I do have some suggestions to help you attract loyal players and boost your post rate.
1) Try to post more than one line or simple descriptions. Ex. Esthalia licked her paw.
2) come up with a plot to drive your characters and give you something to look forward to.
3) Do not use smileys or emoticons in your posts. ex. OwO, :P
4) Allow everyone time to post and give everyone a little lime light. It makes them feel important and more willing to participate.
Hope this helps and if you need anything else, please don't hesistate to ask!