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PureKor
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First of all I want to say that these poems, are all mine. Lucky me, have found them somewhere lost from Four years ago.
This is how I used to write poetry.
Writing is my best way of expressing myself.
Feel free to criticise.
Precious Feelings.
I tried to seek the good things in life,
But good things are so hard to find.
Unable to hold back the logging in my heart,
My words nestled up to you.
Yours eyes are like a mirror that reflects
The colours of these Precious Feelings.
With trembling fingers I pull you closer, so you won't slip away.
Let's go beyond to a place nobody knows
Through the heavy, smoky rain.
Let's walk together, You and Me, holding hands dearly...
Through the fierce rain sharing these precious feelings..
Your quiet, strong smile lights up the gloomy sky.
You have me something when I had Nothing..
The ability to believe in tomorrow, to dream
Hold on tight to my fingers, so I won't slip away
The warmth of our hands together and the sound of rain, spurred Us On..
Let's go away beyond to a place nobody knows
Sharing the precious feelings in silence,
To the end of the sweet, pouting rain.
Only Me.
Even comfort is covered in dust, soaked in a grey rain.
Dark, sad sometimes
Float among the ruins of the walls
Amid all the insanity, the world
Keeps turning.
A person lurks in the ridiculous darkness
Climbing to an invisible prize..
You can kill the past, but you can't wipe it away
Someday, hate will crush me
My life hangs in the balance
As I repeat the same old sins..
The water that quenches my thirst tastes of blood,
The sun goes down amid tears
Children try as best they can
To warm their cold bodies with their little hands..
This lying love is taking me over
Binding my helpless heart.
You can't take away the light in my eyes.
Make a light in this bottomless night,
I can't throw away my endless wish..
Fire an arrow in this bottomless night.
About four years ago, yes my vocabulary was Beyond what it is right now. More rich and had plenty things going on, so I always used to write. No Rhyme as you can tell..
This is how I used to write poetry.
Writing is my best way of expressing myself.
Feel free to criticise.
Precious Feelings.
I tried to seek the good things in life,
But good things are so hard to find.
Unable to hold back the logging in my heart,
My words nestled up to you.
Yours eyes are like a mirror that reflects
The colours of these Precious Feelings.
With trembling fingers I pull you closer, so you won't slip away.
Let's go beyond to a place nobody knows
Through the heavy, smoky rain.
Let's walk together, You and Me, holding hands dearly...
Through the fierce rain sharing these precious feelings..
Your quiet, strong smile lights up the gloomy sky.
You have me something when I had Nothing..
The ability to believe in tomorrow, to dream
Hold on tight to my fingers, so I won't slip away
The warmth of our hands together and the sound of rain, spurred Us On..
Let's go away beyond to a place nobody knows
Sharing the precious feelings in silence,
To the end of the sweet, pouting rain.
Only Me.
Even comfort is covered in dust, soaked in a grey rain.
Dark, sad sometimes
Float among the ruins of the walls
Amid all the insanity, the world
Keeps turning.
A person lurks in the ridiculous darkness
Climbing to an invisible prize..
You can kill the past, but you can't wipe it away
Someday, hate will crush me
My life hangs in the balance
As I repeat the same old sins..
The water that quenches my thirst tastes of blood,
The sun goes down amid tears
Children try as best they can
To warm their cold bodies with their little hands..
This lying love is taking me over
Binding my helpless heart.
You can't take away the light in my eyes.
Make a light in this bottomless night,
I can't throw away my endless wish..
Fire an arrow in this bottomless night.
About four years ago, yes my vocabulary was Beyond what it is right now. More rich and had plenty things going on, so I always used to write. No Rhyme as you can tell..
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