That's not all that fair, the premise was pretty clearly stated. Nothing bad has really happened so far.This is a little less Hogwarts, a little more Black Ship. Tone down the edge, would you QM?
I will just roll with it. I understand where you're coming from and I will edit things accordingly to try to clear up some misconceptions.It's not deat that is the problem here. It is the concept of unaging child soldiers being thrown to the wolves with little-to-no training. Also, the stated purpose is clearly to "...teach others like [Kraven] how to function naturally in society by teaching them how use their powers."
The monster fights are auxiliary at best.
Just to let you know, I, personally, do not have a problem with this, but you have to ask yourself how a 15-year-old is going to react to this situation, especially a 15-year-old who is familiar with the X-Men.
I'm confused as to what you want toned down.This is a little less Hogwarts, a little more Black Ship. Tone down the edge, would you QM?
Oh, fuck. Is everything alright?For now, I think I'm going to do some planning. I don't know if I will be able to post tomorrow or not because I will be making several trips to the hospital.
For whatever reason you're going, I hope for the best.For now, I think I'm going to do some planning. I don't know if I will be able to post tomorrow or not because I will be making several trips to the hospital.
All the dead babies, I guess. I'm getting a really bad feeling from the story of how every single government in the world independently decided to brutally kill little kids because they had superpowers. I've honestly developed a certain amount of respect for your storytelling abilities thus far, but I'm really getting an "everyone hates us because we're special" vibe off it just now.I'm confused as to what you want toned down.