Alright, in regards to muh oncoming post...
I literally have nothing in regards to Talze Utera. More specifically, I'll let another round of conversation pass, because there's no reason for Tanya to say anything at the moment, considering how Arbour's doing the explanations for her.
Astopol would be similarly dry. Doughguy, Ryver, you two might want to set up a collab for your chattering.
Dansila and Illiserev will have things.
@Jageroux Things to note.
Talze Utera is pretty much empty of humans. More specifically...if his parents WEREN'T incredibly badass monster slayers, his mother wouldn't have even lived long enough to give birth to him. Unless she was a witch, ofc, but then, witches sorta look after their own...
Refraining from wearing armor is such a silly thing~ What would you do if you get AOE'd? XD
I dislike how you've pretty much ignored all the changes that have occurred in the world that they lived in. More specifically...rift-beasts were still roaming everywhere during Zander's childhood. What exactly did he even EAT as a baby? Taking care of month-old kids is a pain in the ass, and I don't understand why a merciless, parent-slaying slave trader would waste so much time raising up a baby. What about when Talze Utera was at war? I'd imagine that they'd have some degree of involvement, yes? Or no?
In regards to his Sword Skills...killing a person in a single cut is a no-no. Change it into something else. For example, you can have him accelerate to insane speeds for a single moment, and then slash, or you can have his sword sharpen to the extent that it can cut through all defenses, but you can't have something that just goes 'huehuehue, you ded'.