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Alright well I'm going to give you some feedback on the sheet as a whole:Hey Wraith the only thing I feel liek I might have a issue with is my Magni powers can you review them while I work on my biography tonight? I needed several other people to get some nice ideas for mine, because im generally unsure what to do on that part on most Character Sheets.
As downright gritty as you want. You can be any morality your heart desires! I'm sure there's a Magni out there who seduces men only to create a bunch of baby Magni to sustain her life force.Wraith darling, how gritty can we get with this Magni "dog-eat-dog" mentality you've generated? Because you know how fucked up my back stories can get. I'm thinking a tinge of family killing and possibly even a child death, there's the possibility of a literal blood bath due to a bout of insanity, but most likely not because for all my love of tragedy, I don't like needless melodrama.
Oh, fuck.yes.As downright gritty as you want. You can be any morality your heart desires! I'm sure there's a Magni out there who seduces men only to create a bunch of baby Magni to sustain her life force.
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Pretty much, at least one parent would need to be dead. And his parents wouldn't likely be living together due to the nature of relationships between Magni. Likely would have been a 'hit and quit it' situation....man I guess I have to add some more dirt onto my character. Only question I have again is, that if my character have two Magni parents does that mean he doesn't have his powers until they are killed? Or dead?
Alright, I'm happy with that. I'll add her on the OP.@Lord Wraith Fixed those few things. If there's anything else, just shoot.
It's now finished.Apologies if I haven't finished my CS within the previous day as promised. It should be done after a few hours or so.
I'll give it a look over and provide any necessary feedback then!It's now finished.
@Stein and @WanderingSpirit
I added some updates to the Magni ranks to give some brief guidelines as to how old most Magni are when reaching the specific ranks. Give them a look over please!