nevans, a large strain of spider-beast that is directed to dig under the battlefield before the battle begins, then pop out at an unexpected time, usually when the enemy is directly above them, launching them into the air and clawing and biting at them until they die. When they die, the tunnel it made is flooded so as to prevent enemies from taking it as a route. Finally, there are the armored tanks that are the Goliath Scorpions. Huge armored scorpions with a team of 6 drider on its back, the Drider will direct the beast and fire off arrows and sometimes spells from it's back, while the beasts tough armor deflects weaker attacks such as arrows and blunt weapons.
Background:When the first Drider emerged they were very confused. "Who are we. Why are we here?" These were the questions they asked, that is when Aravia made herself known to them and told them this simple phrase. " I am Aravia, and I am your mother, go out, populate this land, and make the world your Nest" Now the Drider have grown and multiplied into a powerful force.

Relations: The Drider wish to befriend most races they meet, though if the race blatantly denies Aravia, the people call for war.

Legends/Myths: The Drider tell stories of how Aravia wove the Moon from her silk and hung it in her web that is the sky. They also speak tales of a hidden paradise high in the sky that Aravia wove for the great heroes of the Drider.

The Lands: The land where the Drider live is mostly deep forest, with thick bogs and swamps to the north. There is also a single mountain, standing taller than all the land around it and facing the sea. As such, this mountain was named Widows Climb Mountain, for the story goes that that was the Mountain Aravia climbed to weave the Moon. At night the forests come alive with fireflies and dew covered spiderwebs beautifully reflecting the moonlight. But do not be fooled, wild beasts hide in every shadow of the forest waiting for those unaware of them. From poisonous flowers to wild Death Worms to Leeches the size of a horses leg, many things lurk in the shadows of the Drider Forests. Preying on unsuspecting explorers and adventurers foolish enough to sleep on the ground or in plain sight.

Notable beasts:There are stories among the Drider that a huge Death Worm, named Thanatos, roams in caves inside Widows Climb Mountain, guarding it to keep enemy gods from taking down the moon. They also say that one day a Drider will tame the beast and they will be revered as the greatest hero among the people.

Location: It is the Green Land


Why: Aravia wishes her people to have more land, while her people wish to unify the world under the one "True" Goddess.

Current Population [Roughly]: Around 420 Thousand
 

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Name: Lexer, The Lion God

Occupation: Well besides the usual (Race, deeds, Harvest, Lionfest Destiny, and Temple worship), He also controls weather and Oil, yes I said it, OIL!!!

Age: (I don't insist why you think gods should be female!) Lexer is a very old dude who was created through a vast amount of stars co-joining themselves together in the form of a golden lion, who roams the earth to this day! He existed long before he created his race, when the world was still being created, he picked out this one slot of land, and was basically like; "I want LAND!!" and thus he had land, but it came with a price, he would not get to use it, and instead, play with a race that worships him like a god.

Appearance/appearances: Lexer has one definitive appearance, and that is of a great, MALE, golden lion sort of like how this artist drew it:
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State of existence:
Only the Hbarra, or the chosen ones get the privilege of seeing Lexer, and they would only see him once in a lifetime, very rarely would they see him twice.
Real body: He is a golden Lion that treads upon the lands of which he owns. One can tell they have seen him when the skies turn gold, and it starts to rain very slowly, like it is more like hovering in the air than falling, and of course, the most obvious one is when he talks to you!

Personality: He is an animal, and thus has his own personality if in any relation to a god, it would be the Greek god Zeus, he's all-powerful, not necessarily all-knowing, and loves to meddle with affairs, watching them in awe, he tends to abuse his power and turn his people into a game of chaos, this creating the 'Ma Hbarra Which are "the dark ones". They seek to create mass chaos and destroy Rhodaaki. But thankfully, he also creates the 'Li Hbarra which are "the light ones". Obviously, their job is to put an end to the 'Ma Hbarra and create order and prosperity to Rhodaaki. Lexer just uses it as a way of entertainment, a movie where the Heroes and the Villains constantly fight a war they cannot end, and Lexer laughs endlessly at it.

Responsibility: He cares very little in terms of the race as a whole, and sees them as pieces to his game but he does like those who can play the game along with him, and thus, those who prove themselves worthy of being 'interesting' enough to be spoken to turn into a Hbarra and are revered as champions. If they ever become Grahda Hbarra, then they have successfully beaten Lexer at his own game and he will respect those people eternally, letting them live as religious prophets forever in Paridiso

Backstory: He served as a pet Lion created when another god was messing with stars one day, he did not know who the god was, he just acted as a pet, one day, he just had enough of being a pet to a master he did not even know, and escaped his wrath, he decided to take that out on his own race, treating them as his pets until they get it right and escape his endless maze.

Connections: He's had a converse with all the gods here and there, and likes them quite a bit, except for the one who was his master, he doesn't even know his/her name! Thus, he is eternally mad at that one god, but everyone else, totes' cool!

Relics: He placed his own tower, the Hiro Glopho Toro, in the center of his lands, this is where mortals are judged and reincarnated, If they are Grahda Hbarra, they go here to be shot off to Paridiso where they life the life of whatever they want to live, the tower cannot be entered by anyone, nor can be destroyed, people who do enter are executed, and reincarnated down to a lower caste.
There is the first temple, Lexicarus. The first people roamed here. obviously, the town is named after the temple
And of course, there is where the 'Li Hbarra fight the 'Ma Hbarra; Hbarra Hall.
Powers: Love: any Hbarra's are destined to be forever remembered in some way, they are the equivalent to any George Washington, Ghandi, Napoleon, ETC...

Powers: Some require no powerful abilities for that to happen, such as a famous artist or philosopher, others however, are granted super-powers to further enhance their needs, whether it be good or evil, these powers vary depending on what that Hbarra wants. and finally some Hbarra are neutral, and are simply granted a wish that they so desire.

Outside of Hbarras, which usually lead the masses to do what he needs anyways, he can control any sort of oil, no matter where it is, at any time. He affects the weather around him physically, and he affects whether crops succeed or fail. He isn't the OP god, but he is a god.

Children: Lexer has no children, lesser yet no family outside of his 37 wives. He instead considers the Hbarra his children, and as long as they do something, he has no reason to not treat them as family though.

Realm: what happens to other gods when they step unto your lands? Depends, if they are friendly, he greets and chats with them, if a bit more aggressive, he will attack it with everything he has.

does something happen to other races ? Well, he can take away their oil and destroy their crops, but that's about all the harm he can do to it. He can help by giving them oil and better crops if they need it.

And does your god have a realm separate from this world, where he can judge others supreme ? His only other Realm is Paridiso, which is only given to those who pass as a Grahda Hbarra, and Paridiso is whatever that Hbarra wants it to be, it's not one place, one form, but a multitude of different form designed for each Gradha Hbarra. It's designed to be perfect for each and every one,as there aren't many of them.
every person is judged in the Hiro Glopho Toro and are most likely reincarnated into a higher or lower caste.

Name: They have names for their different social classes, but they are one race an one race only, and that is simply Leonin.

Population: Approximately 6 million.

Appearances: Standing between 6 and 6 and a half feet tall, Leonin are tall, imposing creatures. They are lion-like in appearance and have many Leonine features; such as that they have claws rather than nails, and they have long tails to help them balance while they run, and they often lean forward to decrease wind resistance. Their normal fur color ranges from a light brown to a gold-ish tan and light orange. However, in rare cases, Leonin could have fur colors of Brown and white.
The males have long, grizzly, flowing manes, while the females do not. Female Leonin are somewhat shorter than males, with the tallest females only reaching 6 feet.
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La female: [spoili]
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Physiology: how does your people work, are they strong, made of glass and able to fly ? They prefer physical strength and agility over intelligence most times, however, Lexer favors constant progress, so they tend to put that strength to industrial use for better progress. They are not OP however, they are not made of glass, and they cannot fly.

How long are they able to live, what kind of climate are they most comfortable in ? The average life expectancy for males is 77. The average life expectancy for females is much much shorter, it comes out to 60, this is probably due to the permanent damage of having a litter and, of course, it is also partially due to sex. They are comfortable in a desert climate, which is great because that is what most of Rhodaaki is.

Do they have any diseases that we should know of ? A born, incurable disease called Marr. This happens with the litters and is the result of having too many babies! due to the physical instability do to the Leonin appearance, malnutrition happens to an extent where it cuts off a cub's lifespan for a few months, and the cub dies no matter what happens to it. Most Leonin see children with Marr as soulless beings, destined to die.

Reproduction: (ew) How does your race reproduce ?
Hetero-Sexually, the way humans do, however, males have a natural way of making sure females cannot reproduce again, and they usually do it, for safety;
[spoili] They have special 'prongs' attached to their ballz and it scrapes and destroys the V, permanently destroying it to the process where it cannot have enough 'power to create babies (it's cool though, she can still use the restroom if needed;). Hence, another reason why females have shorter lifespans than males [/spoili]

how often are they able to do so, and how many children does every birth give ? usually, it can only happen once in a lifetime, technically, you can do it multiple times, but it is usually fatal. A litter usually gives of 6-12 cubs, but around 60% of them die from Marr so it's not that big of a population problem.

Culture:
How does your race live ?
What amount of technology do they have? I would not say the best, but it's pretty good. Probably the furthest and the best they went in technology was how to utilize Oil into Light, heat, energy, and weapons. Their technology virtually revolves around the use of oil, If they ever ran out of oil, it would be chaotic.
They currently have Oil-powered:
guns, swords, armor, tools, vehicles, batteries, lights, cooking equipment, buildings, cannons, communication (in code), medical equipment, and most important of all; Plumbing! Although that's only for the rich.

in what way do they treat each other, and outsiders ? they treat each other in the same caste, and follow suit of the other castes, If one were lower, they would frown upon them, if one were of a higher cast, or if one were a Hbarra , they would revere them. As far as foreign Policy goes, Leonin don't openly embrace those of other races, but at the same time do not scorn them. Once a Leonin befriends another person, regardless of race, he is loyal to the death.

Do they have a leader, a king, a senate ? The government is a Democratic Meritocracy Caste-System, which basically means that: 'You are free to choose who represents your caste/ who rules the other castes. But only as long as they work hard and prove themselves worthy of doing so.'
Here is how the caste system works:
Grahda: these are the purest of the Leonin race and the ones most likely to go to Paridiso, they are the religious leaders.

Kerahda: these are usually the political leaders and the richest of the aristocrats, they usually rule just, fair, and equal in order to proceed onto Grahda.

Verahda: these are the upper-classmen of society, the other aristocrats, the factory owners, corporate traders, and even very wealthy merchants fit here.

Warra: This is the middle of society, the warriors, fighters and champions are here, this also has the highest amount of hbarra, and this is the caste where the 'Ma and 'Li Hbarra do their eternal fighting for that caste advancement

Merahda: This is of the merchants, smiths, and other miscellaneous service-offers (such as teachers), they are considered the 'middle class' of society.

Tokarahda: This is the lower-class common men of the society, and where the majority of people lie, they consist of farmers, ranchers, miners, and factory workers.

Dresda: The 'Untouchables' of society, these are the criminals, no-jobs, exiles, and slaves. Most people who are born into this cast have been considered to have done very bad things in their past life to get here, and is considered what all bad souls fates end up being here forever, living as the 'crap' of Leonin society

Dresscode: upper-class and some Middle-class formally wear white robes with brown shoulder-pads and decorated, gold-colored designs, Kerahda's robes are blue instead of white, and Grahda's robes are red instead of blue. Other than that, dress-code is purely to the choice of themselves, even nudity is allowed, but people prefer not to do it.

Religion: what is your peoples view of their god? Lexer is their creator, their God, he is all-knowing , all-powerful being, which frankly, they are loving him a bit too much for his comfort.

how do they think the world was created ? The world was created as a result of Lexer leaving The Forsaken One, his mighty roar bringing together a blast of rock, oil, and fire in order to create this world.

How do they think of other gods ? Leonin Worship of other religions is legal to all castes except for Kerahda and Grahda, But it is highly frowned upon. If those two castes were caught doing such an act, they would be exiled or executed.

Infrastructure: What kind of buildings and transportation does your people use ? They like their buildings are generally pyramid-shaped or very tall, rectangular-shaped, these are to symbolize the three holy relics of Lexer. Transportation can be done by rail, Hathka (a six-legged horse), carriage, car, Wyvern, ship, and of course, by foot.

what do they eat and trade with ? Their diets consists of a huge portion of meat, and a small piece of bread and maybe (if they are lucky) some vegetables... In terms of trading they have;
Oil, refined oil, kerosene, oil, heaters,sometimes... a car, Hathkas, oil, weapons, guns, the occasional cannon, Leonin slaves, oil, metal,raw ore, Leonin clothing, Prisoners-of-war, oil, and most importantly: PLUMBING (thought I was going to say oil again huh?)

Do they have pets and working animals ? Cats, Wolfs, and rabbits are common house-pets, upper-class people show off their wealth by buying Leons (or lions), which show that they are true Leonin but they have high maintenance. The Leonin have three main working animals; The Domesticated Cow for eating, The Hathka for riding, and for very good warriors, The Wyvern for flying

Slaves ? Slavery IS legal, not just that, its smiled upon.

Ways of transportation: How does your race travel. By carriage, boats, flying carpets or maybe lumbering elks? If i haven't explained prior, transportation can be done by rail, Hathka (a six-legged horse), carriage, car, Wyvern, ship, and of course, by foot.

Magic:
are your people capable of wielding magic? Yes, yes they are

how usual is magical affinity in your race? Low to Very Low

What kind of magic is used ? Mostly elemental and healing magic, Healing magic is most common.

Is it trained in schools or learnt in secret? There are a few schools for Healing magic and one school for elemental magic, Eif Kierum, a really large Magic-only town virtually. All other magic is forbidden, but they never said it could be taught in secret!

Army: What kind of armies exist in your race ? We have the finest Swordsmen, Riflemen, Calvary, Wyvern Riders, Cannons, Railguns (Trains of course!), and Champions to offer.

Background:(OH GAWD WHY?) what have your race been doing since they appeared on the face of the world ? When they were first placed on this world, they were a very primitive, tribal species. Lexer was very displeased about this, and so he created the first Hbarra, Alenko Tolloy, to rally a bunch of tribal groups in order to found the first civilized town around Hiro Glopho Toro called Fali. Fali soon turned itself from a simple town to an empire, through the use of the second and most important Hbarra, Falir Rhodaaki, he was the one who single-handedly, conquered all other Leonin tribes, through the use of several advancements in technology such as the sword, the use of cavalry, and of course, The Wheel. Under his rule, Roads, The Leonin Caste system, and the land to be named Rhodaaki, were accomplished several more Hbarras ruled, formed the religion under their name, and improved their technology, mainly through transportation. but the vast desert sea, the fear of Tremor Wyrms, and food problems were seriously impeding expansion and technology progress.
But yet Lexer was still bored with his game. So, to spice things up, he created his first 'Li and 'Ma Hbarra. twin sisters, their names were Sashi and Imdra Habari. Sashi was caste out as an exile of the Leonin, while Imdra was treated as a Verahda Hbarra and lived her life very richly and felt no remorse, for she, herself, exiled her sister as Lexer commanded her. But Sashi bounced back, hard, she single-handedly went out and killed a very notorious Tremer Wyrm, Xerad, herself, making the leonin in awe, despite her caste status. Nobody ever knew how she did it, but alas she did, and for the first time, caste didn't matter as she went to her sister, killed her, and took her rightful place as a Verahda Hbarra, with the help of a few more Hbarra, she found...and founded The 'Li Hbarra Order, in Hbarra Hall, their one purpose:, to vanquish any existing 'Ma Hbarra. Lexer loved this eternal hero vs villain thing, but even that got boring, so he made the first and only demand to his entire race, The Lionfest Destiny, and this is the constant need to make things better, constantly expand despite the hardships that occurred, It made by default everyone a Hbarra through a global speech. it worked,and they fought and bought every single piece of land to the point where it reached other races' empires, and as a result, Oil, which has forever been a pain and a burden for production, ended up being their savior. The Oilindial Revolution was a result, finally turning the Leonin into a more technologically advanced race that keeps Lexer entertained.
But Lexer is getting bored yet again, and might add something new to change the game again, the question is...What will it be this time, will it be helpful...or hurtful?

Relations:
are your people trading with someone else ? they trade with EVERYBODY!!!!

Maybe having regular meetings or festivals ? I cannot tell yet, maybe something worked out between them and the lizardkin?

Legends/Myths: What kind of stories does your people tell around the campfires ? Tales of adventure, with the hero always beating the villain.

The Lands:
Is your land full of mountains, forests, rivers, caves ? Rhodaaki's quite boring in terms of geography; It's a big, fat desert with a few oasis-es, with anything touching the water having a more...tropical feel to it.

What kind of animals live there, what kind of plants ? surprisingly, lions live here, other than that, the usual, Tremor Wyrms, Hathka's, Camels, Desert Cats, and of course, bugs and parrots. In terms of plants, which are few, there is wheat, palm trees, and Olvus, a Poisonous, fruit-bearing weed that surprisingly thrives in oil. It's considered very bad luck if your oil rig has these plants.

Are there any special objects, ruins or artifacts scattered around ? a few destroyed temples, the three Holy Relics, and scattered, tall, grey, obelisks, If you are unlucky find one of these obelisks, you're also bound to see a Tremor Wyrm within the next five minutes.

Is it dangerous out at night thanks to bandits or other creepers ? Well, bandits are common in an economy entirely based on oil and trade. And to replace creepers and dragons, we have, well, the Tremor Wyrms. Very few are killed, even with an army, and only once has one ever been killed alone, that person ended up becoming the founder of the 'Li Hbarra. Other than that, they have a destructive nature, but they tend to stay close to their obelisks during the day. Only at night do they stray away from the Obelisks, engulfing people, animals, camps and even towns! A really dangerous and the most feared thing at night.

Notable beasts: There are Wyverns here. There are also Lexer's 37 Wives, which are golden colored, talking lionesses. And of course, there are the Tremor Wyrms. Which live in the desert and are the size of cities, and they also have the tendency to swallow them too! Considered very dangerous, if you every encounter one of these things...RUN!!!

Location: where is your land? That big light green piece of crap on the map? Yeah that's it, it's called Rhodaaki! It's basically the equivalant to the Ariabian peninsula in terms of geography; A huge piece of dessert with tons of...oil.

Is it a regular piece of land, with borders an whatnot ? Yes it has, and it grown to its size due to The Lionfest Destiny, which, unbelievably, was the quest for expansion.

Why: what is the reason for your god and his people to go to war against the other races ? Either in the name of Lexer, the name of the Lionfest Destiny, or because they just want to!
or isnt that what you are doing ? It really isn't. Lexer wants to see how they can continue impressing them with progress, and if it ever ends...he'll just kill them all in boredom. >:)

Alright I know there are missing spots, but I have worked a Dayum A$$ Long Time on this and I am very tired and hitting the hay! I am just posting it now so I don't lose it later.

If you have any questions/comments/concerns/problems/ and of course, arguments, please contact me @Leo !

If it is confusing, I will clarify the Lexer/Leonin relationship, because even I was confused for a bit:

-Lexer was created by a god who wanted a pet lion, little did he know this lion had magical powers too! and he escaped using them.
-Lexer thought it would be nice to create some land and a race to live there too!
-That race was the Leonin.
-That race ended up loving him a bit too much, so he decided to make this religion they created a game: He rewarded those who beat him at his own game, by thinking 'outside of the box' by granting them to Paridiso, a really cool place that all Leonin want to go, but most don't go there, and they wonder why.
-Until you get there, you are constantly reincarnated into a caste and know nothing of your past life.
-He likes making the game harder to those who think they can beat it, by creating the Leonin Caste System and by adding 'Li Hbarra and 'Ma Hbarra to help reinforce the ''overly attached to Lexer'' religion.
-Lexer also craves constant progress, to make the entertainment more...entertaining. Like watching a movie, the technology behind them changed over time, and they got better, Graphic-wise. Lexer is trying to do the same thing with The Leonin in his game, make it the greatest movie he's ever seen, and hence is why they became quite technologically advanced, in terms of oil anyways.
 
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@Nocturne997
I like it, and I dont really have anything Im wondering about.
Now, regarding which lands you mean:
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The ones squared in red are the Green lands, would you like both ?
The one in black is the light green lands, that Leo preordered.

I am pleased to know that you want to be my closest neighbor ^^

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@Leo
Im not so sure about him governing Time ;)
His age story should probably fit better with the legends/myths. Because the first god-war happened tens of thousands of years ago, and the world was finished tens of thousands of years before that. And as said before, I dont need an exact numerical age xD (because then I would by extension have to put my own gods age down... and his age doesnt make sense in this setting.)
"All-powerful" ? Well, he might certainly think so I suppose, though omnipotence is not really that great a thing, depending on the relation between said being and his area of influence. His Ego at least doesnt look like it will deteriorate ^^
His master probably made Lexer his successor, and the lion who suddenly gained enough intelligence and power thought to "escape".

Your race is... ok. Im waiting with interest for the blanks to be filled ^^
Though, cars in a desert ?
 
Yes I was referring to the green lands, and I would like both, transportation between the islands would probably be through underground tunnels.
 
@Nocturne997
Ok, the lands are yours.
Now regarding travel between them, it is approximately 10.000 km between them. So your tunnels would have to be running below my lands for more than 500 of them. The tunnels would have to be really deep.
I think it would make more sense if you either travel through my lands, or sail around them.
And now that I think about it. Strictly strategically, your main-island is in a very good position to not be reached by anyone unless they go through me first ^^
And yes, my people would allow a trade-route through their lands. (Maybe the route is a tunnel?)
 
Well as a rule of thumb the Drider aren't much for sailing as they are physically incapable of swimming. So, yes. I think a route through your land sounds good. As for trade routes, I beleive a tunnel route through your land sounds good.
 
@Nocturne997
Ill include the tunnels in my CS.
You can add the relationship between our people if youd like too. (Though its probably easier once I have uploaded the CS)

The name of my race is Parosulns. And they are more or less humanoids with little creatures inside them.
 
@Nocturne997
I like it, and I dont really have anything Im wondering about.
Now, regarding which lands you mean:
The ones squared in red are the Green lands, would you like both ?
The one in black is the light green lands, that Leo preordered.

I am pleased to know that you want to be my closest neighbor ^^

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@Leo
Im not so sure about him governing Time ;)
His age story should probably fit better with the legends/myths. Because the first god-war happened tens of thousands of years ago, and the world was finished tens of thousands of years before that. And as said before, I dont need an exact numerical age xD (because then I would by extension have to put my own gods age down... and his age doesnt make sense in this setting.)
"All-powerful" ? Well, he might certainly think so I suppose, though omnipotence is not really that great a thing, depending on the relation between said being and his area of influence. His Ego at least doesnt look like it will deteriorate ^^
His master probably made Lexer his successor, and the lion who suddenly gained enough intelligence and power thought to "escape".

Your race is... ok. Im waiting with interest for the blanks to be filled ^^
Though, cars in a desert ?

THEY'RE OKAY??? That's a really motivational statement and makes me feel like i accomplished SOO MUCH in 6 hours! ;-;

1. I will take out the time thingy, no problem there.
2. Thank you for not allowing me to add his exact age... and The Forsaken One doesn't necessarily need to be any of the player's gods, just a god. Anything else you said in that question makes no sense!
3. Now, I even stated this, He is NOT powerful and omnipotent/all-knowing!!! He even knows that! They just think he is. And yes, he has a big EGO.
4.That works.
5. MIGHT I SAY THAT I(THINK) I HAVE FINALLY FINISHED ALL OF THE BLANKS!!! *clapclap*
6. If you would even consider them cars:
A:There is a ridiculously small amount of cars here, maybe like...less than 50 total, only for the richest aristocrats anyways.
B: They are virtually metal carriage boxes that emit flame out of its butt to move, it's not that fantastic.
C: the amount of time it takes to make ONE is phenomenal, and the maintenance for that is too high. So most rich people ride in their fancy carriages.
so yes, 'cars' in the desert.
7. any other questions? I want it to be perfect before filling in those blanks!
 
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I just noticed @Dedtoo 's warbeasts and pet creatures were spiders, if we go to war... man would that be a sad situation for given Aravia's control over spiders.
 
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Okay, for some reason, I got none of the updates to this all of yesterday. And in that time, someone else filled the spider-people niche. But at least it's filling up nicely! :3

@Nocturne997
So you think that your little goddess can take control of Nurgle's gift to his children? I'd like to she her try! >:D
*Note to self: Don't bring spiders to the spider-people's lands*
 
I really do like how we are starting to get more people, but people please spoilers! If you are using them i might not see that because of this being my work computer and they block alot of stuff.
But if not use them!
 
My CS

Name of religion:
Endoraism or The Worship of the Dragon All-God.

Name of the major God:
Endora.

Servants: (Minor Gods)
Ragnar. (War)
Vinter. (Death & weather)
Prospera. (Life & marriage)

Occupation:
None other than guiding and watching. She do however, like to appear out of no where to talk with the other Gods. She just love to belittle their creations and brag of her own.

Age:
Endora have always been there. Hiding in the Old Gods shadows, Endora kept to her own little plane which hold nothing but void. The servants are as old as Endora, who has the same age as the Old Gods.

Major God:
Appearance/appearances:
Endora:

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Description:
Endora real form take the shape of a massive black Dragon (Roughly the size of the Moon.) Her own realm allow her to keep this size, but should she break out of her prison will she use a form half the size. Beside the incredible hard scales and sharp claws, can she breath a purple flame which kills anything that stands in its path.

Endora is a powerful God, and even more so now that many of the Old Gods are gone. Lurking the worlds, she have managed to create a 'presence' of herself that can walk the lands. This form is usually a woman dressed in black clothes and with blonde hair.

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Minor Gods:
Ragnar:

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Description:
God of war and destruction, Ragnar is the most brutal of the servants. His flaming breath of Armageddon lay ashes to anyone who dare raise against Endora. He is about the size of a small mountain and have red scales. He represents strength and due to this is the most popular servant among Krona knights and soldiers. Ragnar is more beast than anything else, and strong control is often required when he is used.

Vinter:
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Description:
God of death and weather, Vinter is the one who takes man and women to his realm of Aether when they die. His breath freezes the very soul and he swoop down from the sky without a sound. About the size of a large castle and bear grey scales. Unlike Ragnar is Vinter wise, and is capable of talking with the world's people and Gods. It will often be him who is sent, should a God dare enter Endora's realms without permissions.

Prospera:
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Description:
Prospera is the God of love and lust, and her Dragon skin takes all the known colors. She can take both the form of a Dragon and a woman. The Dragon form is about the size of a small house. She is often seen next to Endora, but rarely speak.

Real body:
Endora is capable of creating a 'fake' body or 'presence'. This presence is like a shadow or a cloud of smoke and can therefore not be killed. The servants only have their real form and are not immortal. (They cannot die of age, but require a deadly hit to be taken down.)

State of existence:
4. Unseen even for your race, you thread the lands like a ghost, none noticing but those that understand to see past the facade, your slumbering wrath.

Endora is unable to leave her realm. However, she is powerful enough to create a presence there can walk the land. Endora's Dragon servants visit the lands from time to time, either to punish, bless or to protect her people from other Gods.

Personality:
To put it bluntly, Endora is your typical female villain who drown in her own arrogance. She look down on other divines, refusing to see them as Gods and believe she is the only true God. She relay on brutal power to get what she want, and enjoy watching her victims beg for mercy. She is full of hate, but hide it behind her ice cold face.

Responsibility:
Endora would never sacrifice herself to save her race. For Endora, the mortals are mere pieces in a game and would rather see them wiped off the board than her. Should her servants die, then so be it.

Backstory:
Endora came with the Old Gods. But where many of these Old Gods would work together to create wonderful worlds and creatures, did Endora decide to keep to herself. She felt herself superior and went to watch from a shadow plane for a long period of time instead. Growing bored, she threw a shadow over the worlds that quickly left them with earthquakes, floods and powerful volcanoes. Angry by their creations in ruins, a large group of the Old Gods placed a lock on her shadow plane, trapping her inside. Realizing there was little she could do, she went into a deep sleep.

After the first battles between the Old Gods, Endora slowly woke up from her slumber due to the shakes it left in the planes. Endora had been more or less sleeping through the entire new world creation phase. When her servants reported that many of the Gods who had locked her up was gone, she reached her mind out to discover the new world and Gods. By the power of her servants, she cleared a large amount of land in the new world and planted the seed that would be her new people.

Connections:
She's a bad poker player, but hate to be left out nevertheless. Gods Meet Up? She'll be there just to talk down on them or listen in on gossip.

Relics:
The Holy Sword of Endora. This sword have passed down from High Emperor to High Emperor and have the power to blind it enemies and prevent the bearer to loss blood from wounds.

The Unholy Sceptre of Vinter. Dead Escarians have their body overtaken by Dragonic Knight Souls, who have double the skills of a regular Knight.

Demonic Blade of Ragnar. A single hit by this blade will set an enemy ablaze, but can also create a firewall for protection. The Highest Ranked General wear this.

Shapeshift Rope of Prospera. Allowing its user to change to the shape of any animal, this make great use for espionage.

Powers:
Endora have blessed the leader of her race the power to summon her servants for battle.

Realm:
Trapped in a plane distant from the rest of the world, Endora was left to shape it to fit her own liking.

Dark, endless, void.
Here she have been sleeping since her entrapment but woke up after the War between Gods. Because Endora is trapped in her own Realm, can she do little should God enter her people's lands. However, a hostile God may be met by her servants. These battles will take place in the mortal world, most likely with catastrophic consequences.

Name of Nation:
Escari Empire.

Name of Royal Family:
Royal House Krona.

Leader:
High Emperor Syris Krona

Race:
Human. They call themselves Escarians.
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Appearances:
The Escarians are very adaptable and well rounded. Their skin color can come in different colors, but since they don't live near equator are they mostly white. Hair and eye color also comes in different colors. Both male and female have a strong and powerful build, making them ideal for hard labor and soldiers.

Physiology:
Escarians make amazing fishermen and farmers and with training learn to become skilled soldiers and knights. While they sometimes fall behind in attributes compared to other races do their raw willpower often go unmatched. The common Escarian live roughly 70 years. They are able to adapt different climates, but can be vulnerable to longer periods of strong cold/heat and hunger/thirst if not properly equipped. Certain Escarians have proven to be able to master Magic at an extreme level.

Reproduction:
Just like normal humans. 9 months and chance for more than one child.

Culture:
The Escarians follow a very strict culture. The Royal House Krona have been in power since the founding, with all rebellions shot down. Unlike other cultures does the throne room also serve as a shrine for Endora, further boosting their claim to power and the control of the people. Many of the Escarians are proud of their roots, and are very loyal to the High Emperor nonetheless. They treat other races that don't look "human" or "Escarian" lesser than they would one of their own. Discrimination is as normal as buying bread in Escari Empire and territories owned by them. All men is expected to serve in the military, and much of their culture is built around war and expansion. They are also very social, and people gather together in many different communities within the nation.

Foreigners might say that they live in a constant state of war preparations. Many technology advancement focus on this area, and the large Escarians cities are filled with guilds that craft weapons and tools.

Dresscode:
With a strong culture, comes a strict dresscode as well. The rich are able to buy silks and other fine products. Commoners wear more rough and medieval clothes.

Religion:
The Escarians follow Endora at an almost fanatic level. It is what keep the nation together, and the army willing to fight to the last man. Everyday are there hold an hour long prayer in all the many grand churches and cathedrals built solely for Endora and her servants. Especially the shrine in the Palace Throne Room is busy with rich merchant and other important figures coming to speak with the High Emperor. The Escarians know little of Endora's actually form, but many books contain paintings of the servants. Ten books have been written that describe the Dragon All-God and her laws. The Dragon symbol is widely used, and many of the soldier uniforms wear them.

Infrastructure:
The Escanrians have long been master builders. They are capable of building huge cities and produce enough food to feed millions. From the underground have they made mines that bring up gold, iron, copper and coal. It is not common to keep slaves, and only the rich can afford to keep servants. For construction is trained labor used, for the Escanrians believe in perfection. Water that isn't taken directly up from the underground is brought to the cities via aqueducts. In the later years have smoke and fog started to collect over the cities, but nothing have been done to stop the development and rapid growth. All roads leads to Saryris Capital City is widely used, as they have made advanced roads between all cities.
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Capital City ("Saryris Capital City")

Ways of transportation:
Horses, but carriages are not used. Ships are widely used to get around. Some of the best horses are trained and breed in the southern part of the nation.

Magic:
Pure magicians are not common, and only the more rich citizens are able to get the training needed to master the power. In the Capital of Escari Empire do the National Esper Academy each year only send 500 new Magic Casters to the Royal Battle Wizard Legion. Roughly 5.000 are trained to use magic items for war. The public does not have access to magical items, as all these are reserved for the military and noble. (Black markets can be found in all cities that sells magic items.)

Army:
Rank tree:
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Quick Description:
The engineers are in charge of the constructions of siege-weapons. These weapons range from powerful magic fueled cannons, to simple fortifications. Cavalry, Soldiers and Enlisted Men make the back bone in the military and consist of footsoldiers, long spearmen, sailors, powerful and long range archers. Each soldier are clothed after their purpose. Light soldiers use thin metal plates and leather, while the heavy use thicker armor plates. The heaviest unit, the Elite Dragon Knights use Dragon scales.

Ground: 100 men or a unit, is put under a Squad leader. The Squad leader follow orders from the Sergeant, who is in charge of 5 units. The Officers takes order from the higher ups and control a Legion each. The Commander is the last link on the battlefield, and follow but also provide their own input on military strategies from the General stab. The Commander usually have 2 strategist on field with him. The General of Krona High Constable is the highest rank, and serve directly under the High Emperor. Only the High Emperor can give the go to an attack, or defense.
Strength: 12.000.000
Notes: One Legion consist of 60 units. 2000 Legions are spread across the country. 500 Legions defend the Capital.

Sea: Enlisted Men takes many kind of roles on board the navy fleet. From cook to gunner. The Lieutenant is in charge of keeping check on the Enlisted. Depending on the size of the ship, a single ship normally have minimum two Lieutenants. The Commander is second-in-charge of a vessel. The Captain takes order from the Admiral and each ship bring its own Captain. The Vice-Admiral aid the Admiral of Krona Armed Fleet who serve right under the High Emperor.
Strength: 3.000.000
Number of ships: 5.000
Notes: Being able to swim is not a requirement. 1.000 of the 4.000 ships are classified as heavy, but only 100 of those are listed as Titan Class. The navy have 1.000 ships for transport of troops.

The Elite: What is an army without a elite? The Imperia Commander is the closest to the High Emperor. He bring intel on enemies, and order the Elite units around. Elite Dragoon are Knights on the Empire's strongest horses. Elite Dragon Knights are heavy units who hold Dragon armor and powerful two hands swords. The Informia Commander keep check on the many spies hired by the Empire. The Battle Wizard Legion is not listed, but this group of soldiers are mostly kept in reserve.
Strength: 1.000.000
Notes: Only 3500 of a 6000 men strong Battle Wizard Legion can actually use powerful spells. The rest are trained to use magical items, such as rifles or magical shields for defense of the Espers.

20.000.000 men and woman serve in the military. All men and women are required to work in the military for a minimum of 12 months when they turn 17 (6 months are spent with training). Under this period will they be provided free food and shelter. Depending on the need, are they free to select ground forces or navy themselves. Men cannot refuse service, but women are placed in a lottery. 1/4 of the female populace serve in the military. Teamwork is a must, and the soldiers learn to fight side to side in huge Legions. One Legion consist of 60 units. 6000 soldiers form a Legion, fighting as a giant war machine for the High Emperor. The Escarians relay on advanced military tactics, where all the different units play a key role to success. Special skilled soldiers receive medals for their work, and quite a few men and women become famous back home.

Background: From a small State, to a massive Empire. Out of Saryris Capital City gates did Legion after Legion march under order of the new High Emperor. The rich south was taken first, and from there the army went north with the support of the newly founded Krona Armed Fleet. Since then have the Empire slowly been building up its military.

Relations:
Saryris Empire trade with others as long they see a profit in it. Openly friendly to races that resemble their own, but may show hostility towards alien races.

Legends/Myths: What kind of stories does your people tell around the campfires ?

The Lands: Much of the land dwell on the mountain range that start in the south and end in the north. Many of these mountains hold forest, while the area closer to the sea is filled with rich plain soil. The Escarians keep cows, pigs, sheep, chickens for food. In some areas have large rice fields been built, while other areas relay on wheat. Scattered around lies ruins from old civilizations, but many of the stones have been taken from the ruins and used in new cities. The roads are patrolled by units in the day time, but there have been few reports of beasts who attack travelers in the night.

Notable beasts:
The advancement left many of the beasts either killed for their skin or trapped for entertainment. You can however, find Griffins, sable tigers and large bears hiding in the mountains. Most of them are on the brink of extinction.

Location:
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Escari Empire have a total population of 60.000.000 Escarians, of which 10.000.000 live in or nearby the Capital City.

Why:
The Escarians takes much of Endora's arrogance, and thus believe they are meant to rule more of the world.
 
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@Drougar @Silvir @Dedtoo @Nocturne997
Everyone:
I have forgotten one thing I want to know regarding your races, the current population (roughly). Its coming along nicely though ^^

@Leo
I said they were ok, and six hours isnt that long as far as character-creation goes.
Now, what I meant regarding your gods cs, it should only state the actual facts regarding your god, and yours have (as you yourself stated) some parts that are more how your race sees him and less how he actually is.
Age: So he is something made during the times shortly after the first god-war.
Backstory: Add the part of him being a successor either here or in the "Age".
Reproduction: Ok, why? I dont see the point of them only being able to have children once. Its not something I wont accept, but it is certainly strange.
Fantasy oil-barons: I really want to know what an oil-powered sword does O_o
Seriously, most of the things you mentioned are things I dont immediately see oil in? A bit of elaboration would be helpful.
Notable beasts: About the 37 wifes... wut? Why? I dont really mind your god having a bunch of animal wifes... though I would like to know if they are magical or have any special powers, and why no children?
Regarding the Tremor Wyrms, how big are these cities they are the size of? A kilometer in length and more than two between the tips of their wings? And do they fly thanks to purely physical means, maybe oil making the air in their lungs hotter. Or are they magical?
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@Raven
A grammatical check through the post might be necessary as well as some adjustments to the text with the pictures, and please make spoilers over all of it :)
Regarding the Reproduction, I want to know how often and how many children they are able to conceive?
How do they have electricity? What kind of power-plants do they use?
And, do they really have planes O_o
The location of the lands are for the map, pick a color not taken already ;)

@Reno Lam
I cant see any changes in the CS, and those spoilers in your last post are more or less empty :/

@Rion
I like it so far, always nice with more dragons.
So Endora is not one of the Old gods who made the world? But also not from after the first god-war. And she is more or less locked up in her own realm. Hm... I have some logical trails of thought for that. PM me if you have some grand scheme or backstory in mind. Otherwise I will regard her as the next best thing to an Old god.
 
@Drougar @Silvir @Dedtoo @Nocturne997
Everyone:
I have forgotten one thing I want to know regarding your races, the current population (roughly). Its coming along nicely though ^^

@Leo
I said they were ok, and six hours isnt that long as far as character-creation goes.
Now, what I meant regarding your gods cs, it should only state the actual facts regarding your god, and yours have (as you yourself stated) some parts that are more how your race sees him and less how he actually is.
Age: So he is something made during the times shortly after the first god-war.
Backstory: Add the part of him being a successor either here or in the "Age".
Reproduction: Ok, why? I dont see the point of them only being able to have children once. Its not something I wont accept, but it is certainly strange.
Fantasy oil-barons: I really want to know what an oil-powered sword does O_o
Seriously, most of the things you mentioned are things I dont immediately see oil in? A bit of elaboration would be helpful.
Notable beasts: About the 37 wifes... wut? Why? I dont really mind your god having a bunch of animal wifes... though I would like to know if they are magical or have any special powers, and why no children?
Regarding the Tremor Wyrms, how big are these cities they are the size of? A kilometer in length and more than two between the tips of their wings? And do they fly thanks to purely physical means, maybe oil making the air in their lungs hotter. Or are they magical?
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@Raven
A grammatical check through the post might be necessary as well as some adjustments to the text with the pictures, and please make spoilers over all of it :)
Regarding the Reproduction, I want to know how often and how many children they are able to conceive?
How do they have electricity? What kind of power-plants do they use?
And, do they really have planes O_o
The location of the lands are for the map, pick a color not taken already ;)

@Reno Lam
I cant see any changes in the CS, and those spoilers in your last post are more or less empty :/

@Rion
I like it so far, always nice with more dragons.
So Endora is not one of the Old gods who made the world? But also not from after the first god-war. And she is more or less locked up in her own realm. Hm... I have some logical trails of thought for that. PM me if you have some grand scheme or backstory in mind. Otherwise I will regard her as the next best thing to an Old god.

man you and I are going to get along greatly...
1.great.
2. Ahh, I see that, but some parts of how they see him is how he actually is sometimes in the actual CS but I'll fix those parts to make it just him.
3. Yes, let's assume he is.
4. of Lexer being their successor? Sure I guess.
5. Well, they CAN do it as many times as they want, it's just usually very dangerous at most times to do so. Alright let's put you in their shoes, they don't have nearly as powerful reproductive organs as the animals do, given thier stance and humanoid form. But yet they still produce 9 babies at a time! Quite painful, and sure to leave permanent damage as they have claws and such that they can ruin the stomach. As far as medical technology goes...not much, so they pull out the babies the hard way. So imagine you having 9 babies, and then say, 10 years later, you have 10 more. it's possible, but no woman wants that. Plus there is always the possibility of dying during this.
6. well, not really oil, but fuel, which can, can easily be lit on fire, with the simple tap of a button will set the sword on fire, sort-of how a lighter works...but bigger. this is so they can inflict fire damage on their enemies (they think it inflicts more pain)
7. If you have anything else that needs elaboration on how terms of oil-powered things work. Feel free to ask! Most of the weapons, vehicles, and heat involve the use of igniting it for it to either power something or heat something.
8. He really likes his women, and that's what he virtually did before he created his race, afterwards, he was too busy with his race to worry about having wives, and he likes his race to be his children, he needs none to bother him with their godly powers anyways!
9. Virtually the only thing his wives can do is talk and look golden, which I've explained in the CS.
10. They do nor fly, they jump out of the sand really really high, have thick, scaly armor, and engulf anything in its mouth's path. their mouth is about 750 feet in diameter, and it constantly combusts inside to digest everything, like a really hot oven always set to 'clean' all of the time. some of the much smaller to average sized towns are well in that 750 diameter range, they cannot engulf any huge cities though, such as Falir. and sure, they have oil in there to help with that baking. I would not say magical, just destructive.
11.I want to edit after everything else is perfect okay! So, anything else?
 
Seems to work now though, (and yes, but they didnt appear for me :/ )
I think it seems good. Just add an approximate population-count.
Oh, and how big are these dragons, because "as big as a town" may mean a lot of things, depending on the town xD

@Leo
Ok, all is well then. (and not the successor of the stars, but the god that made him)
And regarding the birthing, the children/cubs could come out younger and thus not damage their mother as much. Oh and please make an estimate of your population.
I look forward to having you here ^^
 
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Seems to work now though, (and yes, but they didnt appear for me :/ )
I think it seems good. Just add an approximate population-count.
Oh, and how big are these dragons, because "as big as a town" may mean a lot of things, depending on the town xD

@Leo
Ok, all is well then. (and not the successor of the stars, but the god that made him)
And regarding the birthing, the children/cubs could come out younger and thus not damage their mother as much. Oh and please make an estimate of your population.
I look forward to having you here ^^
I added the population, and im 'cool with the reproducing, i'm just trying to find out ways that my race cannot be OP.
Does this mean that i'm...i'm accepted? *-*
 
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