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The Philosoraptor
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I am just now starting to read it. YOU ARE DOOMED! HAHAHAHAHAHA!Well I guess you can have this.... Im not the most confident man in my work and this isnt the best thing I have ever written but its online at least xD (God Im going to be kicked out)
Edit: I changed the link so if you clicked it in the first 5 minutes please god read this one instead
Edit: I read the first few paragraphs. Your major issues are proper punctuation and major capitalization issues. A capital 'I' in the word 'in' in the middle of a sentence? SINFUL. If this is going to be a persistent issue, call AAB. She'll knock ya straight. Otherwise, you may stay. BUT FIX YOUR STUFF. Just a warning, AAB would be flipping out over that "I'm" and "isn't" that you just posted.