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- One post per day
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- Sci-Fi, Fantasy, Adventure.
*Has received RP invite on profile page*
*Is poking head in to take a look at the RP*
Seems fairly simple/basic at the present moment, but there's definitely some potential here to expand it into more.
Jorick already gave a number of great ideas, but there is one other idea I wish to add as well in my tired about to go bed state.
I noticed the OP seems to very clearly paint Avalon as the villains, which granted can work from a tyrannical leader.
Though I couldn't help but think back to the fire emblem games I've played (Path of Radiance and Radiant Dawn specifically) where although one nation was being painted a clear villain (In Path of Radiance's case, Daein) it was later exposed to be more complex than that.
Daein was lead by a Mad King, who was wicked and evil by just about every sense of the word, perfect to set up a lot of tensions and greed that a nation like Avalon is. However, it was really just him and *most* of his High Generals that were psychos. While all the towns folk and a fair amount of Normal Generals were good honest people, they just wanted to live their daily lives, not be part of the war, and protect those they cared about. To the point where even though they were the aggressor nation, their townsfolk grew a strong hatred towards the defending nation of Crimea for storming in and fighting back, which caused a lot of their loved ones to die in the fighting.
Now replace Daein with Avalon and Crimea with Aurora. What I'm saying is that I think it might aid the RP immensely if we look at the honest and sincere struggles of people on both sides of the war. Show that everyone is suffering and being affected by such a thing, rather than simply take a route of Good VS Evil, crush the evil nation and everyone cheers sort of gimmick.
Anyways, like I said above I'm explaining this in a "tired, about to go to bed" state so I not not be explaining this too well.
If so I can clarify tomorrow.