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You omitted the bio section, which definitely needs to be added and filled out. Using words to describe your character is fine, but I need to be able to paint a picture in my head of what she looks like. Descrip. needs to be as good as a photo. Could you add more detail?Name: Kimiko Kawamura
Alias: Zephyr Pink
Height: 5'4"
Weight: 120 lbs.
Element: Air
Normal Appearance: Kimiko wears her black hair in a ponytail. She has brown eyes and wears thick glasses for her extreme nearsightedness. She's rather slender, with a well-toned body from working out for the track team. Her usual style is laid-back and casual; you normally have to force her to put on a skirt at knifepoint, and a dress? Forget it! T-shirts and jeans are her normal attire.
Costume: A white shirt with a pink spiral on the chest, a knee-length pink skirt, white boots, and a white cape with the pink spiral emblem. The whole ensemble is capped with a pink three-quarter mask that leaves her right eye uncovered and an rather ostentatious pink ostrich feather on top. She also carries a bow, with a very noticeable lack of arrows or quiver.
Personality: Kimiko is carefree and flighty, with severe self-esteem issues. She'll almost never speak up for herself and usually just goes along with whatever the group is doing. The only time this changes is when she's at a track meet, where a viciously competitive side shows itself. Her events are the long jump, the high jump, and the 100m. She's also in the literature club, although she's not exactly an active member. Oh, and one other thing: Don't ever call her Kimi, unless you want to be on the receiving end of hurricane-force winds. It's a pet peeve.
Abilities:
Minor:
Gust Shot: Fires a concussive blast of air at a target.
Whiplash Wind: A razor wind capable of cutting through soft objects
Speed Gust: Kimiko propels herself forward at high speed with a gust of wind
Medium:
Aerial Arrow: A pink arrow made of solidified air appears on Kimiko's bowstring, and is fired at a target at supersonic speed
Wind Screen: A violent wind whips around Kimiko, blowing aside incoming attacks.
Major:
Aerial Arrow Annihilation: Starts off like the normal Aerial Arrow, but instead of shooting straight at her target, Kimiko fires upwards. The arrow duplicates into dozens of copies, which rain down destruction over a wide area.
Vortex Blast: Kimiko's ultimate attack sucks all the air out of a 20 foot radius, concentrating it in her hands before releasing it in a massive blast straight ahead. After using this attack, she can no longer hold her transformation, and often can't even stand on her own two feet. This is why she only uses it as a last-ditch attack.
I've read over all three sheets, and while I'm really only accepting second years right, now I might accept this as as a package deal, but somethings need to be changed or omitted. You gave each of your characters some very powerful abilities, yet no restrictions and it's a bit much.
Name:
Yoshida Taiga [Last-First]
Age:
17
Year:
Third
Alias:
Doll
Height:
4'9"
Weight:
111 lbs
Element:
Shadow Magic
Personality:
Taiga is a sarcastic and prideful girl who is easily made angry or upset. She is rather aggressive but is also kind and caring. Taiga can be gentle and helpful when she chooses and usually is, toward her friends that is. She is very loyal to those she trusts and would fight tooth and nail for those she holds close. Taiga can be playful at times to, but doesn't usually show it. She isn't afraid to speak up for herself and others. Taiga also tends to tell the straightforward truth, never sugar coating things. Taiga never gives up and is rather stubborn. She is very adventurous and hates being inside for long periods of time because of it.
Bio:
Taiga was born into a wealthy family, always being spoiled. She lived a happy life with her loving parents. She was always smiling and was surrounded by people who enjoyed being in her company. Sadly though, that all began to fall apart.
When Taiga was 10 she had her first boyfriend. His name was Zero. They were a very cute couple and got along well. But, when Taiga was 11 she found Zero kissing a different girl behind a dumpster. He told her that he was only dating Taiga for the fame and fortune, using her for his own selfish fun. Taiga broke down in tears after that, not leaving her room for a week. When she did start going to school she was made fun of for actually thinking a guy like Zero would fall for a girl like her. That was the day that Taiga put up walls around her heart.
A few months after, Taiga's parents began fighting like monsters. They would hit each other and throw things while screaming like lunatics. Her parents eventually broke up and Taiga was forced to live with her dad because her mom refused to take her in. It was around this time that Taiga found a book on dark magic and began her learning. When Taiga was 12 her dad lost his job and married another women for her wealth. The women hated Taiga and she was forced to move out and live with her mom and her new family.
Taiga had an older step-brother and step-dad who were very kind. Taiga grew to love them and she was part of a happy family once more. But, it was not meant to be. When Taiga was still 13 a kidnapper broke into the house and tried to take Taiga. Her brother stepped it and fought the guy off but during the fight, her brother was killed. Taiga's step-dad and mom caught the criminal and called the police who were there within five minutes. After that Taiga's walls became stronger than ever and she refused to love anyone, that is, until she met Riko and Yuri.
Taiga met Ai and Rei a month after her brother died. She was still in deep depression but when she was around Ai and Rei she felt a need to live. Of course, Taiga still had her walls up. After they hung out for two or so months Taiga let them into her heart and ever since then they have always been there for each other. Best friends to the end.
Extracurricular Activities:
Cheerleading
Music Club
Martial Arts Club
Magical Girl Abilities:
Minor:
Banishment: Taiga can banish an object or being from a specific place to either certain place/area she chooses
Dark Form: Taiga has the ability to transform into a state of being in which their darkest intentions, emotion, and powers are fully fledged. In this form, the user's power are greatly enhanced and are able to manipulate powerful dark forces. However, in this form, Taiga is highly aggressive and very quick to anger, making them a threat to anyone around them as well as themselves.
Darkness Attacks: Taiga can release dark shadow magic to attack any being or animal
Medium:
Dark Aura Manipulation: Taiga can manipulate the aura around her that's tainted by the dark forces. Taiga gains incredible dark powers to use their command, however Taiga does not lose her sanity or force of will, but she becomes more dependent on dark emotions as their aura slowly takes control of her actions and moral thoughts.
Spell Casting: Taiga can cast spells. It is often a series of words that take effect when spoken, though others are able to cast spells merely by thinking, with gestures, or through a ritual of some sort.
Negative Energy Manifestation: Taiga has the power to create living manifestations of negative energy and can use negative feelings or behaviors of humans like fear, anger, violence, hatred, doubt, despair. The manifestations can even use those feelings as their own powers.
Major:
Dark Chi Manipulation: Taiga is able to control chi that has been tainted by negative energy a.k.a evil. Due to this, she gains access to powerful dark abilities and forces that are able to give her incredible power. However, Taiga's force of will, compassion, and sanity are all lost due to being over taken by evil. However, she becomes very powerful and very dangerous.
Summoning: Taiga may not be bound by restrictions such as a contract, and can summon anything they want, including powerful beings. Taiga can call upon fairies, angels, demons, or animal spirits, just to name a few. However, the summoning can backfire, however, leading to any number of misfortunes, such as the summoned person, creature, or item causing harm to the Taiga.
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Name:
Kirigawa Ai [Last-First]
Age:
16
Year:
Second
Alias:
Princess
Height:
5'5"
Weight:
121 lbs
Element:
Light Magic
Personality:
Ai is a very shy and clumsy girl. She gets embarrassed easily and always has a different reaction to things than what others might might expect. She is really nice and loves to help others whenever she can. Ai is the friendly type that's easily approachable. She does tend to cry easily and is obedient. She is loyal and reliable, willing to do anything for her friends. She is honest and doesn't like to sugar coat things. Of course, the only time she won't tell someone close to her something is if she swore not to or she feels it's better that they not know. Ai is easy to persuade and is pretty dependent on others. She is hard-working and tries her best to keep everyone happy. Because of this she usually hides her feelings only Taiga and Rei can see through her mask
Bio:
Ai was born into a poor neighborhood. Her parents both worked two jobs just to keep them on their feet. Ai only had a few toys but she never complained. She liked her life and never asked for stuff. Ai never realized what horrors the real world held, this is until, the day she got lost.
Ai was on her way home for school but on the way some kids from class invited her to play soccer with them. She happily joined them and they played for two hours. After playing the group decided to go exploring. Ai had fun while she was with them but because they were having so much fun together, they didn't realize it was getting late. The group soon found themselves on a bridge near a small forest. It was around nine at night. Out of nowhere grown men appeared in a circle around them. The boys put the girls in the middle and stood up for them but themen killed the boys. The girls were then raped by them. Once they finished they left them all there, crying in pain and sorrow.
When Ai was a first year in middle school a large group of men walked into their poor neighborhood and would take the people's money. For taxes they would always say.
Ai left the house and watched the men and the people. The women would cry and the men would hold themselves back from attacking the men. When they reached
Ai's house she kindly gave them the money so her sick parents didn't have to. The man was surprised at how bright and kind she was that he gave her a necklace for her kindness. Ai held onto it ever since then.
Ai met Rei a month after that and they became fast friends. Ai soon found that she didn't like it when people were sad so she would try her best to cheer up anyone sad. Of course, whenever she went to far she had Rei there to stop her. Ai and Rei met Taiga when Ai was in her second year of middle school and Yuri was in her first year. The two always hung around Taiga for some reason and Ai was overjoyed when Taiga finally allowed them into her heart. Ever since then the trio have been best friends.
Extracurricular Activities:
Track
Art Club
Theater Club
Magical Girl Abilities:
Minor:
Light Manipulation: When Riko uses this power she can heal herself and others
Light Teleportation: Using this power Riko can teleport just about anywhere in the world
Light Combat: Riko can use light in physical combat, making her attacks extremely fast, mixing precision strikes with broader effects and unpredictability
Medium:
Illusion Manipulation: When Riko uses this power she make herself look exactly like anyone or anything
Character Creation: Riko can create clones that look exactly like herself. These clones are so realistic that they even bleed after being struck
Persuasion: Riko can control others with just the sound of her voice. But she can not make them kill themselves or others
Major:
Multi-Energy: Riko can combine two powers together and create an unknown power
Resurrection: Riko can make anyone come back from the dead
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Name:
Mizutani Rei [Last-First]
Age:
15
Year:
First
Alias:
Angel
Height:
5'3"
Weight:
118
Element:
Unknown Magic
Personality:
Rei the quiet type. She doesn't talk a lot but is very smart. She never gives up and is quite stubborn. She gets annoyed easily and will be rude to you if your the one annoying her. She is gentle and helpful but not all that kind. She lacks in social skills because of her adventurous side which keeps her either in a forest or in a book. Rei isn't afraid to stand up for herself and others and if your being rude to her friends, don't be surprised if you get slapped. Rei can be aggressive but isn't all that aggressive. She can be playful and kind but she really only is towards close friends.
Bio:
Rei was born into a business family. Her parents were almost always away at work, so Rei grew used to being alone. When Rei turned 8 her parents started bringing her to business parties and things similar. She was very social back then and was always cheerful. But that was all about to change.
When Rei was 9 her mother was killed by an assassin unknown. Rei's father became devastated and began drinking. He stopped going to work but he didn't care about anything anymore. He began abusing Rei, verbally and physically. Rei endured it until she was 11.
Rei's teacher saw her bruises and made Rei tell her what happened. That day men came to her home and took her father to jail. Rei lied and said she had an aunt that lived nearby so that she wouldn't be put in an orphanage. Rei lived on the streets and went to school for two months before a girl named Ai followed her from school one day. The girl hung around Rei a lot and they soon became good friends. When Rei was in her first year at middle school she met Taiga and all three of them eventually became best friends.
Extracurricular Activities:
Volleyball
Etiquette Club
Tea Ceremony Club
Magical Girl Abilities:
Minor:
Hand Sonic: Rei can call forth a single blade or a pair of blades, one on each hand. The blades are capable of slicing through steel or even easily dispatching Shadows.
Distortion: Allows her to deflects bullets and other projectiles away using an invisible shield in front of her. The drawback of this skill is that she has to take it down should she want to switch from defense to offense.
Delay: Creates a sort of after-image for close range. It is effective in dodging melee attacks by confusing the enemy into attacking elsewhere.
Medium:
Howling: Emits powerful high-frequency, high-amplitude sound-waves from crossed Hand Sonic blades, meant to make an enemy faint
Harmonics: Makes a clone of herself which is identical to her, except it has blood-red eyes. Clones created through this ability have their own consciousness, as well as all the abilities of the original - including Harmonics itself. The copy are forms of whatever she is feeling at the moment of their creation.
Angel Wings: Sprouts wings from her back that, while they don't enable her to fly, can be used to slow her descent. They also allow her survive long drops, such as jumping from the roof of a building.
Major:
Sonic Rotation: This technique when activated, produces a blue aura when used. Rei produces a Version One Hand Sonic on each arm and spins rapidly, effectively destroying everything in the area.
Overdrive: A passive ability that gives her superhuman strength. The word "Passive" is supposed to refer to a fact that, unlike other guard skills, this skill can be used without an explicit invocation.
Costume:
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One spot for a second year. Submit your cheet to the ooc.Is this still open?
Looks really interesting D: