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Lucius Cypher
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Alright, back on a computer, so I'll go about altering spells and commenting on your comments. For starters, I was hoping that we wouldn't be using a "Hard Science" level magic, but I guess that's inevitable given the themes. I'm quite aware of conservation of mass and was hoping that magic would help alleviate most of the glaring problems, but if that's not the case than I'll simply replace Transmutation all together. It's not worth the effort of learning with such debilitating draw backs. Because Transmutation is suppose to make Yama better in melee, but due to where the energy is coming from, she's essentially damaging herself for the purpose of a gimmick (Growing bigger, changing forms, etc), which is just impractical. I'm hoping we could leave out some of the more, I suppose you could say "Realistic" flaws of Transmutation Magic, but if you're set on it than I'll use a different school.
Yama is also a Ogre/Gorgon mix (Mother was the Gorgon).
The spell that transformed her was a Polymorphing type. It was suppose to turn him into a fairly attractive human, but something went wrong and it rewrote his true gender as female... If I have to replace Transmutation, I suppose this incident would be the reason why Yama never took up Transmutation.
Alright, changed the spell to be touch-targeting only, allowing Yama to at least be able to turn her sword on fire (Unless they have true names she needs to know as well). In removing it's ability to be used directly on others I also added a few new traits to this spell: The fire itself is of magical origins and thus not subjected to the weaknesses normally pertaining to fire, like putting it out in water. Which means yes, Yama can light herself on fire and dive into a lake and still burn fish. Fire spread from this enchantment however do not share that quality and can be dealt with normally. This enchantment also gives the target fire resistance proportional to the amount of strength the flames are, to work around the whole "Would probably burn yourself" issue.One of @Lucius Cypher 's, spell is a touch spell that would cause a person to burn. I can only imagine her casting a curse on her fingers where when anything touches her fingers will be burned. But for living creatures, the burns will only apply when her fingers are in contact with the living creature. Whatever fire that remains on the living creature is not in her control as it is on the living creature. This may seem illogical, but if it remains on the living creature, this simple spell would be overpowered.
But of course. The Sundered Echo doubles the power for double the price. Or in the case of using a different spell, and additional price, depending if the price is greater than or less than the other spell you're using... Either way, it simply allows one to use two spells at once, no more, no less.Still, pay attention to the amount of energy the spells will cost. :)
I altered this spell to simply give Yama the ability to create extra appendages or what-have-you. While she can give them orders which they can follow, she still largely has to control them herself. The commands simply help her cut down on micromanaging.Your own will is needed in guiding spells. Unless you give life and soul to the limbs so that it has a mind of its own, then this won't happen. But if you do give it life, your own life would end. Unless you have stored massive spiritual energy stored in a gem.
I edited to include the energy upkeep and made it into a personal spell (Which hence forth shall be replacing any instances of "She can only target herself" as it's wordy).For as long as this spell remain active, her spiritual energy will slowly deplete. But it can only be casted on herself, not other living matter that she does not have the true name of.
As I've said, if Transmutation itself is so costly, I will simply replace this with something else. Maybe I'll have Yama be a more traditional blaster mage, but I personally feel that's too stereotypical, but with the way magic works my other favored alternatives schools of magic seems impossible (Illusion and Summoning).Yiksahd Ykemedo Yht Tinypemedo would drain her spiritual energy so long as it remains active.
Lryhka Eh Cewa would cost massive energy as it creates matter out of nothing. It can only effect non living matter and herself.
Knaydan Bumosunbr - would be be very painful.
Nacdunydeuh would only repair the shape but not the enchantment.
Damagehadel Syhebimydeuh is basically a movement spell, but it cannot effect a living matter or claimed items.
I would like to point out that Yama is indeed a full blooded orc, and she cares very little about race relations. Okay so maybe it's a bit more complex than that: She personally doesn't care, but is aware of how her race affects her ability to socialize with others. She's fairly cynical when it comes to race, knowing fully well that no one will like her by virtue of being an orc, and frankly she doesn't have much reason to like them back. Still she wants their respect, so she'll at least keep a fair distance as long as others don't mind the simple fact that she exists.We will be using this for how the races generally sees other races. Thank you Majem for showing me the web page.
@Lucius Cypher , since your character is an orc, which race of orc is he... she... he... hshe? :P
I like her bio and I like the image you use to picture her. I can imagine the tusks growing out of her lips inside that mask. She is one beautiful transvestite orc.
Yama is also a Ogre/Gorgon mix (Mother was the Gorgon).
The spell that transformed her was a Polymorphing type. It was suppose to turn him into a fairly attractive human, but something went wrong and it rewrote his true gender as female... If I have to replace Transmutation, I suppose this incident would be the reason why Yama never took up Transmutation.