Right. So. Orson Scott Card, the guy who wrote the Ender's Game series among many other books, is teaching a class here at my university. I want to get into said class. Said class requires an application, including the submission of the first five hundred words of a short story for Mr. Card to review, and he will apparently select the students who get into his class based on these submissions. ... I only have one short story at the moment that I'd feel even remotely comfortable turning in. Constructive criticism badly needed. (Among other things, like, idk, sleep, god classes are killing me...) So. Yeah. Have at it.