MISC #3 Voting Thread: The Warrior

[DimitriMaddox]

Thanks everyone for the critiques on mine! "The Wanderer Program" was the first thing I've written in a long time, so it was extremely rushed and I wish I would have checked through it before submitting. I promise the next one will be better. *chuckle*

 

[PoetLore]

Thank you so much for your reviews! I know I left my story Gwynn, totally unfinished, and that was a total whoosh of time flying by, where I started and then had no time to finish. (Hence why I missed a few typos.)

I think you all were actually quite generous in your comments, since I feel like this is the middle of a much larger story, as Kitti mentioned why was she fighting and bloody, why to the Fairies feel they need a warrior, and many other issues that would ahve occurred both before and after the inspiration image.

Still, it was fun. As always, I am trying to improve and this is the best way to accomplish that.

THANKS!!