GOtta say. That's incredibly unproffesional for a Dapper agent. This isn't a setting where humanity has a force that kills everything easy. The team allready lost two members before even getting inside the building. And as a Diplomatic Liason, you do not have command or the position to try and boss people around :P. Keep in mind that Beatrix would likely not last 10 seconds in one one combat with most things they are facing. So either she is dumb as a brick to act like that, arrogant to a fault or you missunderstood the whole point of the RP :P
And i'd put some more effort into describing her reactions to her surroundings, since this is your first post in the RP, let us get more of a feel about who she is and what her thoughts are like. She is in a room pretty much carved out of bone. I don't care how badass some people are, that would affect anyone with even a shred of humanity. Step up your game.