The Silence of War: A Next Generation Naruto Roleplay {OOC~Closed Sign-Ups}

ShikaTem or ShikaIno?


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Like said, they're future references if the story were to progress to time skipping c: I guess I'll go with the black hair.
 
im sorry i was working on my charater sheet when the update started aand now i have to restart ,
 
( I actually worked on a character for a private Naruto RP but lets see how he would do here!)
How old are they allowed to be? I have an OC not native to the Land of fire and he is hopefully the good kind of different, buut I would just like to pass him through just in case!
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Name: Daichi Hashikara

Nickname(s): Shadow parasol Samurai

Age: 18

Species: Human

Gender: Male

Sexual Orientation: Straight

Birthday: Nov 3

Life Story: "If you can't do it, then make room so I can."
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About him

Personality: Sociopathic, Odd.

Good Habit(s): Dining Etiquette.

Bad Habit(s): Bites his fingers when he thinks, rarely eats full meals.

Likes: Cold/Humid Weather, Bitter fruit, Night time, quiet.

Dislikes: Overly Salty Food, lightning.

Hobbies: Wood Carving, Writing Poetry

Fears: Losing his weapon, being out smarted.

Strengths: Analyses possible outcomes easily, Reads subtle body languages and follows accordingly.

Weaknesses: Works best alone, easily dismisses human lives as nothing.

Special Powers/Abilities: Has amazing Chakra control and Chakra reserves.
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Dreams and Talents

Ambition/Life-long Dream: Become the founder for his own village.

Occupation: Mercenary

Best Class: Sword training

Worst Class: Genjutsu class
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Family and Friends

Parent: Hanako Mori- Mother
Katsu Hashikawa- Father


Siblings: None

Relatives: Yoshiro Hashikawa- Uncle

Pets: Sanshō̄o, a snail summon the size of his fist.

Best Friends: None

Friends: None

Crushes: Kitsui Toma

Rivals: The Hitotose Clan
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Ninja Information

Birth Nation: Land of Iron

Current Village: Hidden leaf

Rank: Chuunin?

Status: Ronin

Teammates: Deceased- Amami Itoh, Kitsui Toma, Genjii Usui

Sensei: Deceased- Sensei Isibashi

Nindo: " I fight for the man that is me, and only me, and I will fight better than the enemy before me."

Chakra Element: Water, Lightning
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Daichi's Jutsu

Jutsu # 1

Name: Sword Release.

Handsign(s): none.

Description: Creates a large chakra blade projectile that is flung at the enemy

Rank: D

Range: User

Type: ranged

Jutsu # 2

Name: Shadow style: Harem of the Parasol

Sign: Run Blade along his hand, place a handprint onto the parasol.

Description: covers the area with a large umbrella, shadowing everything to total darkness, Daichi can then use his multi strike samurai style to kill or incapacitate enemies quickly. This drains his chakra levels tremendously and if too much blood is absorbed into the Parasol, he could perish.

Rank: forbidden

Range: large

Weapon(s): Razor parasol, Ninjato
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Strength in Jutsu

Ninjutsu [ninja techniques]: 7/10

Genjutsu [illusion techniques]: 2/10

Taijutsu [martial arts techniques]: 9/10

Kekkei Genkai [bloodline traits]: 6/10

Doujutsu [eye techniques]: 10/10

Kinjutsu [forbidden techniques]: 3/10

Fuuinjutsu [sealing techniques]: 0/10
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Strength in Missions:

Accuracy: 8/10

Weaponry: 10/10

Stealth: 8/10

Speed: 9/10

Traps: 2/10

Tracking: 5/10

Chakra Control: 8/10

Analytical Skills: 8/10

Strategy: 7/10

Leadership: 4/10
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Clan: Hashiwara

Clan History: A noble samurai clan with strong roots in the Land of irons' military, however, despite their deep ancestral roots in the land of iron, they are far from a nobility. The rival clan of the Hitotose, another strong rooted military clan, have sworn on ancestral injustices done against him by his clan. With a private war raging between the two clans, he has lost family an friends alike. His clan remains alive, but his heart is not committed the quarrels caused by disagreements ages ago.

Clan Status: alive

Kekkei Genkai: Miteminufuri

Handsign(s): none

Description: By permanently rendering the user born with this doujutsu blind, they can access enhanced senses of smell, scent, sound and sense. They could easily detect small vibrations in the air if they concentrate, as well as 'see' other peoples chakra.

Rank: A

Range: 1 mile

Type: Doujutsu
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Looks and Appearance

Body Type/Looks: Tall and skinny, he is lightly muscled with snow white neck-length hair and clouded green eyes.

Blood Type: A+

Height: 5'11

Weight: 170

Everyday Outfit(s): under-clothing worn for samurai armor, a flamboyant kimono once and a while

Mission Outfit(s): light samurai armor, mostly iron and leather.

Accessories: Parasol

Makeup: none

Scent: Faintly fragrant, like a rose bush from far away.

Hairstyle(s): neck length white hair

Scars, Tattoos, Jewelry and/or Piercings: Wave mural tattoo on his back, slash scarring on his shoulder
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Extra Information

Favorite Food(s): Green apples

Favorite Color(s): Orange, he likes how it feels.

Favorite Number(s): 15

Favorite Season(s): Winter

Favorite Time of Day: Daybreak
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Yo. Daddy's home.
How ya'll doing?
You ain't my Daddy.

But I'm doin' fine, gurl. Yo'self?
( I actually worked on a character for a private Naruto RP but lets see how he would do here!)
How old are they allowed to be? I have an OC not native to the Land of fire and he is hopefully the good kind of different, buut I would just like to pass him through just in case!
Name: Daichi Hashikara
Nickname(s): Shadow parasol Samurai
Species: Human
Gender: Male
Sexual Orientation: Straight
Birthday: Nov 3
Life Story: "If you can't do it, then make room so I can."
------------------------
About him
Personality: Sociopathic, Odd.
Good Habit(s): Dining Etiquette.
Bad Habit(s): Bites his fingers when he thinks, rarely eats full meals.
Likes: Cold/Humid Weather, Bitter fruit, Night time, quiet.
Dislikes: Overly Salty Food, lightning.
Hobbies: Wood Carving, Writing Poetry
Fears: Losing his weapon, being out smarted.
Strengths: Analyses possible outcomes easily, Reads subtle body languages and follows accordingly.
Weaknesses: Works best alone, easily dismisses human lives as nothing.
Special Powers/Abilities: Has amazing Chakra control and Chakra reserves.
________________________
Dreams and Talents
Ambition/Life-long Dream: Become the founder for his own village.
Occupation: Mercenary
Best Class: Sword training
Worst Class: Genjutsu class
______________________________
Family and Friends
Parent: Hanako Mori- Mother
Katsu Hashikawa- Father
Siblings: None
Relatives: Yoshiro Hashikawa- Uncle
Pets: Sanshō̄o, a snail summon the size of his fist.
Best Friends: None
Friends: None
Crushes: Kitsui Toma
Rivals: The Hitotose Clan
_________________________
Ninja Information
Birth Nation: Land of Iron
Current Village: Hidden leaf
Rank: Chuunin?
Status: Ronin
Teammates: Deceased- Amami Itoh, Kitsui Toma, Genjii Usui
Sensei: Deceased- Sensei Isibashi
Nindo: " I fight for the man that is me, and only me, and I will fight better than the enemy before me."
Chakra Element: Water, Lightning
_________________
Daichi's Jutsu
Jutsu # 1
Name: Sword Release.
Handsign(s): none.
Description: Creates a large chakra blade projectile that is flung at the enemy
Range: User
Type: ranged
Jutsu # 2
Name: Shadow style: Harem of the Parasol
Sign: Run Blade along his hand, place a handprint onto the parasol.
Description: covers the area with a large umbrella, shadowing everything to total darkness, Daichi can then use his multi strike samurai style to kill or incapacitate enemies quickly. This drains his chakra levels tremendously and if too much blood is absorbed into the Parasol, he could perish.
Rank: forbidden
Range: large
Weapon(s): Razor parasol, Ninjato
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Strength in Jutsu
Ninjutsu [ninja techniques]: 7/10
Genjutsu [illusion techniques]: 2/10
Taijutsu [martial arts techniques]: 9/10
Kekkei Genkai [bloodline traits]: 6/10
Doujutsu [eye techniques]: 10/10
Kinjutsu [forbidden techniques]: 3/10
Fuuinjutsu [sealing techniques]: 0/10
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Strength in Missions:
Accuracy: 8/10
Weaponry: 10/10
Stealth: 8/10
Speed: 9/10
Traps: 2/10
Tracking: 5/10
Chakra Control: 8/10
Analytical Skills: 8/10
Strategy: 7/10
Leadership: 4/10
____________________________
Clan: Hashiwara
Clan History: A noble samurai clan with strong roots in the Land of irons' military, however, despite their deep ancestral roots in the land of iron, they are far from a nobility. The rival clan of the Hitotose, another strong rooted military clan, have sworn on ancestral injustices done against him by his clan. With a private war raging between the two clans, he has lost family an friends alike. His clan remains alive, but his heart is not committed the quarrels caused by disagreements ages ago.
Clan Status: alive
Kekkei Genkai: Miteminufuri
Handsign(s): none
Description: By permanently rendering the user born with this doujutsu blind, they can access enhanced senses of smell, scent, sound and sense. They could easily detect small vibrations in the air if they concentrate, as well as 'see' other peoples chakra.
Range: 1 mile
Type: Doujutsu
__________________________
Looks and Appearance
Body Type/Looks: Tall and skinny, he is lightly muscled with snow white neck-length hair and clouded green eyes.
Blood Type: A+
Height: 5'11
Weight: 170
Everyday Outfit(s): under-clothing worn for samurai armor, a flamboyant kimono once and a while
Mission Outfit(s): light samurai armor, mostly iron and leather.
Accessories: Parasol
Makeup: none
Scent: Faintly fragrant, like a rose bush from far away.
Hairstyle(s): neck length white hair
Scars, Tattoos, Jewelry and/or Piercings: Wave mural tattoo on his back, slash scarring on his shoulder
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Extra Information
Favorite Food(s): Green apples
Favorite Color(s): Orange, he likes how it feels.
Favorite Number(s): 15
Favorite Season(s): Winter
Favorite Time of Day: Daybreak

So I am not the GM, so take what I say with a grain of salt, but here are a few things I notice about the sheet.

1) You don't fulfill the required details and you are not adhering to the formatting put out by the GM. As it stands, your character's sheet is completely different to everyone elses, which can be an issue. It is also, in my opinion at least, a little rude to ignore the formatting put out by a GM. They asked for that information for a reason.

2) Your character doesn't fit into any of the currently asked for tropes. The RP is gearing up to have three teams of Chunin. Your does not fit into any of the asked for archetypes.

3) It appears you haven't read the rules

I am giving you these notes so that you can either ignore them or attempt to tackle them. As I said, I'm not a GM or a Co-GM, so take this as you will. I've made no comments on the content of the character, because these issues would be the ones I required be addressed first, were I GM/Co-GM.

Are there any spots left?
You'll have to wait for a GM on this one. It looks as if we are booked up, but Cyline might open up another team or the Bad-Boy Archetype might not fill up.
 
Hehe. You referred to me as "Gurl". Only my sassy urban gay friends do that. I like it.

I'm hungover and got a bit of a cold, but I think I'll live.
 
Yeah sorry for the completely different character sheet. It was a complete hail Mary throw to see if it could have worked. He was meant for a more older generation of naruto characters.
 
May i reserve the the optimist? It's been awhile since i watched naruto so i'll need to re-familiarize myself with it a bit but i'm always down for a good next gen rp.
 
Oh! My bad, i didn't even notice. That was absent minded of me ^-^' Could you tell me who all is still available?
 
feel free to take the bad boy spot, i dont think im going to have rp anymore.
 
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