Here's my application for rp, I hope it's okay! Tell me if there's anything that needs to be fixed.
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Name: Ehren Nobel
Age: 19
Height: 6'0"
Weight: 162 lbs
Personality: Ehren is a responsible person, and erudite as well. He makes sure that everything in his life is going okay and everyone in his life is doing alright. He's there to support people and give them a shoulder to cry on. He takes his studies very seriously and would usually pick that over a party. However, he's not completely stuck up when it comes to parties. On the contrary, he loves them, just without any alcohol or drugs. He wants to be a good role model for the people around him, so he never partakes in anything "bad" like drugs, stealing, lying, etc. However, Ehren lacks street smarts and fears that if he wasn't able to get a stable job, everything in his life will fall apart. He has a secret love for the romance genre and can get emotional during scenes of intense romance.
Biography: Ehren was taken in by the state when he was a baby, due to his father abandoning his mother and his mother being a druggie. He was placed in foster care and moved from home to home, feeling like he didn't belong until he was adopted by the perfect family for him. They consisted of two loving parents and an older sister that, at first, didn't take to him. He was around 8 at the time of his adoption.
Once he was in a stable environment, he was able to thrive in school and excelled in anything that used his brain rather than brawn. His adoptive parents were proud of him and, though his older sister saw him stealing the spotlight from her, stood up for him whenever he was bullied. Though the time he spent in foster care did affect him to a degree, he wanted to be a good boy and not have others be put in his position back then. So he worked to be a "good boy" to his family and peers, always doing as he was told and keeping to his morals. As he grew older, he eventually became well liked among his peers and made a couple of lifelong friends in the process.
His high school and college life were relatively normal. He went to a couple of parties, went to prom and got his first kiss there, graduated, attended a prestigious college, the works. He was at the prime of his youth when his life was taken from him due to drunk driving. He was there to pick up his friends when the car smashed into the driver's seat and he perished.
Life Wish: Graduate college and get a good, stable job. Secretly wants to write some popular romance novels.
Death Scene: Ehren sighed and leaned back in his chair as he waited for his friends to come out. They had partying it up again, drinking the night away even though they were underage. Tapping his fingers on the steering wheel, he watched the drunk partygoers slowly trickle outside, laughing and smiling at each other due to the influence of alcohol. The whole thing seemed fun, but he forced himself not to go to parties during his college years. After all, someone had to be the responsible one and not drink alcohol underage, right?
He let out another sigh when he spotted his friends and their girlfriends stumbling out of the house, roaring drunk. "H-Hey Ehreeen," one of them exclaimed, waving to him clumsily, "You should've-should've come for the trip. Reaaaal good!"
"No thanks, I rather be alive," he drawled, "Now get in and I'll drive you guys home." They just laughed and clambered into the car as if it was no big deal. He secretly hoped that no one would throw up in his car. Turning the car on, he slowly began to move out of the current street he was in and weave through the other streets.
"So, hey, did you guys like, h-hear about the other party goin' on?" one of the girlfriends asked, "Total bogus, right?"
"Hm, I wouldn't know. Where was it being held?" he asked.
"Close by, jus past this intersection o'er there," one of his friends said as he stopped by a red light.
"Really? That's-" There was the sound of screeching tires and something smashed into his car. It flipped over several times from the force before landing on its side, a dent near the front of his car. Even wearing a seatbelt couldn't save him from the force of the crash, for the other car had crashed right into the driver's seat.
