Re: A destroyed world
Just a quick tip, I know it's going to sound a bit harsh, but I feel like it needs to be said. I know that everyone has their thoughts on what they're writing. They know what they are writing down in their own minds. However, you have to remember that not everyone knows what your mind is thinking so please remember to review quickly what you are writing. There have been a lot of mistakes in syntax and it's not bothering me in a grammar nazi way, it's bothering me in a I can't read nor understand what you're saying way.