What do I need to change? You know I'll edit my post - no problem.
But really, your charrie is not insignificant to Nami... At this point, Kukyo's her only friend.
When RPing, you have to slip your charrie's actions withing what's already there sometimes, showing the group what you were doing at the time of the already present action, but filling the post with your charries thoughts on things. Since this is his introduction, then giving a bit about what's on his mind will give us something to work with for our charries.
Besides, Nami asked a question, striking up a conversation...and for Pete sakes', she's sitting in Kukyo's lap! At least, she doesn't hate you. She's going to hate Alex!
