Star Wars: Whispers of Darkness (OoC)

  • So many newbies lately! Here is a very important PSA about one of our most vital content policies! Read it even if you are an ancient member!
Status
Not open for further replies.
Obi-Wan: DID I MISS SOMETHING?!

Anakin: Yeah, you passed out after the railing broke your spine and we had to amputate your lower half. Don't worry, we'll get you some cool robot legs.
 
  • Like
Reactions: Jade
Appearance:
[spoili]
lord_sith_by_bdraw2012-d8muiwt.png

[/spoili]

Name: Darth Zhalek

Age: Unknown, Believed to be in Mid-Thirties.
Gender: Male


Species: Human

Main Faction: Sith-Syndicate

Sub-Faction: Sith-Empire (Sith Lord)

Weapons: Singel-Bladed Lightsaber
[spoili]
lightsaber___single_hilt-t2.jpg

[/spoili]

Equipment:
Sith Lord Robes (Picture)
Mask (Picture)
DataPad
Transmitter
Sith Holocrons (Teachings)


Skills:
Master Swordsman
Expert Duelist
Expert Force User
Persuasion
Decent Pilot


Flaws:
Doesn't Back down (Live or Die, no running)
No Small Spaces (Claustrophobic)
Mediocre Leader
Easily Angered


Force Sensitive: Yes

Force Abilities:
Force Storm (Stronger than Force Lightning)
Force Wave
Force Drain
Force Jump
Force Doppleganger
Force Destruction


Bio:

Zhalek was born on an Outer Rim planet, one that was under Galactic rule at the time and his Mother was a common woman. She slept with a Storm Trooper for one night and little Zhalek was born and raised in the Outer Rim. He began to show signs that he was Force sensitive, but by the time this was discovered the Empire was defeated and in shambles, retreating to the Outer Rim and away from the Rebels. They were hunted down, but many escaped. Fortunately for Zhalek, a Sith Cargo ship was shot down, crashing on his home planet. He scavenged the Sith ship and found Holocrons of the Sith Teachings and ways. Stealing these for himself, he hid in his room for days as he studied the Holocrons over the years.

Reaching young adulthood, he gathered most of the information from the Sith Holocrons that he could and set out, leaving the Outer Rim to have his own quest of 'enlightenment' and self-looking. He traveled across the Galaxy, going from one planet to the next, finding the parts for the tool that would make him feared like the Days of Old. He crafted his Lightsaber, his very own lightsaber and obtaining the parts for this dangerous device was easy to find, but costly and forced him to pick up many quick jobs over these planets. Most of the fast and easy jobs was simple transfer of freight. Once his Lightsaber was built, he turned to the Holocrons once more to learn the ways of the Dark Side.

Over the years of training, learning, and searching. He followed the path of the Sith and looked for the Old Empire, to restore power and bring back the Sith. They weren't hard to find, he just had to do more searching outside of the Outer Rims to come across the Planets that they hid on, growing stronger once more to return. At first, he was attacked as it was only the natural response but after killing a few Troopers, and his red glowing blade that became the Sith symbol, he was given a chance to talk to them. After a nice chat and discussion, he soon began to take control of pockets of the Empire. The Holocrons that he followed so blindly were created by Darth Dementus, and now controls the Sith-Syndicate to revive Darth Dementus once more.

He now returns with his Armada and Troopers to defeat the New Republic and the Moff, and bring Glory back to the Sith with Darth Dementus leading them once more.

Other: I don't have any favorite Quotes though...but I read the rules! D:
 
Last edited:
  • Like
Reactions: Jade
Appearance:
[spoili]
lord_sith_by_bdraw2012-d8muiwt.png

[/spoili]

Name: Darth Zhalek

Age: Unknown, Believed to be in Mid-Thirties.
Gender: Male


Species: Human

Main Faction: Sith-Syndicate

Sub-Faction: Sith-Empire (Sith Lord)

Weapons: Singel-Bladed Lightsaber
[spoili]
lightsaber___single_hilt-t2.jpg

[/spoili]

Equipment:
Sith Lord Robes (Picture)
Mask (Picture)
DataPad
Transmitter
Sith Holocrons (Teachings)


Skills:
Master Swordsman
Expert Force User
Persuasion
Decent Pilot


Flaws:
Doesn't Back down (Live or Die, no running)
No Small Spaces (Claustrophobic)
Mediocre Leader
Easily Angered


Force Sensitive: Yes

Force Abilities:
Force Storm (Stronger than Force Lightning)
Force Drain
Force Jump
Force Doppleganger
Force Destruction


Bio:

Zhalek was born on an Outer Rim planet, one that was under Galactic rule at the time and his Mother was a common woman. She slept with a Storm Trooper for one night and little Zhalek was born and raised in the Outer Rim. He began to show signs that he was Force sensitive, but by the time this was discovered the Empire was defeated and in shambles, retreating to the Outer Rim and away from the Rebels. They were hunted down, but many escaped. Fortunately for Zhalek, a Sith Cargo ship was shot down, crashing on his home planet. He scavenged the Sith ship and found Holocrons of the Sith Teachings and ways. Stealing these for himself, he hid in his room for days as he studied the Holocrons over the years.

Reaching young adulthood, he gathered most of the information from the Sith Holocrons that he could and set out, leaving the Outer Rim to have his own quest of 'enlightenment' and self-looking. He traveled across the Galaxy, going from one planet to the next, finding the parts for the tool that would make him feared like the Days of Old. He crafted his Lightsaber, his very own lightsaber and obtaining the parts for this dangerous device was easy to find, but costly and forced him to pick up many quick jobs over these planets. Most of the fast and easy jobs was simple transfer of freight. Once his Lightsaber was built, he turned to the Holocrons once more to learn the ways of the Dark Side.

Over the years of training, learning, and searching. He followed the path of the Sith and looked for the Old Empire, to restore power and bring back the Sith. They weren't hard to find, he just had to do more searching outside of the Outer Rims to come across the Planets that they hid on, growing stronger once more to return. At first, he was attacked as it was only the natural response but after killing a few Troopers, and his red glowing blade that became the Sith symbol, he was given a chance to talk to them. After a nice chat and discussion, he soon began to take control of pockets of the Empire. The Holocrons that he followed so blindly were created by Darth Dementus, and now controls the Sith-Syndicate to revive Darth Dementus once more.

He now returns with his Armada and Troopers to defeat the New Republic and the Moff, and bring Glory back to the Sith with Darth Dementus leading them once more.

Other: I don't have any favorite Quotes though...but I read the rules! D:
So is he down to take Rudo on as an apprentice?
 
Alright. Darth Zhalek (Unless I'm confused by Sora's words) is the leader of the Sith-Syndicate currently. I could be wrong...Sora!
 
Pick the Sith-Empire and you get a cool cyborg to order around as well.
 
You can be the leader of the Syndicate or the leader of the Sith-Empire
 
Finding images for my ship fleet is harder than I thought it would be.
 
I think we should have Banner for this ^.^ I'll make one if you want @Sora1297
 
We had one for the old OoC (before I revamped it), but we could use another. If you want to, feel free to make one and send it to me ^^
 
  • Like
Reactions: ~\The Talentless/~
Just letting you know, Sora, that I'll be vamping Koyi's template today (fingers crossed). Besides the missing information, there's a few things within her background and her present situation I'm working out...and building her personality through my restudy of Twi'leki history and little tidbits about those few Twi'lek women known who've broke the cultural chains to become more than just a pretty face. There's just a lot about Koyi herself that I wish to build mentally, as well as note in her template; just going to get it done before the RP starts. Then, I'm not searching for these things in order to build postings.

So, long story short, her temp will be changing soon. LOL!
 
Appearance:
images


Name: Va Je'teel
Name of Current Body's Original Inhabitant: Talerra Gorn

Age at Transferal: 74
Age of Current Body: 27

Gender: Male
Gender of Current Body: Female

Species: Human
Species of Current Body: Human

Main Faction: None

Sub-Faction: The New Order

Weapons:
Lightsaber: Je'teel sports a seemingly standard single bladed lightsaber with a magenta adegan crystal used as the focusing lens. The hilt is made of a blackish silver metal and the knobs and switches are nondescript. While the saber looks a bit short, it actually employs a duel phase system, enabling it to grow instantly from .8 meters to just over 1.5, allowing for high amounts of versatility and opportunities for surprise during combat.

Equipment:
1: Food tablets.
2: A small moister collector.
3: A bit of carrying credits.
4: Insulated, shock and stab resistant clothing.

Skills:
1: Oration
2: Delegation
3: Survivalist Experience
4: Dueling Expertise

Lightsaber Form:
Juyo: As with all Juyo specialists, Je'teel has mastered several other lightsaber forms as a prerequisite to the formation of his Juyo. A firm proponent of precision over randomization, Je'teel's style is characterized by quick cuts and jabs, and the deft parries and evasion typical of Makashi. He is absolutely reliant on Tutaminis to block or deflect blaster bolts, but is highly skilled at blocking lightsabers and applying Sokkan in a duel. Though he possesses the ability to perform force enhanced acrobatics like most with a connection to the force, he prefers to stay a bit more rooted, a trait incorporated from D'jem So. This is not to say his style is without the aggression for which Juyo is famous, and he will often launch attacks from long distances with quick and powerful leaps. Niman also influences the style, with Je'teel often incorporating many applications of the force into his duels or engagements.

In short, Je'teel is a master of Makashi, D'jem So, Niman and Sokkan, and has incorporated those styles into his application of Juyo, but suffers from his apparent refusal to practice Shii-Cho, Soresu, Ataru or Shien beyond the absolute basics.

Flaws:
1: Unpleasant
2: Disassociated Body
3: Violent
4: Old Contacts
5: Almost Zero Soresu or Shien Training
6: Not Skilled with Telepathy
7: Enjoys Battle

Force Sensitive:
Yes

Force Abilities:

Neutral:
1: Tutaminis
2: Telekinesis
3: Phase
4: Pyrokinesis
5: Plant Surge

Dark:
6: Force Lightning
7: Dun Moch
8: Spirit Transfer

Bio: The former Jedi Knight Va Je'teel is a relic from before the Clone Wars, one of the few to escape the Great Jedi Purge. Je'teel was discovered as a child by a young Anya Kuro, "The Black Woman", and later she took him on as a Padawan. While Je'teel respected his master for her strength of will, her means of training were at times harsh, to say the least, and her interpretation and application of the Jedi Code and other Jedi doctrine reeked of dogma. As he matured, Je'teel, now a Jedi Kinght, began to further question the strict dogma of his master, and so he searched the records for possible contridictions, something to soften the code, or undermine the reasoning behind, for example, holding no attachments.

What he found was just what he had hoped for; the supposed original text of the jedi code, before the rewriting by Odan-Urr.

It read:

Emotion, yet peace
Ignorance, yet knowledge
Passion, yet serenity
Chaos, yet harmony
Death, yet the Force

This was what he had been seeking! Surely the Order had been more true at one time, but it had obviously soured over the ages into authoritarian law The original code spoke to a sence of oneness and harmony, while the one he had been taught, along with all the other, newer doctrines, in his eyes, espoused division and pride, and seemed to come out of a fear of temptation, and the Sith. Je'teel deserted the Order soon after, just months before the battle of Gienosis.

Years later, after the Clone Wars, after the Purge, and even years after the defeat of the Empire, Je'teel, who had been living a peaceful, and even prosperous life by himself tucked away in the forests of Kashyyyk, he was finally discovered. It was a young Jedi hunter who had been tipped off to his presence by nearby Wookiee tribesmen. A fierce battle ensued, but, in the end, both combatants lay beaten, Je'teel near death, and his assailant unconscious. Though it had never been out of intention to use the technique, Je'teel had in fact learned through his studies the infamous ability to transfer ones spirit into another's body. He looked at her, took a breath, closed his eyes and channeled his energy into the young girl; when he opened his eyes, he was staring at his own, dead body.

Years after the event, Je'teel has learned his hunter's name and identity; a Dark Jedi assassin with a loyalty to coin, but surprisingly skilled and well known. This proved to be a difficulty for someone who preferred the life of a hermit, and, so, he set off once again into the galaxy with the vigor a 72 year old man might expect to feel after transferring his soul into a body one third his age. After a few years of drifting, he gradually accumulated ties with others who felt the same way he did about the strictness of the Order and the code, and were drawn to his teachings. And so, The New Order
was born; a loose association of Jedi, "dark" or "light", who simply value the force, and view balance as the most worth while initiative.

Other:

"This one a long time have I watched. All his life has he looked away, to the future, to the horizon. Never his mind on where he was, hmm? What he was doin'. Hmm. Adventure. Heh. Excitement. Heh. A Jedi craves not these things." -Yoda
 
Last edited:
  • Like
Reactions: ~\The Talentless/~
Appearance:
images


Name: Va Je'teel
Name of Current Body's Original Inhabitant: Talerra Gorn

Age at Transferal: 74
Age of Current Body: 27

Gender: Male
Gender of Current Body: Female

Species: Human
Species of Current Body: Human

Main Faction: None

Sub-Faction: The New Order

Weapons:
Lightsaber: Je'teel sports a seemingly standard single bladed lightsaber with a magenta adegan crystal used as the focusing lens. The hilt is made of a blackish silver metal and the knobs and switches are nondescript. While the saber looks a bit short, it actually employs a duel phase system, enabling it to grow instantly from .8 meters to just over 1.5, allowing for high amounts of versatility and opportunities for surprise during combat.

Equipment:
1: Food tablets.
2: A small moister collector.
3: A bit of carrying credits.
4: Insulated, shock and stab resistant clothing.

Skills:
1: Oration
2: Delegation
3: Survivalist Experience
4: Expert Duelist

Lightsaber Form:
Juyo: As with all Juyo specialists, Je'teel has mastered several other lightsaber forms as a prerequisite to the formation of him Juyo. A firm proponent of precision over randomization, Je'teel's style is characterized by quick cuts and jabs, and deft parries and evasion typical of Makashi. He is absolutely reliant on Tutaminis to block or deflect blaster bolts, but is highly skilled at blocking and applying Sokkan in a duel. Though he possesses the ability to perform force enhanced acrobatics like most with a connection to the force, he prefers to stay a bit more rooted, a trait incorporated from Shien. This is not to say his style is without the aggression for which Juyo is famous, and he will often launch attacks from long distances with quick and powerful leaps. Niman also influences the style, with Je'teel often incorporating many applications of the force into his duels or engagements.

In short, Je'teel is a master of Makashi, Shien and Niman, and has incorporated those styles into his application of Juyo, but suffers from his apparent refusal to practice Shii-Cho, Soresu, Ataru or D'jem So beyond the absolute basics.

Flaws:
1: Unpleasant
2: Disassociated Body
3: Violent
4: Old Contacts
5: Almost Zero Soresu or D'jem So Training
6: No Telepathy
7: Enjoys Battle

Force Sensitive:
Yes

Force Abilities:

Neutral:
1: Tutaminis
2: Telekinesis
3: Phase
4: Pyrokinesis
5: Plant Surge

Dark:
6: Fore Lightning
7: Dun Moch
8: Spirit Transfer

Bio: The former Jedi Knight Va Je'teel is a relic from the Clone Wars, one of the few to escape the Great Jedi Purge. Je'teel was discovered as a child by a young Anya Kuro, "The Black Woman", and later she took him on as a Padawan. While Je'teel respected his master for her strength of will, her means of training were at times harsh, to say the least, and her interpretation and application of the Jedi Code and other Jedi doctrine reeked of dogma. As he matured, Je'teel, now a Jedi Kinght, began to further question the strict dogma of his master, and so he searched the records for possible contridictions, something to soften the code, or undermine the reasoning behind, for example, holding no attachments.

What He found was just what he had hoped for; the supposed original text of the jedi code, before the rewriting by Odan-Urr.

It read:

Emotion, yet peace
Ignorance, yet knowledge
Passion, yet serenity
Chaos, yet harmony
Death, yet the Force

This was what he had been seeking! Surely the Order had been more true at one time, but it had obviously soured over the ages into authoritarian law The original code spoke to a sence of oneness and harmony, while the one he had been taught, along with all the other, newer doctrines, in his eyes, espoused division and pride, and seemed to come out of a fear of temptation, and the Sith. Je'teel deserted the Order soon after, just months before the battle of Gienosis.

Years later, after the Clone Wars, after the Purge, and even years after the defeat of the Empire, Je'teel, who had been living a peaceful, and even prosperous life by himself tucked away in the forests of Kashyyyk, he was finally discovered. It was a young Jedi hunter who had been tipped off to his presence by nearby Wookiee tribesmen. A fierce battle ensued, but, in the end, both combatants lay beaten, Je'teel near death, and his assailant unconscious. Though it had never been out of intention to use the technique, Je'teel had in fact learned through his studies the infamous ability to transfer ones spirit into another's body. He looked at her, took a breath, closed his eyes and channeled his energy into the young girl; when he opened his eyes, he was staring at his own, dead body.

Years after the event, Je'teel has learned his hunter's name and identity; a Dark Jedi assassin with a loyalty to coin, but surprisingly skilled and well known. This proved to be a difficulty for someone who preferred the life of a hermit, and, so, he set off once again into the galaxy with the vigor a 72 year old man might expect to feel after transferring his soul into a body one third his age. After a few years of drifting, he gradually accumulated ties with others who felt the same way he did about the strictness of the Order and the code, and were drawn to his teachings. And so, The New Order
was born; a loose association of Jedi, "dark" or "light", who simply value the force, and view balance as the most worth while initiative.

Other:

"This one a long time have I watched. All his life has he looked away, to the future, to the horizon. Never his mind on where he was, hmm? What he was doin'. Hmm. Adventure. Heh. Excitement. Heh. A Jedi craves not these things." -Yoda


Cool character :D

All I have to say though is someone is going to catch some feelings XD

Je'teel "but I was once a dude

Random person "wtf?"
 
  • Like
Reactions: Jade
Just letting you know, Sora, that I'll be vamping Koyi's template today (fingers crossed). Besides the missing information, there's a few things within her background and her present situation I'm working out...and building her personality through my restudy of Twi'leki history and little tidbits about those few Twi'lek women known who've broke the cultural chains to become more than just a pretty face. There's just a lot about Koyi herself that I wish to build mentally, as well as note in her template; just going to get it done before the RP starts. Then, I'm not searching for these things in order to build postings.

So, long story short, her temp will be changing soon. LOL!
Let me know if you wish the Wizard to be apart of that history
 
  • Love
Reactions: Phi Chisym
Um, that's an interesting idea. Where do you think he would fit in? Somewhere within her years of confinement as a diva for the divine, or when she was hiding on the darker streets of here and there, or when she was safe within Baltazar's group and The Wizard was just another client they were trying to piss off? PM me your thoughts!
 
Last edited:
Let me know if anyone wishes to collaborate :)
 
Shien and Djem So are the same form both are form 5 of lightsaber combat


Edit: also lets try to not go to insane with the force powers people the first time someone tries to pull a SD out of the sky im calling bullshit, and try to keep the power scale to a decent level no im the biggest badass ever type stuff.
 
Status
Not open for further replies.