So this is what I have... Does everyone agree? What changes should be made?
Im going to rewrite it in a more interesting way but I want to make sure I have all my facts good.
The Summer of 2039
Setting: A year and a half after the "Great Fall of Humanity" (Which ironically started in the fall of 2037), survivors originally looking for answers are now just looking to survive. What started as a political split between the Democratic and Republican parties due to China deciding to demand the funds owed, ended in a WWIII catastrophe as China and America went to war, many counties following suit back their friends in trade. With the hysteria of a split America, and a war on our own land, a mass case of the flu seemed to get swept under the rug. Until it was too late. How the virus began, or what caused it is completely unknown. It's starts with fever and vomiting, then dehydration, blindness, confusion, and lastly a craving for flesh. Within the first four months almost everything was down, electricity, internet, phone lines, mindless hoards of the sick moved in violent masses only growing in size. Unable to feel pain, be reasoned with, or die without a blow to the brain, the sick are very rightfully known as the undead. And as summer in South Carolina begins, the hot sticky air is filled with the scent of poor hygiene and rotting limbs.
The small town of Arcadia in South Carolina is a total of 112 people in the 5,000 acres of land that the town owned. Now desolate except for the County high school for troubled teens, which has been cleared by a teacher, janitor, and student from the area and been guarded right about from the beginning. Two miles from the school is a gas station and convince store, most of whats good has been taken, but not all. A run down also looted restaurant called "Hart's Pizza" is the Arcadia Gas & Goods neighbor, across from that is the Arcadia post-office and a sad, tiny town hall. Between the school and the village runs Penelope river, a large Class B polluted river that runs down through the city for four miles into Little Miss Lake, both named after the daughter of the first mayor. The only thing that makes this little town worth noting in history books.
Does all this sound good?