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Angelic_Devil
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Her striking purple eyes fluttered open as she felt empty, bare inside as she laid on the neon blue grass, dazed. While she laid there she heard the rustle of leaves, bubbling of water and the soft wind passing her. After a moment of silence a blinding electric wave came out of her body and scattered everywhere telling every and anyone that the last player has finally arrived and the 'Game' has begun.
As the electric wave began to leave she stood up as her red hair danced in the wind long and free as her eyes looked around taking in everything. The grass was multicolored with any and every color possible in patches and seem to be in no pattern that can be tell and what seems to be plants grew in in all shapes, sizes, colors, pattern and more. While few animals that appears to be crossbreeds of other animals were drinking from a creed filled with light purple water to most people they will think this is strange, foreign even, or that it's all an illusion that they made up in there minds. Bu not for her because she doesn't know what anything should really look like for the place she truly comes from or knows anything about her self for that matter. To her everything was new, brand new, knowing nothing of anything while she tried to learn from what she has seen as if everything is a small puzzle piece to a grand puzzle waiting to be solved little by little by her.
Her eyes found the vibrant blue sky while voices were carried to her ears by the soft wind but one voice stood out the most that was what almost sounded like children laughing if you listened hard enough but at the time she didn't paid any mind to it. As a thought, a question to be exact came to her mind Where am I? the questioned echoed though her mind as her eyes got lost in the endless blue sky. While in the distances you could almost hear the sound of footsteps from behind her as they come closer to where she stood.
((OOC I'm sorry it wasn't as good at the first one but it got deleted so I had to rewrite it. Again. Sorry. But how does it sound? Good? Bad? Anything I should add/delete/or something this in it? I would love feedback!))
As the electric wave began to leave she stood up as her red hair danced in the wind long and free as her eyes looked around taking in everything. The grass was multicolored with any and every color possible in patches and seem to be in no pattern that can be tell and what seems to be plants grew in in all shapes, sizes, colors, pattern and more. While few animals that appears to be crossbreeds of other animals were drinking from a creed filled with light purple water to most people they will think this is strange, foreign even, or that it's all an illusion that they made up in there minds. Bu not for her because she doesn't know what anything should really look like for the place she truly comes from or knows anything about her self for that matter. To her everything was new, brand new, knowing nothing of anything while she tried to learn from what she has seen as if everything is a small puzzle piece to a grand puzzle waiting to be solved little by little by her.
Her eyes found the vibrant blue sky while voices were carried to her ears by the soft wind but one voice stood out the most that was what almost sounded like children laughing if you listened hard enough but at the time she didn't paid any mind to it. As a thought, a question to be exact came to her mind Where am I? the questioned echoed though her mind as her eyes got lost in the endless blue sky. While in the distances you could almost hear the sound of footsteps from behind her as they come closer to where she stood.
((OOC I'm sorry it wasn't as good at the first one but it got deleted so I had to rewrite it. Again. Sorry. But how does it sound? Good? Bad? Anything I should add/delete/or something this in it? I would love feedback!))