Raze, The Correctional Facility for the Young and Powerful

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  1. "Say hello to the fresh meat!" A guy wearing a thin protective suit and a flashlight pointed at his face, said in the pitch black room, A couple humanly growls were heard and a couple of wolf whistles and cat calls. I wasn't alone though I was stuck here with my two accomplices.
    I'm not proud of what I did, but one of my biggest regrets was who i did it with: The perfect princess and the cocky teenage boy.
    We found each other and like the teenagers we are, thought we were the 3 in a million, unique, no one could possibly understand us. So we joined the "Calculus Club" for the sole reasons that no one was in that club plus it looked great on a resume. Not that resumes matter anymore we're in jail. Now were in a dark room with no windows the size of a football field the only light source being the few juveniles with the power of fire or human glow sticks.


    Hi! so this started out as a short story but I felt it would be a great RP so I have two semi-pre-made characters(i promise you have a lot of creative freedom with them) and the rest are free to be created from scratch by you.

    rules

    • No God Moding
    • No Mary and/or Gary Sues
    • Not a rule more of a preference appearances should be anime or drawn
    • There are multiple people with the same power but because there are only 10 characters try to be unique and if there are copycats than keep it at two people per power
    • While there can be romance, it is not a porno PG-13 please or take it else where
    • This did start out as a short story and there are pieces I wrote and very much enjoyed writing so if you need or want some inspiration I would be happy to share some pre-written scenes.
    • If you got this far put an emoji somewhere in your skelly
    • There will be fighting, be fair and fall every once in a while (makes for a better story)
    Spots

    Fresh Meat
    17-Alice Wanamaker- @Lazy_Not_Bored
    Audrie Bernstead-(Perfect Princess) - @growl
    -(The Cocky Boy)- @Kaz

    Prioners
    Guys
    18-Jonathan Dextrose- @Lazy_Not_Bored
    15-Dakota Winters- @Kitsune
    - @Unknowledge
    -

    Girls
    Cecilia Halloway- @Autumn
    Georgia Smith - @Cactush
    Claire-​
    Character Skelly
    Appearance:
    Name:
    Nickname: optional
    Age (13-18):
    Gender:
    Fresh Meat or Nah?:
    Superpower:
    Weakness:
    Personality:
    Likes:
    Dislikes:
    Bio (reason they're in jail): for non-fresh-meat​
    Audrie(The Perfect princess)


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    NAME:
    Audrie Bernstead

    NICKNAMES:
    She's just Audrie, but sometimes people called her "Princess Audrie" to tease her (though there were those who did it out of reverence). She pretends she doesn't care what you call her, but being called a princess flatters her.

    AGE:
    17

    GENDER:
    Female

    FRESH MEAT OR NAH?:
    Yea

    SUPERPOWER:
    Teleportation

    WEAKNESSES:
    Her max teleportation distance is a mile. Her power is good if she needs to get out of trouble quickly, but not if she wants to go somewhere far away. Audrie has to pinpoint the location in her head if she wants to get to that exact spot, so her power is unpredictable if she uses it without any knowledge of where she wants to go. She gets disoriented if she uses her power too quickly or suddenly, but teleporting doesn't wear her out no matter how often she uses it.

    PERSONALITY:
    With her soft blonde hair and those shining amber eyes, Audrie's sweet appearance tends to make others assume she is gentle or shy. Not quite. She isn't the 'it' girl (nor did she ever strive to be), she doesn't have a boyfriend, and she definitely isn't head cheerleader. She's the opposite actually. Audrie is both intelligent and driven, and her fighting spirit is one to be reckoned with. She was student body president of the senior class and a straight A student, of course. She's the kind of person who won't settle for less than the best, not if she can help it, and she's used to being the one people turn to for the final say. Audrie may come across as pushy but once you get past her perfectionism, she really is an effective and compassionate leader. She was the person everyone respected and came to when they had problems. Everyone thought she was going to go out in the world and dominate it. Until she ended up here.

    LIKES:
    + Helping others
    + Winning arguments
    + Productivity
    + Her friends

    DISLIKES:
    - Being ignored
    - Feeling useless
    - Immaturity
    - Cruelty

    BIO:
    Audrie actually comes from a poor family. There was a lot of pressure on her shoulders for her to do well in school and become successful. The guilt of leaving her parents on their own haunts her​
    Michael (Cocky Teenage boy)
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    -Name-
    Michael Rowe

    -Nickname-
    Mouse
    (Michael->Mickey->Mickey Mouse->Mouse)

    -Age-
    17

    -Gender-
    Male

    -Fresh Meat or Nah?-
    Yeah

    -Superpower-
    Fire Manipulation

    -Weakness-
    Michael will become weak and lightheaded if he overexerts himself with his power. While he maintains near perfect control, there's only so much he can do before collapsing.

    -Personality-
    Overtly cocky, sometimes lacking in common sense, and always flirting with something, Michael is a man's man. As the lead running back of his school's champion football team, he was well on his way towards a successful career before he became a convicted felon and lost it all. While certainly athletic in every sense of the word, Michael is no dumb jock without a care for others. His family and friends always come first.

    -Likes-
    +The Heat
    +Himself
    +Attention


    -Dislikes-
    -The Cold
    -Sweets
    -Annoyances


    -Other-
    With Michael having basically raised his younger brother, the two held an unbreakable bond. Compromising that relationship by leaving him is the one thing he most regrets.
    Alice(My Character)
    Appearance:
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    Name:
    Alice Wanamaker
    Nickname:
    Ali
    Age (13-18):
    (newly) 17
    Gender:
    Female
    Fresh Meat or Nah?:
    Yeah
    Super Power:
    She can read /search minds and make you think about that particular thing.
    Weakness:
    She can only read/search the past. She can't automatically know what you're thinking maybe an hour later but not the second you think it.
    Personality:
    Average, Alice believes she is average. Not in a self loathing type of way. She is average height, most common colored eyes and hair, She isn't peppy but she isn't depressed, She isn't dumb but she's not a prodigy. She can by witty and sarcastic but what teen isn't. Alice is her own happy medium. The only way she isn't Average is the fact that she has super powers.
    Likes:
    :heartbeat: Laughing
    :heartbeat:Indie/80's Music
    :heartbeat:Beautiful people

    Dislikes:
    :no: Awkwardness
    :no: School (as much as the next guy)
    :no: Being Bored

    Other(Bio):
    Only child of a single mother who she loves very much
    Jonathan (My Character)
    Appearance:
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    Name:
    Jonathan Dextrose
    Nickname:
    Jon, Dex, Johnny(to very few)
    Age (13-18):
    18
    Gender:
    Male
    Fresh Meat or Nah?:
    Nah
    Superpower:
    Can force pain onto anyone through his stare
    Weakness:
    It comes from his eyes so he can never share eye contact with someone without hurting them
    Personality:
    Some people think he's mute because very few have ever heard him speak. He almost never has a facial expression other than bored or unamused.
    Likes:
    :heartbeat:To be alone
    :heartbeat:To read

    Dislikes:
    :no:Hurting innocent people
    :no:His power

    Bio(reason they're in jail):
    When Jon was a little boy, his powers came in at the age of five. He looked at his grandma and she felt horrible pain. Little Jonathan was freaking out so he tried to help her and he looked at her for too long and she died from a heart attack. The doctors couldn't explain what brought on the heart attack. But when Jonathan told his mom he had killed his grandmother she sent him to Raze for "his own good" where he has spent the last 13 years. He has a large family but only his father and younger sister ever visit.

     
    #1 Lazy_Not_Bored, Mar 21, 2015
    Last edited: Apr 30, 2015
  2. May I reserve a Male Prisoner? I shall have the CS up soon~
     
  3. Of course PS I love your Dean Sig
     
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  4. | Name |
    Dakota Winters
    | Nickname |
    Koda
    | Age |
    (Newly) 15
    | Gender |
    Male
    | Fresh Meat or Nah? |
    Nah
    | Superpower |
    Ice/Snow Manipulation
    | Weakness |
    His emotions has a great effect on his powers. So, if his emotions are running rampant, his power will also be out of control. Because of his power, his body is a lot colder than the average human.
    | Personality |
    Dakota, no matter how old he gets, is a child at heart. He's amused easily and finds joy in the simplest things. He's rarely serious and can always be seen joking around with a bright smile on his face. There are times when Dakota can be a bit rebellious and sarcastic. He likes to push people's buttons until they're close to snapping, but it's all for fun. In his mind, the world is his playground and he has no cares or responsibilities to hold him down.
    | Likes |
    +Using his power
    +Having fun
    +Sleeping
    +Cold places

    | Dislikes |
    -Boredom
    -Losing control
    -Hot places
    -Being Awakened/Tired

    | Other(Bio) |
    Dakota has had his powers since he was born. At first, it was hard to control it. His parents didn't send him to Raze straight away, even though his father wanted to. For the first few years of his life, they tried their best to help him control it and hide it from the rest of the world. An incident happened when he was four that pushed his family to sending him away. Once, he was playing outside in the park next to their home with some other kids. One kid who was around his age kept teasing him about his hair and bullying him, excluding him from games and such. Dakota had gotten so upset that he froze the kid. Time seemed to stand still before everything kicked into high gear and went by in a blur. His parents snatched him up and raced home, trying to get as far away as possible. Knowing that the news would spread, they came to the decision to send him away, his mother's cheeks soaked with her tears and his father staring at him with a cold expression. So, they sent him away and left to find a new home in a new place. He's been in Raze since then, eleven years. His mother visits him every once in a while and is always writing him letters.
     
    #4 Kitsune, Mar 21, 2015
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  5. Could I have the spot for the Cocky Teenage Boy? c:
     
  6. Sure!
     
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    -Name-
    Michael Rowe

    -Nickname-
    Mouse
    (Michael->Mickey->Mickey Mouse->Mouse)

    -Age-
    17

    -Gender-
    Male

    -Fresh Meat or Nah?-
    Yeah

    -Superpower-
    Fire Manipulation

    -Weakness-
    Michael will become weak and lightheaded if he overexerts himself with his power. While he maintains near perfect control, there's only so much he can do before collapsing.

    -Personality-
    Overtly cocky, sometimes lacking in common sense, and always flirting with something, Michael is a man's man. As the lead running back of his school's champion football team, he was well on his way towards a successful career before he became a convicted felon and lost it all. While certainly athletic in every sense of the word, Michael is no dumb jock without a care for others. His family and friends always come first.

    -Likes-
    +The Heat
    +Himself
    +Attention

    -Dislikes-
    -The Cold
    -Sweets
    -Annoyances

    -Other-
    With Michael having basically raised his younger brother, the two held an unbreakable bond. Compromising that relationship by leaving him is the one thing he most regrets.


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    I hope that you don't mind that I reworded the information, I just felt more comfortable with it in my own writing style. c:





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  8. I love it!!!!
     
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  9. Ahah, thank you very much~ I haven't done a prison-related RP in a looong time. So. I think I'll enjoy this~
     
  10. I'd like to reserve a spot for male prisoner, I'll have a CS up soon!
     
  11. Can I be a prisoner? ^_^ Anyway, here's my CS~


    Appearance
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    ♥Name♥
    Charlotte Starling

    ♥Nickname♥
    Charlotte, Lottie

    ♥Age♥
    16 years old

    ♥Gender♥
    Female

    ♥Fresh Meat or Nah?♥
    Nah

    ♥Superpower♥
    Illusions. She is able to conjure various illusions using herself as a perimeter. Her illusions are capable cause her victims to see an image different than the one they should be seeing. In most cases, she creates an illusion in relation to the environment she and her victim are in, which causes the latter to view a distorted version of the setting, either minimally or severely. In relation, Charlotte can conjure physical illusions that range from non-moving objects, such as a wall, or moving objects, such as an human.

    ♥Weakness♥
    She has a wild imagination, causing her imaginations to take physical forms as illusions. Once this happens, her powers go beyond out of control

    ♥Personality♥
    Charlotte is carefree and playful, always having fun when playing games. She is also a very childish, always eating the sweets hidden in her pockets. She usually has a smile on her face and giggles a lot. Even though she's childish, she has a very mature side. She usually bottles up her emotions and when the jar is full; she'll release everything she felt and create havoc.

    ♥Likes♥
    ⇒classical music
    ⇒tea, pastries and sweets
    ⇒playing games
    ⇒having fun

    ♥Dislikes:♥
    ⇒hurting anyone unintentionally
    ⇒extremely dark places
    ⇒flying bugs and insects

    ♥Other (Bio):♥
    Charlotte once lived with her parents having the perfect life, but after her 13th birthday everything's changed.

    Ever since she was a child, she loves to read books. Her family owns a massive library which dated back since the beginning of time; handed down from generations to generations. She would read them from day to night and lock herself in the library. Her parents were strongly against this, saying that her head will be filled with nothing but dreams and fantasies. They banned her from entering and using the library and forbid her to let her imaginations run wild. But being the mischievous child she is, she would sneak in the library and disobey her parents, reading every book she can get her hands into.

    As she grew older and became a fine young lady, she learned a lot through reading and her imagination grew. Her mind fiilled with dreams and fantasies. On her 13th birthday, she tried to show her parents how incredible her knowledge is, how powerful imagination can be. She discovered how wonderful illusions are and showed it to them. Her 10th birthday should be full of fun and excitement, but it was filled with terror and regret.

    Unspeakable monsters and creatures pranced around the room as Charlotte stood there frozen, unable to control her imagination. That very moment, they knew; they knew that Charlotte read the forbidden book. Her parents screamed and screamed, driving them mad out of their skulls then killed themselves in front of her eyes saying "This is entirely your fault."

    The maids saw and heard everything. And at that very moment, on her 13th birthday, she was sent to Raze, The Correctional Facility for the young and powerful.

    :birthday:
     
    #12 DANAsaur, Mar 25, 2015
    Last edited: Mar 26, 2015
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  12. If she is "Fresh Meat" then she has to be the Perfect Princess and take the semi-filled skelly in the first post.

    ATTENTION: ANOUNCEMENT
    I added something to the skelly for non-fresh-meat it changes the 'other' category into the Bio(reason they're in jail)

    And if @Kitsune and @DANAsaur could re-read the rules that would be great

    @Unknowledge Your spot is reserves​
     
    #13 Lazy_Not_Bored, Mar 26, 2015
    Last edited: Mar 26, 2015
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  13. I don't want to be a princess >_< I'll edit the CS right away~
     
  14. @DANAsaur Not a princess but a popular nice girl at school
    And could you re-read ALL of the first post Thanks
     
    #15 Lazy_Not_Bored, Mar 26, 2015
    Last edited: Mar 26, 2015

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    Name:
    "Cecilia, just Cecilia. My last name doesn't really matter anymore."
    [Cecilia Halloway]

    Nickname:
    "Cecil, if Cecilia's too long."

    Age:
    "Thirteen. I'm turning fourteen in a few days, I think."

    Gender:
    "That's a funny question! I'm a girl, can't you see?"

    Fresh Meat or Nah?:
    "Not really. I've been here for..um...four years now."

    Superpower:
    Element of Wind

    Weakness:
    Using her ability in strong intensities causes her to lose breath and eventually suffocating her which in turn would lead her to collapse. Another would be fire, although it would depend on the fire's strength. If the flames match her wind in intensity then the flames will take over the wind but if weak enough, she could put out the fire.

    Personality:
    Cecilia is a bubbly girl albeit secretive and mysterious. Despite her constant smile and talkative self, it's difficult to truly know what she's thinking. She keeps her emotions, fears and troubles bottled up, showing only her happy, carefree side mostly because she doesn't trust others. She tends to be childish and playful, often teasing others. Even if she appears to have a lengthy patience, she's actually quite impatient and angers easily. She's kind and caring, wanting to care for others the way she never was but she's quite awkward at comforting someone with words so she mostly offers hugs. Although despite seeming to be overly-attached, she prefers to be alone. In her mind, people would just leave so why work hard for friendship that'll never last?

    Likes:
    + Flowers
    + Animals
    + Origami
    + Rain

    Dislikes:
    - Snow
    - Lightning
    - Spiders
    - Hide and Seek

    Bio:
    "My mother always told me that crimson red eyes were a bad omen...I guess she was right."
    Cecilia was born into a superstitious family who believed that she would bring bad luck. Although her family may not like the newborn but they weren't cruel. They cared for her by giving her what she needed to live, food, clothing, shelter and the like but they never welcomed or loved her like family. Well, her older brother did so she didn't mind being ostracized by the rest of her family. It was a peaceful life that led, staying only inside the house, being home schooled.

    That is, until she was seven and her power showed itself. She was only with her brother when her origami birds started to fly around her room due to the gusts of wind inside. Her brother was shocked, to say the least, but he didn't seem to reject her. Instead. He brought her out of the house for the first time and she was happy. They played a game, hide and seek. She hid but her brother never came to find her. With no way home, she lived in the streets, lucky enough to meet some kind people along the way. Her quiet and peaceful personality changed as she became a thief who stole what she needed to survive. Using her innocent appearance and ability, she managed to stay alive for two more years. Unfortunately, she was caught and sent to where she is now.

    [If I need to change anything then just say so and I shall edit:goodvibes:]
     
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  16. Appearance​

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    Name

    Georgia Smith​

    Nickname

    "I don't have one, people just call me names"​

    Age

    15​

    Gender

    Female​

    Fresh Meat or Nah?

    Nah​

    Superpower

    Control over Darkness, including melting into the shadows to hide and covering her body in darkness.​

    Weakness

    - Can't fully control her powers.
    - Continued use of her powers cause her to go slightly crazy and uncontrollable
    - Focused light/lightning renders her powers useless
    - Since the prison is so dark, she is under constant camera surveillance in case she becomes unstable.​

    Personality

    Georgia, at her core, is a very broken and timid girl, easily afraid by the slightest intimidation. She is afraid of her powers, and what would happen if she used them. On the outside, she is very distant, and scared of her inmates, hoping that they will leave her alone to keep herself under control. She avoids eye and touch contact with others to give them the impression that she hates them. But in truth she is very kind and only wants to live peacefully, and anyone that breaks her cold facade will likely end up as a new friend, a friend she will give every ounce of her loyalty and trust to, no matter what sort of person they are. Georgia doesn't dislike fighting, but will either hold back a fair amount or, worse case scenario, allow herself to lose so she doesn't lose control of her powers.​

    Likes

    - Puppets
    - Sunny Days
    - Loyal people
    - Jazz​

    Dislikes

    - Fire
    - Using her power on other people
    - Mean people
    - Thunder and Lightning
    - Being intimidated
    - Clowns

    BIO

    "Afraid of the dark? You should be."
    Life used to be normal, and it was so, so much fun. But that has changed, and I'll never forgive the bastard who got me locked up.
    Carnivals were meant to be places of fun and wonder, but let me ask you;
    "Are you afraid of clowns?"
    This one question changed Georgia's life forever. She was having fun with friends at a carnival, it was a blast, but then one of them thought it would be hilarious to get behind Georgia and scare her. The day was black from the rain-clouds, and the moment Georgia's shrieks of terror arose, something was carried along with it, what was meant to be a harmless joke turned into a murder scene, the colour red imprinted in the eyes of every witness.

    When the confusion, and the shadows, had cleared up, Witnesses told of a terrified, sobbing, and darkness covered Georgia was standing over her dead friend, killed by her own hands, a bloody hole where heart would be...
    "I-I didn't mean to..." Georgia's whimpering voice repeated this, for about five seconds before security came in, tasers out and firing, straight into her back.

    And then..nothing.

    Georgia had awoken in her cell in Raze, she was told later that she was deemed to dangerous to stand trial, and faced immediate sentencing to Raze, due to her supernatural power. For the next year she had trained herself to block people out, and to control this new demonic power that she held in her, and vowed never to lose control, so she would never kill anyone again.
     
    #17 Cactush, Apr 3, 2015
    Last edited: Apr 3, 2015
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  17. I'm surprised the 'princess' is still open. I'm here to (hopefully) claim her!

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    NAME:
    Audrie Bernstead

    NICKNAMES:
    She's just Audrie, but sometimes people called her "Princess Audrie" to tease her (though there were those who did it out of reverence). She pretends she doesn't care what you call her, but being called a princess flatters her.

    AGE:
    17

    GENDER:
    Female

    FRESH MEAT OR NAH?:
    Yea

    SUPERPOWER:
    Teleportation

    WEAKNESSES:
    Her max teleportation distance is a mile. Her power is good if she needs to get out of trouble quickly, but not if she wants to go somewhere far away. Audrie has to pinpoint the location in her head if she wants to get to that exact spot, so her power is unpredictable if she uses it without any knowledge of where she wants to go. She gets disoriented if she uses her power too quickly or suddenly, but teleporting doesn't wear her out no matter how often she uses it.

    PERSONALITY:
    With her soft blonde hair and those shining amber eyes, Audrie's sweet appearance tends to make others assume she is gentle or shy. Not quite. She isn't the 'it' girl (nor did she ever strive to be), she doesn't have a boyfriend, and she definitely isn't head cheerleader. She's the opposite actually. Audrie is both intelligent and driven, and her fighting spirit is one to be reckoned with. She was student body president of the senior class and a straight A student, of course. She's the kind of person who won't settle for less than the best, not if she can help it, and she's used to being the one people turn to for the final say. Audrie may come across as pushy but once you get past her perfectionism, she really is an effective and compassionate leader. She was the person everyone respected and came to when they had problems. Everyone thought she was going to go out in the world and dominate it. Until she ended up here.

    LIKES:
    + Helping others
    + Winning arguments
    + Productivity
    + Her friends


    DISLIKES:
    - Being ignored
    - Feeling useless
    - Immaturity
    - Cruelty


    BIO:
    Audrie actually comes from a poor family. There was a lot of pressure on her shoulders for her to do well in school and become successful. The guilt of leaving her parents on their own haunts her.

    OTHER:
    Does the crown at the top count as an emoji?
     
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  18. All skelly posted from before this post are accepted!!!!!!!!!
     
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  19. Awesome ^.^
     
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