I really like your character and the history you've created for him! He wasn't perfect to begin with, and that's a good aspect to his personality. However, there are a few mistakes here and there. For example, the sentences under your history for Crescent, "Of course there was the occasional hater, one that longed for the power Cres possessed. Or thought he wasnt suited to be they're God," should be joined together and the first sentence should have a comma after the "Of course". There are a couple missed commas here and there, but all in all, I think your content is good to go! I would say accepted on my part, too! ^u^