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Sword Maiden's Journey
By Gamer5 (I.Ljubaj)
Prologue
Creation of the Maiden
"With the power of swords,
To destroy the swords
And the knowledge of making swords"
The moment of your birth was the fourth of Fauir (May) during the 671st years from the Arrival in Surya, but thanks to the powerful and definitely not totally controllable magic involved in your birth a few scenes related to your birth, but before you were born are present in your memories.
The memory of a young, strong man hearing the story of the Sword Princess, Im'Ain from an elf sage. The story speaks of an elf that, knowing a large army of Bear Beastkin is going to attack his country and home, prayed to the gods and they responded by offering him a trade, they would summon a Sword Princess for him but in return they would take two souls, of the person dearest to him and that of the best swordsman in his country, and three lives, his, of his most dear person and of the top swordsman of his country. The man whined and cried, pleading the gods to lower the price, but the gods remained firm. Finally the man accepted the offer after the Beastkin army destroyed a town and Im'Ain was brought to this world. The Sword Princess was capable of amazing fits of magic, had various abilities and wielded unparalleled sword skills. But the rest of the story of Im'Ain will wait for later as your memoires drift on…
You then recall the forging of the first magical sword by the now older but still recognizable man that listened to the elf tell the story of Im'Ain. Now after many tries he managed to find the right rituals, combination of materials and forging techniques to create his first magical sword. He starts the forging with an ordinary iron ingot and shaping it into a blade. Then he starts putting in various materials while doing precise adjustments with magic. This takes several hours and finally the finish of the process is adding a soul stone with a soul of a dragon in it, to the sword which is now a plain two-edged longsword. With strikes, magic and heat the soul stone and the soul of the dragon are imbedded in the first magic sword, whose name "Draika" pops into your memories. Happy at the result the man smiles and wonders how will his friends react to the news that he succeeded in forging a magical sword...
With that last image you move on in the memories, passing by the many scenes of magical swords being made, knowing that you will need them later on, but definitely not at this time. Finally you arrive at a memory much closer to the day of your birth, at least you feel like it is closer to your birth. In this memory the man, now much older and with white hair investigates something, but you can't tell what. The memory flies on, showing that he starts suspecting that his disciples are working behind his back and that one of the princes of the Tiante Kingdom is involved with them. As months fly by you can see the old man discover a conspiracy of prince Iyasil to take power in Tiante to start a bloody campaign of genocide and war on the non-human residents of Surya with the backing of the magical swords. With this discovered the old man confronts the prince, now a regent for the ill king, but is chased away and stripped of all power and influence in Tiante…
The next memory is even closer to your birth and shows the old man's preparation for your creation. Wait you can now recall his name Aldion. You observe him getting many rare ores, materials and gems in preparation to forge you. He even brings the bones and a feeling tells you that they are from his unborn daughter. Finally one day another man shows up, named Hain. He tells about finding out that Iyasil really did conspire to seize power and that he is closely working with Aldion's disciples to create new magical swords. Then Aldion tells Hain about his plan, to summon a Sword Princess, to forge you and give you the task of destroying all the magical swords and the knowledge of making them. After a bit of convincing Hain agrees to Aldion's plan, seeing the old man's conviction about this matter. So the two start forging you …
"Hammer roars on iron,
Steel, mithril, adamantite,
Orichalcum, gold, carbon
Copper, tin and magnetite.
Heat and strikes
Shape the metals
Rituals and memories
Change the materials.
Time marches
In days, weeks, months
And with many tries
Aldion a sword smiths
Magic gathers
The memories
Of that smile of hers
Bring forth cries
Aldion calls:
'Wake Elmolls
God of metals!
Wake Namals
God of magic!
Wake Kanic
God of crafting!
Aldion is calling!'
Magic spills in the blade
Hot and molten
The trade is made
Two lives are forsaken
With the bones of a child
And the lives of two heroes
With magic spiraling wild
A light erases all traces
Of Aldion, grand smith
Of Hain, sword master
Of an unborn daughter
And brings forth Nilya
The Sword Maiden"
---A thread to showcase my fourth significant novel project and the second one that is directly written on a computer.
I will regularly add chapters as new posts so if you are interested/like the prologue follow and wait for chapters to come out. Feedback is also welcomed as well as pointed out errors (English is not my native language so this would help).
Links
Link to other sites on which you can read and support the story.
Blog! The story now has a blog! - Sword Maiden's Journey
Google Docs, note you can comment to point out mistakes here! - Sword Maiden's Journey
Anonkun - Anonkun
Index
Prologue - Creation of the Maiden - Finished
Sword Zero
First Slash - Start of a Journey - Finished
Second Slash - Lord Mauti of Adbela - WIP
Third Slash - No working on it yet...
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