@Bismarck Rage won't work, I think. In regards to raw stats, you're limited by power level. The current power level is 8, meaning that your raw stat can ONLY go up to 8. Seeing how you've already reached the cap...that +6 STR you get from Rage is going to do nothing.
Also, a +6 stat buff is OP in and of itself, seeing how that'd mean that your character can become a god simply by attaining STR 14 and then raging. XD
Dark red and black font is cancer. For the love of god, change it.
Don't know what R-9 would think of your character being so damn old, because that means you have an experienced officer-type character who is just as strong as an entry-level trainee....
In regards to Defenses, can you do something like...
Parry: (Fighting Att) + 1
Instead? It'd make things easier, imo.
How did you reach 8 for Toughness? It scales off STA, and you can't add points to it, unlike the other things.
From what I've experienced, Expertise is the flexible skill. There is already something called 'Close Combat' as a skill. I'd imagine that, in the case of your character, that'd be 'Close Combat - Swords'?
Flight isn't a skill. It's a Power.
In regards to your powers, use the site provided in the OOC's first post. There's a Powers section that has a list of effects. That's what we use for costing and stuff. It'd be nice if you showed off your calculations using those things. Note that to make something AOE, when it normally isn't, adds another point/rank for the cost.
From a purely thematic point of view, Sephira Knights don't have anything like Inspire or Demoralize. That's what the support-buffers manage, while they focus on single-target, every-man-for-himself buffs. It's really just me telling you to back the fuck off from my own archetype though. XD
R-9 will probably have some other things to say, but yeah. There you go.
@Wolfsbane706 If you have any questions, shoot them at me, Zombehs (because he downloaded that spoonfeeding device) or R-9. It IS hell to fill out though, but fun in a hellish way.