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I.S. Zero
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edited:Alright. Here's the good thing. I don't actually care that much about his personality, so I won't bother with it.
Here's the bad things.
First. He's a swordsman, but he doesn't even have swordsmanship as a strength? K den.
Did you actually DO the math on his gates? Let's consider speed only. Assume that at base, he runs at 20mph.
First Gate: 20 x 20 = 400mph.
Second Gate: 400 x 400 = 160000 mph.
Third Gate: 160000 x 160000 = 25600000000 mph
And that's only for speed. The gates square his strength and durability as well. Do you not see the issue here? He's a 15 year old Dragon Hunter, and he can already move at hypersonic speeds.
Also, being able to read his opponent's movements with minimal effort is OP. You can literally use that as a basis for him dodging and countering every single attack. Oh wait, that doesn't even matter, because he can speedblitz every single dragon in this RP, instantly, because his two MASSIVE buffs don't even require a cast time.
Finally, why the hell does he even USE guns, if he can move way faster than them?
While I'm at it, just because Dragons exist doesn't mean that Gods exist. So I'll mark off the 'blessed by Tsukiyomi' thing as mere superstition.
I'll also not bother with going over my personal thoughts on the origin of Itamimaru, because I have personal biases about that.
https://www.iwakuroleplay.com/threads/one-for-all-and-all-for-one.102589/page-6
satisfactory or does it still need changing?