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Character Name: Nicholai Canisoff
Gender: Male
Species/Race: Wolf Moreau
Age: 14
Birthplace/World: unknown
Occupation/School/Grade: Close Quarters Combat Specialist
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PHYSICAL CHARACTERISTICS
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the kind of look i'm going for (though Nicholai tends to shave alot more fur off.)
General Appearance: more subdued features than other Moreaus, for instance, Nicholai has no tail, and he has had another moreau use a razor to cut down his ears, so whilst they look mangled, they also look more human.
in addition, rather than leaving his fur on as other wolf moreaus have done, Nicholai tends to shave his entire face and most of his body, leaving only what would normally grow on a normal human.
Nicholai is Short and Stocky, his hair a dpuzzles or thinking games due to his impatience, he aslo has a tendency to loose his temper and throw caution to the wind.
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MENTAL CHARACTERISTICS

Current Goal/Purpose: to pass the tests set before him
Talents: Small arms and heavy weapons, hand to hand combat, knife combat
Inabilities: stealth, keeping his cool,
Fears: his inner "monster" his appearence looking too much like a wolf.
General Personality: Short of temper and usuaqlly issuing curt replies, Nicholai follows orders to the letter and has as little interaction with most of the other test subjects as possible.
Inner Personality: as above, though with added self loathing and fear of his 'inner monster'
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HISTORIC BACKGROUND

General History: Little is known, other than the fact his parents were Russian immegrants who gave him up to the government, and that he has mutilated himself in order to make his appearance more human, though close examination when out of uniform tends to ahve the opposite effect.

Present Life: Nicholai now lives for the thrill of combat, and immensely enjoys all physical tests and training, especialyl the combat simulator.


I'LL FINISH THE REST LATER.
 
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Apocaric

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Right, then. Due to lack of intrest, Redacted is now on hold indefinitely.
 
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QuelledHeretic

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I'm not the most experienced member on here, but I'd like to request that we try with this RP. I'll post my bio if there is a possibility of the RP working out, but this has to be one of the most interesting ones I've found so far and it would be unfortunate if it dropped out.
 
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Apocaric

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I'll start it if enough players get full characters up.
 
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QuelledHeretic

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GENERAL CHARACTER STATISTICS
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Character Name: Zephyr
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Gender: Male
Species/Race: Kapuas Moreau
Age: 14
Birthplace/World: NMRF-LA
Occupation: Recon Specialist

PHYSICAL CHARACTERISTICS

General Appearance: Very short, only 4' 5'' which only emphasizes his specialty. He was bred small specifically for the purpose of staying out of sight. Extremely toned legs, but his arms are thin due to the fact that he doesn't use them as much. His feet have extremely human qualities, save for the extended claws coming from his toes. His hands are extremely thin and his bones are very visible through his scaly skin. He also has claws coming from his fingers, but they are vestigal and serve no real purpose. Aside from his lanky arms, his body is in perfect condition.
Strengths: Extremely fast and agile, able to grip surfaces with the claws on his feet. Able to use claws to dig into surfaces as thick as concrete and walk on walls/other surfaces. Main strength is his ability to change his skin color based on location. Able to work better in the daylight, as colors are more vibrant and he can see and differentiate between even the smallest of things during the day.
Weaknesses: Little muscle mass on his arms, making him weak if it came to blows. Not very good at night as his night vision is equal to that of a human's. His eyes are luminescent, an unfortunate side-effect of the metagenetic splicing, rendering him near-useless at night as his position is given away in complete darkness. (However, a joke is going around with the scientists that he should wear sunglasses at night, of which Zephyr doesn't understand.)

MENTAL CHARACTERISTICS

Current Goal/Purpose: Relax / Collect data and record information
Talents: Eavesdropping, inventing weapons and technology, astounding memory
Inabilities: Cannot swim, can only multitask
Fears: Opposite sex, water, heights, fire, other metagenetic experiments
General Personality: Very casual, enjoys his solitude and doesn't pay attention to much outside of the world in his cell. Craves attention from his human creators and watchers, studying them as much as they studied him, writing his thoughts in a journal. When it has no more room to write, he destroys the old journal and begins a new one.
Inner Personality: When not being studied he sleeps or works out, a narcissist by nature. He has a mirror on every wall so he can always keep himself in view, never feeling alone or ugly because there is no need to.

HISTORIC BACKGROUND

General History:
Created in a glass tube from Development Group B; made so that a soldier could cross enemy lines undetected and discover enemy positions/plans and return unnoticed by foes. Spends 18 hours a day exercising or being tested (with 5 minutes for eating), 3 hours sleeping, 2 hours studying and writing, and at least 1 hour staring at himself. Extremely puntual and keeps his schedule in his mind, never late by even a second. Built a reputation for puntuality so strong that the scientists could literally set their watches to his schedule.

Present Life: As his tests are coming to an end, his only concern is the breeding. He is scared of the opposite sex because he is so worried about his own image that he fears no other person could see him as he does. His sleeping hours are taken up by worry and fear, leaving him weary and restless.
 
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Apocaric

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All right. I do have some concerns about this character, chief among them being that, while I'm not entirely certain what animal he is supposed to be based off of, said animal is definitely a reptile. That presents innumerable problems blending reptilian and mammalian physiology. Since I forgot to specifically limit Moreaus to mammal species, and, frankly, it's a logical line of research, I'll be willing to allow it as a special case, albeit with a lot of problems.

For example, Zephyr's biochemical processes would be horribly fucked up - he would, at a minimum, require a carefully controlled diet. Furthermore, his behavior would be heavily influenced by his quasi-reptilian physiology (Cold would be dangerous - a fear of ice would be far more fitting than one of fire)

Additionally, Zephyr's likely to be either a one-off (as in, carefully and painstakingly created from the ground up, and probably nonreproducible) or an "early model," entailing precarious genetic balances and certainly not ready for reproductive trials.

Go ahead and either edit the char sheet (post a new version rather than editing your post) or message me to discuss it, either via PM, (modus10 [at] gmail {dot} com) on MSN, or at DragoonExMachina on AIM
 
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Vay

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i'll trying to steal people for both your and my rp.
 
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Ike Sapphire

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Basic Characteristics

Character Name: Shadow
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Gender: Male
Species/Race: Wolf
Age: 16
Birthplace/World: Development group B
Occupation/School/Grade: Shock Infantry
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Characteristics

General Appearance: 5’ 9”, has dark grey around most of his body but a lighter grey on his chest. Also wears small round glasses and never takes them off.
Strengths: Has strong bones and a massive bite
Weaknesses: can run only as fast as a regular human can, also can’t jump as high and has a mid tendency of slipping
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Inner Characteristics

Current Goal/Purpose: Find a place to call home/ to live through this grueling tests
Talents: Good hearing, sight, and sense of smell *yah know regular wolf instincts*
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Fears: Humans, dark and tightly enclosed areas
General Personality: Sits outside a lot reading many novels, ever since he was created he had always loved to read novels so any time he’d get the chance shadow would sit somewhere and read something. Sometimes in his spare time would also draw something
Inner Personality: Ever since he had been born shadow had always loved high places. So at times he would try to get to the highest point in a room and just sit and look at the same old stuff.
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History

General History:
Not much of a talker the only times you would catch Shadow talking is when someone wanted to talk with him.
Present Life: Same as it was in the past he would always try to seclude him self to everyone else to read a good novel or just go up into high places.


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Apocaric

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I like the concept, SI, but you've got some serious holes. First, your "inabilities" section is empty. Minor one there, but try and fix it, hey? Second, he is a military project created by NMRF-LA. He didn't "join the army," he was created by Navy R&D (Probably FOR the Army, but that's beside the point). Third, he has never been outside in his LIFE. The only horizons he's seen have been simulated.

Also, I think the occupation you're looking for is "Shock Infantry."

Looking forward to seeing what you do with this.

Current player list is as follows:
Vay - Pantherus [B/M085/LF(H)]
Frost - Wirewhisker [In Progress]
WMD - Nicholai [In Progress]
QuellMyHeresy - Zephyr [Final Tweaks]
Shadow Ike - Shadow [In Progress]

If anyone has changed their mind and DOESN'T want to play, please lemme know. Seeing these half-finished characters just sitting there is getting depressing.
 
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Ike Sapphire

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Alright I edited it and now it's time that I figure out my inabilities *yeah I always have troubles with this one.*
 
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Warmaster Death

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imma finish nicholai up now, right after i ahve some alte breakfast
 
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Apocaric

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QMH, WMS, your bios look good. I'll give you ID codes once I once again have a working internet-capable computer. (I'm using Mara's right now, and I only have access to it because she feels sick and is sleeping.) WMD, there is one glitch - Moreaus are engineered from embryo, not retrovirally. I can kludge together a side project if you're determined to keep your history as is, though.

Ike, yours is a little barebones, but I don't see any real issues and at this point I'll take what I can get, so you'll get a code along wih QMH and WMS.

Gentlemen, that makes the minimum quorum of four players. An IC thread will go up alongside the post with your ID codes in it.