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GoodEveningClarice
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General notes: I notice "child assassin orphan" is a popular backstory. Also, just to remind people that Glenville is not a "proper" town and is a little more like a post-apoc survivor community or survivalist compound. Finally, I posted up some "laws" that Siege established for Glenville.
@parkpyro: I'd like to know a little more about Hagen's power, which is quite interesting. You say his handprints explode - is there a time limit on that? Does just touching it with his fingers work or does it have to be, like, full palm contact? You say in his backstory that he can dodge bullets but superhuman speed isn't listed in his powers. Finally, how did he get from Africa to America? He doesn't have a passport or anything like that, right?
@DANAsaur: A few questions: how powerful is her music blast gun (like, a handgun? nuke?) and why does she even need it? (Don't her powers let her blast without the gun?) I'd also like to know more about who this Extra was who gave her the weapon, taught her how to fight and use her powers etc. Were they a superhero? Have they come to Glenville? Also, why did her parents send assassins instead of just disowning her if they didn't like her being an Extra?
@Cerulean: His Skills section is very weak; it doesn't have to be totally connected to his power. It can be things like what he does for fun outside of heroics. Also, I think that you maybe think Glenville's a big city? It's a borderline ghost town with maybe a couple hundred people, most of them Extras. Other than that, looks good, I like the lots of little personal details in there.
@GoodEveningClarice: I like the moral ambiguity of the character, definitely I wanted there to be some shades of grey in here. Quick query about his energy drain thing. How fast is it? Like, assume he's draining a healthy man all the way to death. Would that be something he's capable of and if so how long would it take? Other than that I have no issue.
@Equinox: Quick question: who's Musa? That's not in his backstory but it says something about them in his personality section. Also, how'd he get a bionic arm? Is he missing one of his normal arms? I'd like to hear more about that, that would b. Finally, given that Glenville is a small community a dedicated courier might not be too important - but someone who can quickly get to the outside world might be! How about his role is more like a supplier, getting stuff from outside of Glenville that they can't make on their own yet?
@Equinox Musa and Damian can be best friends! There's a possibility that they've met each other at the bar since Damian is a supplier and she's a waitress xD
One... like everyone elseHey Leodiensian,
How many powers can an extra have?