Haha, don't worry William, I actually saw the balancing you did as well the intentions. That is honestly why I was conflicted rather than finding it too much. In all honesty, I would love to have you within the RP, but for this character I would like to implement the voting rule. I actually find it quite the daring attempt to see a character that is based on darkness in a world that is known for light coming out of the skies at random. And honestly, I view it as that awesome background character that shows up at random occasion to be overpowered. (Not a bad thing, I like these characters honestly)
But, at the same time, it is just as Simple said. It was intended for all players to be on the same side, no question. More or less, the story is of humanoids attempting to survive the world of monsters and gods.
Anyways, that's why I am tossing your current sheet for a vote.
But no really, I do love the air that carries in your presence my friend! I would be delighted for you to join us, if even without this character (If the vote does lean the other direction)