First things first.
I suggested to Beta we amend the rules appropriately a LONG time ago. I still have an Internet-bruise from that, so I don't think he liked it very much. The rule remains as it is, and since TECHNICALLY you never placed those exact words anywhere in your CS.....
Nah. You put enough thought into it to write an addendum for me to laugh at and reject with pleasure, so I'll let it slide.
Moving on to the actual CS.
FIRST of all, I want to applaud you for being the first CS in a while to not choose 16 as a year and get yelled at by us. So congratulations are due.
Now then.
Your power really isn't a power at all. You could very easily just state she's smart and has a natural affinity for tough physics. A POWER, per se, is something that no normal human being can do just by putting in effort: anyone could become good at physics if they work at it hard enough. It's perfectly fine to have no power, or you can revise if you wish.
Your personality really doesn't tell me a lot about Eden, but I will tell you, if she's as antisocial as you make her out to be, she's not going to do well at New Peaks, since character interaction is a staple and a requirement. You may want to revise that at least somewhat, otherwise you, and your partners, may have a rough time of it.
Backstory:
First paragraph: Not bad. I actually enjoy your writing style; it's a nice change of pace to see lots of imagery.
Second paragraph: Is the 'new world around her' the special school and therapy? Otherwise, I like where this is going.
Third paragraph: I was reading this, and the name at the end just bugged me for a while...and then I realized this is NOT the Bourne Identity. I'd like a less-famous name, please, or that's gonna bug me all day. I know I'm being nitpicky, but that's because there isn't really anything necessarily WRONG with your backstory. It's just lacking a couple details. Her parents must have spent a lot of money to visit China: Are they rich, or was that their only vacation in 20 years? I think a little bit of background information at the beginning might be nice to add a little more context to the rest of the story.
Fourth paragraph: Okay. I can accept this, but I do want to inform you that New Peaks will probably have her in some sort of traditional class to compensate for her rather lackluster performance when it comes to discipline/sanctioned technique, and they will not allow her to just do her own thing the whole time. New Peaks IS flexible, but they want their students to develop a base understanding of a martial art before letting them truly experiment, so she may be restrained in her creativity around her teachers. Just so you understand: As a third or fourth year, she'd probably be encouraged, but not yet. Again, I can accept the backstory, but I needed to clarify what the consequences may be.
Alright. Final judgment: Watch the few spelling mistakes I noticed, as many more might get distracting. More a nitpick than anything else. Otherwise, keep the advice I gave you in mind, make an edit to the power and perhaps the personality, add a thing to the backstory.
However, none of these things are particularly bad, so I say welcome to Fight School, Romdeaux. Beta'll add you to the roster, given he doesn't have any concerns. Unless you decide otherwise, we can just say she doesn't have a power, alright?