The Coming of Mana

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Ièm fine with the Monkkitten landing on his head. Its makes for something to write.

though, to be clear, the place HAS fallen into fights and angry customers, right?
 
It has the potential for fights to break out. The situation is tense and many are filled with liquid courage.
 
All it needs is someone shouting "BAR FIGHT!" And to slam a tankard on someone's head?
 
I think it is time for the grumpy bald wizard to arrive. Is it time for the grumpy wizard to arrive? Maybe the grumpy wizard to arrive. Anyone in the mood for a grumpy wizard to arrive? Is the grumpy wizard arriving line getting annoying yet?
 
o.o I do believe I have gotten myself in quite the pinch here... Hope I didn't make you too angry with my hastiness... Although I sure hope I got Surak angry enough XD

I'm not trying to turn this into an argument in the OOC, however, I would like to point out that, considering the matter in which the wood has been burned with the use of this spell (from interior to exterior) and the depth at which the character would sink, I, with all my honesty, speculate that it would be no different than sinking into a hardened layer of snow, only much faster, figuratively speaking of course. There would be no internal or external injury, not to mention an actual fall of the entire body would require a certain amount of flexibility and clumsiness, things that wouldn't be allowed by the armour the individual is wearing at present and by the training of a soldier that knows how to keep his balance firmly.

However, I understand what you are saying completely and I do agree with it. At the time of writing I didn't think it was something that could cause an uproar, but I've taken note and will make sure to notify anyone if my movements involve them. Sorry for the disturbance, Sarzu.

On this note, I should probably change the monkkitten part, if @Rain of the Night wants to, of course.


Honestly Headphone, i'd recommend you retcon the entire section. It controls NPCs numerous times, it does what's referred to as an 'autohit' and in a VERY bad way. I'd also have to request you cut down on the purple prose (from a personal opinion) your post was so heavily laden with it I actually found it painful to read.

Given the 'godmoding' and 'autohits' you did, it'd be safer to simply retcon it out.
 
Personal

Name: Hendrick Gunderheist.
Age: 121
Sex: Male
Race: Dwarven
Appearance:
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Biography: Hendrik had the misfortune to be born to his parents Marek Stonebow and Libelle Gunderheist on the city of Apotlas where they had moved before his birth, unfortunately for this dwarf he had his races known discomfort with heights pretty much exactly from birth. His phobia of heights combined with the high towers of Apotlas were naturally the worst combination and Hendrik developed an acute phobia of heights.

Naturally living for decades in Apotlas he practically went bugfuck nuts and on his hundredth name-day he took the largest rug he could find and leapt from his quarters using it as a chute to escape from Apotlas before the dreaded ceremony of the towers which would have celebrated his hundredth year in the city running for the hills.

A crass dwarf with a known name it didn't take him much effort to make a name for himself as a mercenary and problem-solver, provided that problem just involved something needing hitting. Once a client made the mistake of hiring him to secure and solve the mystical Cube of Rubiks. Instead recieving a pile of rubble and the words. "Fooking Weezards and their Poofy Puzzles. Take it, pay my money and fook off."

Traits

Might: 6
Arcana: 0
Guile: 2
Cognizance: 3
Will: 5

Hammer of the Grond: Hendrik loves the ground. He loves being on the ground. He loves being under the ground in some nice caves and caverns even more. His Hammer shows his love for smashing things INTO the ground. A heavy war hammer with, inexplicably, two large horns he says were pulled from a Dragons head after it drank too much Gunderheist Gutbuster.
Small but Sturdy: Dwarves are an exceptionally hardy folk, they can take a licking and keep on kicking, but seriously, if you see a Dwarf being licked by a dragon, help a dude out, don't just stand there trying to work out if its kinky or combat. As such, Hendrik can take more thumping to put down than the average fellow.
Gunderheist Fortitude: Those born to house Gunderheist are raised on the brew called a 'Gunderheist Gutbuster' this unimaginably potent alcoholic brew could put a dragon on its ass for an hour, and in many places is regarded as a poison to anyone without a dwarven tolerance for booze, and even they can't handle much. As a result, Hendrik (and others of house Gunderheist) can handle any other alcohol witout even getting tipsy, and numerous poisons simply don't work on a body so hardy. Unfortunately, people born to house Gunderheist tend to consider anything weaker to be the equal of drinking water.
 
Ahhh, I finally posted!I feel so relieved! XD

For all of those, who won't feel like reading through my intro, I mentioned a couple of characters in there, creating mini reaction events so we can get tied together and start with the interacting and all that jazz XD
@mkvibe , I mentioned Neriah, although not by name, but I did colour the part with "her colour", as I did with the rest. It wasn't a direct interaction and you're absolutely free to not react to it at all. I just fancy having such little touching points in a story before an outright introduction between characters.
@Rain of the Night , a monkkitten just landed on Jorrosa's face. Have fun~! Isoke is free to use, so play him as you wish!
@Andrea , @Sarzu , @Selvi , @Drifter , I mentioned all of your characters, since Anesha, Surak and Nasika were right behind Mirza and co. on the line to get into the VIP section, and Lyrman and Otel came crashing into the scene. Oh, and @Sarzu , yes, it's an invitation. Come at meh. XD I specifically asked Temp for the depth and was given the A-ok.

Also, please excuse me if there were any spelling mistakes at this very moment. Most of the paragraphs were written late at night, so there might be sleepy misspelling somewhere. I will check it through later, though.

And since I'm feeling so joyous right now, here's a little tune from me~:
Great intro. I enjoyed reading it. Write a book, seriously. I would read it.
 
@Kadaeux Hendrik looks good. Think for the moment, though, he'll be on the backburner... Until a time there are less characters in play.

@Everyone Else Expect a small update from me in the IC. It won't really update the plot or forward other events, but it will be addressing a few things.
 
Reading through the posts and every time I hit Headphone's post, it's like, I need to LITERALLY take down notes on a piece of paper to get what is happening with whom. xD Just figuring things out.
 
Lol okay. Well, I will be probably posting up a small update after I get home from work.
 
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Name: Gareth of Vossheim
Age: 36
Sex: Male
Race: Human
Appearance: WIP
Biography:

Some are born to greatness, others have it thrust upon them, but Gareth has neither. His is a story of a desperate man trying to find a slice of happiness beneath a mountain of crap. Born a commoner in one of the grand cities within the Vossheim, his upbringing was one of servitude or risk of starvation. Happy memories were few and far between as a child, and if you were to ask him today he'd say his earliest memory would be waking up to the gentle call of his mother -stating it was time for him to empty the masters chamber pots. Was it slavery? No. But it was the nearest thing to it. Needless to say, Gareth grew up with a grudge against the rich.

It was this grudge that eventually fostered his initial foray into the dark underbelly of the world. The master of the household in which Gareth's family worked had a great faith in their servants, so much so that one afternoon in his adolescence he was sent to the market with a hefty sum of coins, on his own, and was entrusted to return with the requested items. Throwing caution to the wind, and never looking back Gareth took the coins and ran until he couldn't even see the city around him anymore, until the sun had set, risen, and set once again. Only then did he risk a look back. In a split second decision he had left everything behind, and knew then that he could never go back.

It isn't easy to set off on your own at any age, but most would agree 14 is early for anyone. Such was the reality Gareth now found himself in, but he found himself learning new things everyday. Those berries are good to eat. These berries make you wish you'd never eat again. Old codgers who offer to escort you for a single piece of silver are just as dodgy as everyone else. Lessons one and all. However these lessons could have eventually proven dangerous if Gareth hadn't hit a bit of luck. Hit being the operative word. He came across a man like any other along the road one day, and decided to test his luck. He'd just come across a new dagger (by ways of the old codger no less) and hoped it might make quick work of a would be brave hearted fool. He approached hastily and sloppy, knife drawn, eager to pounce. Only to be laughed at.

This was uncommon to say the least. Most people at least acted surprised, or angry when Gareth drew steel, but not this man. Actually, it occurred to late, this man didn't wasn't laughing at all. The sound was coming from behind Gareth, and when he turned he saw he had a sword pointed squarely to his throat. A quick glance back to the silent man proved he was no longer there, and Gareth finally realized he was dealing with a mage as the world went dark.

7 years past and he now knew every secret his master had bothered to teach him. The choice had always been easy. Serve this thieving mage, or die. In many ways it was the exact life he had left behind, but he got to hurt people now. He had found he'd had a knack for magic as well, and that helped immensely. He was taught that most people are cowards and if the odds aren't in their favor, or if the drop is gotten on them, almost everyone is quick to surrender to the tip of the sword. It was 7 years well spent, but not overly lucrative. He was ready to venture out on his own now, and all it would take would be to disappear into the night. Disappearing properly also meant a quick slash across his masters throat, and so once night fell there was one less mage in the world, and Gareth was once again free. And has been free to this day, drinking away his meager earnings at the Bilgerat, looking for a score big enough to quit altogether.

Traits

Might: 0
Arcana: 6
Guile: 3
Cognizance: 2
Will: 4

Unique1: Power in Numbers

There came a great dilemma in Gareth's life when he found himself alone in the world. Namely that there was some reason to the "Bigger-Army Diplonacy" tactics that Kings and Queens ruled by, however Gareth hated almost everyone, and the ones he didn't hate were dead. This both led and left him to magic to solve his problem, and with time and practice Gareth found he could make three nearly perfect, and unique, illusions at a time. Granting the benefits of outnumbering enemies, without having to share the takes. Problem being they were completely nonmaterial, and beneath all the show, still just projections of mana.

Unique2: A Prison of Your Own Mind

Has anyone ever taken a swing at someone and *expected* to miss? Most don't plan for such futures and failures, but Gareth nearly constantly imagines getting hit which is almost just as bad. Thankfully if concentrating on his targets hard enough he can convince them that they have just landed a blow, and are currently pummeling away at him. Keeping them occupied and happy for as long as he can focus for, usually while he himself scuttle off for greener pastures, or slips his own dagger between the marks ribs.

Unique3: The Demon Within

A skill to be used when all else fails, and Gareth's back is to the wall. In the most ominous fashion possible, with all the flare and dramatics one might expect, Gareth's skin is set on fire, and burns away. He seems to grow a foot, maybe two, before finally charring into a blackened horned creature from some accursed plane of existence, eyes and mouth glowing with a blood red light. It is, by all accounts his best work. Those who don't weep or wet themselves immediately at least have reason to back away for a moment, and while still limited in his strength and speed, with an extra exertion of mana he is able to sprint fast enough to capitalize.
 
I made an edit to my post. not big, just minor addition of what he is doing as he sat down.
 
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