@Levont Seems fine to me. Note that Shadow Strike's knockback and Shadow Illusion's stun will not be absolute. In regards to Dark Resent...are you basically saying that it's the shadow of the shuriken that does damage? So if the shuriken was stopped, the shadow of it will also be stopped, and thus, it won't do anything?
@Click This How is collapse, ruin, and corruption a fear? Be more specific, you pleb. You get a few points for a sword cane though. Very stylish. Better spend a paragraph every time we switch scenes, just to detail her fashion sense. Surely she'd have different clothes for different occasions.
Onto more serious things...how autonomous can her Manipulation of Arms get? To the extent where it's like you're fighting multiple veteran opponents? What are the applications of her Vanishing Point? I understand that her Chasm is more of a strategic spell instead of a tactical one, but what of Vanishing Point? Heck, I'll say straight out that most rune magics take more time to draw out than elemental magics.
@Skyswimsky Fucking shitty bitch cunt slut, disliking snow. e.e And what a bad idealist. Can't even follow her own ideals justly. I'll look forward to squashing her like the bug she is.
Also, you can thank Click for this nerf. Objects created from Genesis now take a bigass chunk of mana, and continue to chew through mana the longer you keep them 'existent'. Meaning that she can't spam it, nor can she keep it up for more than a minute or so without fainting. Everything else is probably fine.
And seeing how she has no practical fears, I'll be making her discover those fears in the future. Deal with it.
@Voltin Such a spacey brat. No problems I can see. Glad to finally have someone with an easily exploitable fear. Guess he doesn't know how to swim as well?
@Zombehs Fairly observant, eh? Good luck with that. Huehuehuheuhue....That no-bonding thing is going to be a problem that he hopefully gets over. Because damn, Araki was a pain in the ass to write into everything.
Should I assume that his vampiric master is dead now? Nice sword skills. He'll have to have SOME sort of 'wind-up' for Rule the Skies though. Just saying. Sounds like it would be Gae Bolg without da pose at the moment. And get a Theme Song, dammit.
@Asuras Aura of Forgetting's effects will be weakened if a connection is made, such as having a long conversation, or sharing a common goal, or whatever else. Every time they meet again, the effect becomes weaker and weaker as well, until it's only 'natural forgetfullness' that erases her from their memories.
Curse of Oracles is incapable of bringing death, right? How does it select the future anyways, assuming that there's no such thing as 'fate'?
Bedlam Blades will be just as mana-intensive as all the other 'matter creation' spells in this RP. As in, it'll take up a huge chunk of everything.
And finally, note that, technically, they have no way of killing a Rift Beast, only pinning/capturing/pissing one off. You know, because they don't have any TRULY overpowered magic beams, nor does she have Talentium at all. That quote's pretty wonderful, by the way.
In more ways than one.