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Kestrel
Guest
Ok, so... We don't have Germany. In fact we don't have any known countries. We do have countries inspired by existing ones *cough*Shima*cough* but we're not exactly a mirror-world. We could include a more medieval-ish setting cause we haven't used one yet, but know that in the Hub, there's gender equality and no such thing as arranged marriages. Bio in and of itself is on the short side... Though I'd be have double standards if I didn't accept it. Just give your home country an actual name ;p
Ability-wise... Delve for Secrets is flat-out denied, and it's active even moreso. Like Alpha mentioned, his character Mime can read minds, but can only go back up to 12 hours max, one mind at a time, and has to be in physical contact from a five seconds up to several minutes depending on the individual/situation. Powers like mind reading can easily become OP, and while I don't like cutting abilities because of stigma, I do need them balanced.
Other abilities seem fine. Stats and skills seem in order. So yeah... Fix the things that need fixing, and lemme know.
Ability-wise... Delve for Secrets is flat-out denied, and it's active even moreso. Like Alpha mentioned, his character Mime can read minds, but can only go back up to 12 hours max, one mind at a time, and has to be in physical contact from a five seconds up to several minutes depending on the individual/situation. Powers like mind reading can easily become OP, and while I don't like cutting abilities because of stigma, I do need them balanced.
Other abilities seem fine. Stats and skills seem in order. So yeah... Fix the things that need fixing, and lemme know.