Also, I'm trying a new style of writing for this.
I'm trying to make it sound like her, in spite of it being in the third person. I'm not used to trying to reduce my flourish and kind of "dumb down" my writing to suit my characters more, but since Annie is such a plain character with very little actually interesting about her, I figured... my writing her would have to be plain too, right?
Plus, with her night terrors, she wouldn't sleep well ever, so she would digress quite a bit. I tried to capture a kind of tired feeling in the way the paragraphs are written. Which should be easy given I'm an insomniac, but it seemed too strained.
I don't know... I haven't Role Played in a while.
I need to feel validated. D:<