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Captain Wumbo
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I was not sure if I did the getting smashed across the field correctly, gave him a concussion, a broken are or dislocated shoulder, and a few cuts and bruises; was that alright?
I'll tell you when I catch up on the IC, but I'm sure it was fine.I was not sure if I did the getting smashed across the field correctly, gave him a concussion, a broken are or dislocated shoulder, and a few cuts and bruises; was that alright?
Ty, I will@Captain Wumbo, that was pretty good. Nothing wrong with it, just make sure he keeps those injuries in subsequent posts and get him some medical attention after this battle is over.
Well that was unexpected, I didn't think to invite you to anything other than Word Syndrome with your schedule. It'll be a pleasure.This seems like a really interesting plot! I'll have all the time in the world (for two weeks, sadly) starting tomorrow evening, so I'll catch up with the IC and try to come up with original powers in the meantime. That is, if you'll have me.
P.s. I had to dust off my title of "official stalker", Sparks, so here I am ^_^
I hope things will calm down a bit starting next period, but I do appreciate the thought ^_^ I wasn't exactly planning on taking on another roleplay, but this one seemed too interesting to ignore *cough*afterdoingsomestalking*cough*Well that was unexpected, I didn't think to invite you to anything other than Word Syndrome with your schedule. It'll be a pleasure.
Yep. Still accepting people to the RP.may I join? Proubably a bit late to the party
A very powerful character, nothing wrong with that as long as he is handled properly and has some flaws.Here's the CS for my character, may I join this as I have been looking for a good super Hero RP
Character name -Jaden Mcfadden
Alias - Shifter or Aphosis, depends on his mood
Faction - Collective
Gender - Variable, but preffers to be Male
Age - 21
Birthplace -Caifornia, San Jose
Occupation - Full time villian
Appearance -
This is his default form, but he can change it at will.
Height - Usually 6'1
Weight -Varies between minimum of 165 to a maximum of around 1 to 2 tons, though he will rarely, if ever, ever consume enough organic material to get that heavy
Apparel - He usually wears what looks like a mono tone T-shirt and some jeans, maybe a jacket, but is actually made from his Biomaterial.
Weaponry - Flesh Tendrils, Bone Claws, blades, and teeth that are as hard as steels, and can hold an edge like it.
Equipment - None
Powers - He possesses the power of Biokinesis, specifically Self Body Manipulation. He can freely take any form he can imagine, as long as he has enough Biomass to turn into that thing. He absorbs organic material, most easily that of animals and humans, and uses it as his weapons, armor, even self-aware creatures. He can also just consume things, making his body denser, heavier, stronger, and more durable. He can also access the memories of people he consumes, making him good at infiltration of almost any base. He can even divide himself (smallest he can divide into being the size of a squirrel), and reform later. This gives him a hive mind mentality, with one creature as the head that directs the others, seeing and hearing everything through their eyes. He can also detect other supers, so he knows not to try and consume them. He can also regenerate himself rather well, only way to ensure his death is to crush his head flat.
Limitations - He can't consume people with super powers, as it's like poison to his veins if he even ingests a drop of their blood. Trying to eat one would more than likely leave him very ill, and highly useless. One can burn or freeze the organic matter and constructs he uses, which will render it inoperable for him to use. When he splits up, he has to have enough of the original biomass available do equal his minumum weight, otherwise he can't reform. When split into pieces, only the main consciousness can absorb more bio material, and even then he can't absorb a lot. Also when he becomes something large, if he doesn't have sufficient biomass, it will be a lot easier to kill him like that, thus he preferes to stay around humanoid in size and shape.
Skills - He has good hand to hand, very good at infiltration and has become a master of impersonation. An excellent tracker. He is very strong, super humanly so when he has a lot of density.
Weaknesses -He can only consume so much matter, and it can be hard to get. He can't absorb organic matter if it isn't fresh, nor if it has been preserved for a long period of time. One can burn or freeze the organic matter and constructs he uses, which will render it inoperable for him to use. When he has less biomaterial, he becomes a lot slower and less agile, and his reflexes aren't nearly as good. When he's at base minimum, he's durability is at base human, but he becomes a lot faster and agile, bearing super human reflexes.
Morality - Chaotic Evil, he lives for the kill and nothing else
Personality - He cares not for anyone or anything other than himself, and feeding his hunger when ever it takes him. He is willing to work with others, but they should always watch their back so they don't end up getting skewered. Unempowered are food to him, and those with powers are annoyances that he can't eat.
Bio - Jaden discovered his power at the age of 5, when he accidentally consumed his neighbor's cat. He was scared out of his mind, and went over to his parent for help, but they backed away from him, terrified. Seeing this, he ran away, somewhere into a nearby forest. With his power, he hardly needed to eat, and he slowly but surely gained control of his powers, in hopes of one day returning to his parents. And eventually he did at the age of 10, he discovered them with another boy, an adopted one. And when he came to ask them why he had been replaced, his father slapped him away, telling Jason he was a monster. His mother backed away from him, holding the other boy in her arms and staring at him in fear and terror. Jaden stared at his parents, then his replacement, his hope and sadness slowly becoming despair and rage. In his rage he attacked, consuming them all. He's been on his own ever since, his experience giving him a hatred for most of humanity, so he began to kill them, at first only those he saw doing crimes and such. But as time went on, he became more desensitized to what he was doing, to the point where he no longer had any morals or motive. To him, people were livestock for him to slaughter and consume at his leisure. However, their is a small part of himself, buried deep down, that still wants to be human.
I made him Collective cause in the thing you said you didn't want to many independents(which this guy would normally be), so I decided to put him in the collective cause he's definitely a villain.A very powerful character, nothing wrong with that as long as he is handled properly and has some flaws.
How did he end up getting recruited to the Collective? They'd avoid someone so uncontrollable and dangerous to even allies.
How do you envision yourself using this character? What are your plans for him, and how do you intend for him to react with other characters and the world around him?Here's the CS for my character, may I join this as I have been looking for a good super Hero RP
Character name -Jaden Mcfadden
Alias - Shifter or Aphosis, depends on his mood
Faction - Collective
Gender - Variable, but preffers to be Male
Age - 21
Birthplace -Caifornia, San Jose
Occupation - Full time villian
Appearance -
This is his default form, but he can change it at will.
Height - Usually 6'1
Weight -Varies between minimum of 165 to a maximum of around 1 to 2 tons, though he will rarely, if ever, ever consume enough organic material to get that heavy
Apparel - He usually wears what looks like a mono tone T-shirt and some jeans, maybe a jacket, but is actually made from his Biomaterial.
Weaponry - Flesh Tendrils, Bone Claws, blades, and teeth that are as hard as steels, and can hold an edge like it.
Equipment - None
Powers - He possesses the power of Biokinesis, specifically Self Body Manipulation. He can freely take any form he can imagine, as long as he has enough Biomass to turn into that thing. He absorbs organic material, most easily that of animals and humans, and uses it as his weapons, armor, even self-aware creatures. He can also just consume things, making his body denser, heavier, stronger, and more durable. He can also access the memories of people he consumes, making him good at infiltration of almost any base. He can even divide himself (smallest he can divide into being the size of a squirrel), and reform later. This gives him a hive mind mentality, with one creature as the head that directs the others, seeing and hearing everything through their eyes. He can also detect other supers, so he knows not to try and consume them. He can also regenerate himself rather well, only way to ensure his death is to crush his head flat.
Limitations - He can't consume people with super powers, as it's like poison to his veins if he even ingests a drop of their blood. Trying to eat one would more than likely leave him very ill, and highly useless. One can burn or freeze the organic matter and constructs he uses, which will render it inoperable for him to use. When he splits up, he has to have enough of the original biomass available do equal his minumum weight, otherwise he can't reform. When split into pieces, only the main consciousness can absorb more bio material, and even then he can't absorb a lot. Also when he becomes something large, if he doesn't have sufficient biomass, it will be a lot easier to kill him like that, thus he preferes to stay around humanoid in size and shape.
Skills - He has good hand to hand, very good at infiltration and has become a master of impersonation. An excellent tracker. He is very strong, super humanly so when he has a lot of density.
Weaknesses -He can only consume so much matter, and it can be hard to get. He can't absorb organic matter if it isn't fresh, nor if it has been preserved for a long period of time. One can burn or freeze the organic matter and constructs he uses, which will render it inoperable for him to use. When he has less biomaterial, he becomes a lot slower and less agile, and his reflexes aren't nearly as good. When he's at base minimum, he's durability is at base human, but he becomes a lot faster and agile, bearing super human reflexes.
Morality - Chaotic Evil, he lives for the kill and nothing else
Personality - He cares not for anyone or anything other than himself, and feeding his hunger when ever it takes him. He is willing to work with others, but they should always watch their back so they don't end up getting skewered. Unempowered are food to him, and those with powers are annoyances that he can't eat.
Bio - Jaden discovered his power at the age of 5, when he accidentally consumed his neighbor's cat. He was scared out of his mind, and went over to his parent for help, but they backed away from him, terrified. Seeing this, he ran away, somewhere into a nearby forest. With his power, he hardly needed to eat, and he slowly but surely gained control of his powers, in hopes of one day returning to his parents. And eventually he did at the age of 10, he discovered them with another boy, an adopted one. And when he came to ask them why he had been replaced, his father slapped him away, telling Jason he was a monster. His mother backed away from him, holding the other boy in her arms and staring at him in fear and terror. Jaden stared at his parents, then his replacement, his hope and sadness slowly becoming despair and rage. In his rage he attacked, consuming them all. He's been on his own ever since, his experience giving him a hatred for most of humanity, so he began to kill them, at first only those he saw doing crimes and such. But as time went on, he became more desensitized to what he was doing, to the point where he no longer had any morals or motive. To him, people were livestock for him to slaughter and consume at his leisure. However, their is a small part of himself, buried deep down, that still wants to be human.
My bad I'll change that.@Captain Wumbo
Just letting you know that Sofia/Wild is still in rhino form, so she wouldn't be able to take his hand. Plus I was planning to keep her in rhino form because she got shot thrice and if she reverted back to human form she would probably die. :O But thanks for including her anyway. ^^
I see him as one who lives for himself, likes to cause Chaos, and will interact with those that hold his interest. He is actually very social with other powered individuals, whether they be good or evil, he just shouldn't be trusted as if it is likely to benefit him he will stab you in the back. Otherwise, he's a very laid back, if sociopathic, individual. He also bears an interest in any powered individual, due to the fact that he can't devour them. He has always wondered about that fact, and thus, is fascinated by others with powers as well. Also, if their is a fight going on, he will likely add to the Chaos by attacking whoever seems to be stronger, as he likes to prove that he's the strongest of all of those around him. I hope this provides a sufficient explanation as to how I will have him act.How do you envision yourself using this character? What are your plans for him, and how do you intend for him to react with other characters and the world around him?
While he has sufficient limitations on his powers, he seems designed without regards to interaction or interdependence which are the vehicles through which RPs progress. If you look at the other independent characters, you'll notice that they both have a high probability of interacting with others because they were designed to, whereas your character seems to exist within a group primarily because of a perceived limitation on the number of independents allowed.
You see, that directly contradicts your characters provided personality. You said he views everyone as prey, and other supers are just irritants.I see him as one who lives for himself, likes to cause Chaos, and will interact with those that hold his interest. He is actually very social with other powered individuals, whether they be good or evil, he just shouldn't be trusted as if it is likely to benefit him he will stab you in the back. Otherwise, he's a very laid back, if sociopathic, individual. He also bears an interest in any powered individual, due to the fact that he can't devour them. He has always wondered about that fact, and thus, is fascinated by others with powers as well. Also, if their is a fight going on, he will likely add to the Chaos by attacking whoever seems to be stronger, as he likes to prove that he's the strongest of all of those around him. I hope this provides a sufficient explanation as to how I will have him act.
So I did, I will switch it for the new then.You see, that directly contradicts your characters provided personality. You said he views everyone as prey, and other supers are just irritants.