Hey! Welcome \o/
Alright, what confuses me greatly is that at first you said he became a Bounty Hunter to hunt those who actually did crimes in his colony? Later on you mention him becoming a Bounty Hunter yet again though together with him never having imagined to become one. Clarify for me please.
Also tone down on how you describe him meeting with supernatural stronk myth creatues at least, basically this is the exact opposite from Demmy. And it sounds like 90% of those creatures are friendly towards him anyways...hah!
Also his abilities and stats are okay, if I am not miscounting you have 15 total stats. I would have given him a +2 to strength too. Change his power to something that symbolizes a +2 from his Abnormal Strength rather than the way you have it now (being a
solid 5.)
Apart from that his history is okayish, though that he hasn't killed a human or similiar yet seems highly unlikely, but not impossible.
I'll honestly don't know and by now I don't even want to know. But hey more players just means I fell less bad about killing some off :3c
I do link every accepted character to the first post once I know who exactly is still with me upon the start of the first post.
I don't even remember your spell names, suck that! And while writing this very letters I am way too lazy to check.
@Demmy Yes your character is okay now, consider her accepted.
I love you, I am sooo tempted to change the current stats to what they are called there!
Alright, just shoot me that PM for his reason to enter or whatever and you are good to go!