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BabyKimu
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I would really appreciate criticism. :hungry: Comment, please!
Today is the day I cast away
All the fears I've lived by.
Side by side we slowly walked
to the end of the earth and back.
My hand was held in theirs
A Vise-Grip to compare
Locked in place without a trace
Of strength left in the air.
My days were as dark as night,
Though to them I seemed alright.
My smile was bright,
My eyes were dim,
My thoughts stayed on replay of a day, very grim.
My blood was being burned.
My trust was being torn.
My very skin was darkening
From the bruises that I had worn.
My second skin was candy coated,
With the face I couldn't show.
With love and a family
With laughs and a dream
I'd thought it was one of God's nasty schemes.
To keep me, locked in this nightmare
To punish me, for thinking
To rinse me, clean of opinions
To revive me, to hear the lies.
I'd ask him for forgiveness
I'd receive an answer, not
My life was spirling downwards
My mind was beginning to rot
My heart was turning cold
My mind was giving away
My love was 3 worlds too far
My faith was fading away.
Answer my cries, if someone is there up above
Remove all these lies, replace them with love!
Send me a hero to hold and to kiss
Let there be power to help me dismiss
The past that has gone and will not return
My time is right now and its now that I learn
How to love and too feel and to cherish my life
How to push through the bad with terrible strife.
Today I am loved, held, and caressed.
I now believe I am truely blessed.
Today is the day I cast away
All the fears I've lived by.
Side by side we slowly walked
to the end of the earth and back.
My hand was held in theirs
A Vise-Grip to compare
Locked in place without a trace
Of strength left in the air.
My days were as dark as night,
Though to them I seemed alright.
My smile was bright,
My eyes were dim,
My thoughts stayed on replay of a day, very grim.
My blood was being burned.
My trust was being torn.
My very skin was darkening
From the bruises that I had worn.
My second skin was candy coated,
With the face I couldn't show.
With love and a family
With laughs and a dream
I'd thought it was one of God's nasty schemes.
To keep me, locked in this nightmare
To punish me, for thinking
To rinse me, clean of opinions
To revive me, to hear the lies.
I'd ask him for forgiveness
I'd receive an answer, not
My life was spirling downwards
My mind was beginning to rot
My heart was turning cold
My mind was giving away
My love was 3 worlds too far
My faith was fading away.
Answer my cries, if someone is there up above
Remove all these lies, replace them with love!
Send me a hero to hold and to kiss
Let there be power to help me dismiss
The past that has gone and will not return
My time is right now and its now that I learn
How to love and too feel and to cherish my life
How to push through the bad with terrible strife.
Today I am loved, held, and caressed.
I now believe I am truely blessed.