@ViceandVersa
Okay so here's what I need you to do with your CS;
First, the personalities don't balance out and sugar/sweet addict is not a very descriptive trait. You can say that he is hyperactive or energetic etc.
Second, I don't do the whole 'classified location/information' thing. Other GMs allow it, but I don't.
Third, histories need to be ten sentences minimum.
Fourth, the special ability of deceiving almost anyone is too subjective. Please change it to something else. Also the ability of controlling his and Chester's shadows needs to be explained. Are you saying that the plushie has shadow manipulation as an ability? If so you need to elaborate.
Fifth, and this is more of an aesthetic issue, but please, please, please separate the sections of your CS. When it's all bunched up like that it's hard for me to read and it makes me worry about how you're going to post.
